@Kerbasi ~ Wonders of a Certain Dance ~ ____________________________________ Here, the winds come bitingly harsh like a winter's sneeze; There, the winds come warm, just a nice summer breeze; Here, the land is filled with the sound of rustling leaves; There, the land is filled with rooster shrieks. Your waves lap against your shores, cooling the hot sand. My leaves turn gold and orange, dead by the weather's hand. There are thousands of miles between us; A thousand miles and half a world away; You live in the future - a life yet defined; And I come with my fate just a step behind; I have yet to see you in person; But you have already taken my very breath; And now I suffocate, drowning in your absence; Only to gain new life when I hear your laugh; You are the force that drives me forward; I am the force that keeps you from turning back; You are the light that has no borders; And I am the feeling after a midnight snack; There is no one like you, Just as I'd like to believe it's the same for me; And even if there were others, You are the only one that matters to me; When we speak, our talks are filled with a push or a pull; You try to test me, and I you; When we don't speak, there is comfort in the silence; I know you are there, and I know you feel it too; Life; Strife; Hope; Stance; Wonders of a Certain Dance; ____________________________________________ Even though @Lonelycity dared me to make a poem to you, I had fun doing it. I hope you liked it too.
Damn that was good!!! you went for the pre modern rhyming type poem structure which really fit the theme!!
*blushes* I couldn't stop smiling while reading this tbh (⺣◡⺣)♡* And I would say a lot more things in this thread, but I prefer to tell you in private. >///< *kisses Mitch's cheek* I really LOLed at this part xD inside jokes are the best hahaha *hugs*
I was going to say "cool poem bro" but then I noticed that I was grinning like an idiot in Springtime... Freakin' fluffiness Ps: You normies should just explode.
Nice poem. It has facts and rhymes. I enjoyed the format and the feeling of it, even if I don't understand poetic structuring.
That was a nice poem... @J-Mitch... Except I totally forgot about the dare I gave you.... Lolz Now I feel inspired to write one....