Hmm I don't know why so many people didn't like the beginning of The void wolf. I really liked it! Good job man!
I really enjoyed the way he talked with the wolf after his transformation (although you could polish it a bit more that "whelp is kinda strange). Before that he was afraid of the wolf afterwards he spoke as if he forsook his fear. And instead became someone worthy of being feared(Ira). Never to feel fear again. Anyway this is my impression of the first chapter.
Tried reading the recomendation. Read prologue and chapter 1 and I could find many inconsistencies so sorry but I'm not gonna read it further. I can elobrate if you wish.
