yeah weekend. it's cold and wet outside so i don't really want to do anything today. i'll probably just rug up and play some games or something. you going to be busy?
No, I also had it renamed. It's still handy to have around in case I decide that I want to switch back.
Yeah, wont give up for sure, it's just how I see it I guess. It's something that I do because I enjoy so if I'm not feeling like it, I don't really want to do it. I don't want to turn it into a chore. As long as I eventually get back, it's ok. It's not going anywhere. Best of luck to you :)
I tried to do it as a chore even if my mind isn't up to it. There was someone -- could be Stephen King -- who said to try writing once a day. Although I do admit that there are times when I'm just facing my screen without writing anything lol. Good luck to you too, dude.
Only I can hug Aici! http://68.media.tumblr.com/d7018adfe80b3add1ed5420ed317dfb3/tumblr_inline_n9gom6NuJ61s5d56z.jpg
I appreciate all feedback, and this is my first real writing experience, so I am fully cognisant that I'll have many flaws to work on. It'll help more if you could be specific, but I'll try to work with what I have.
I don't want to sound too bad but I don't think I can really be more specific because it's all the same. I could point to anywhere. It's just the writing style in general that is awkward for me. I've gone through most of your writing and the language itself is good but the flow is just awkward.
I've made progress. http://royalroadl.com/fiction/10925 It's more up to date than on NU, because editing is more convenient there. Check it out will you? (Chapter 1 will eventually get rewritten).
