Aicila

Dont you have something better to do with your life?

its only common courtesy to welcome new people to nuf

but it's weekend yes?

what are you going to do today?

yeah weekend.

it's cold and wet outside so i don't really want to do anything today. i'll probably just rug up and play some games or something.

you going to be busy?

nai~ will be resting today.
will also probably play some games :)

Welcome

Welcome

D:

ty

Happy bday

Happy birthday!

Tony deleted the old Aicilia account?
hmm now there won't be 11 anymore^^

No, I also had it renamed. It's still handy to have around in case I decide that I want to switch back.

Ah so it just changed I was going to ask about that

Hihi. Yeah, something like that. Busy seems to make that happen.

But dude, never give up on it. I won't and I hope I retain this mindset until I die.

Yeah, wont give up for sure, it's just how I see it I guess. It's something that I do because I enjoy so if I'm not feeling like it, I don't really want to do it. I don't want to turn it into a chore. As long as I eventually get back, it's ok. It's not going anywhere.

Best of luck to you :)

I tried to do it as a chore even if my mind isn't up to it. There was someone -- could be Stephen King -- who said to try writing once a day. Although I do admit that there are times when I'm just facing my screen without writing anything lol.

Good luck to you too, dude.

..yeah, that's borderline creepy.

No, I don't thanks.

Only I can hug Aici! http://68.media.tumblr.com/d7018adfe80b3add1ed5420ed317dfb3/tumblr_inline_n9gom6NuJ61s5d56z.jpg

Pervert~!

Sliding on this slippery slope is forbidden!

kk

I'll jump into them then \o/

I appreciate all feedback, and this is my first real writing experience, so I am fully cognisant that I'll have many flaws to work on. It'll help more if you could be specific, but I'll try to work with what I have.

I don't want to sound too bad but I don't think I can really be more specific because it's all the same. I could point to anywhere. It's just the writing style in general that is awkward for me. I've gone through most of your writing and the language itself is good but the flow is just awkward.

I'll see what I can do.

I've made progress. http://royalroadl.com/fiction/10925

It's more up to date than on NU, because editing is more convenient there. Check it out will you? (Chapter 1 will eventually get rewritten).

ok

I welcome all feedback.

t!fishy

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I'm sorry I had no idea what to say to verify my discord. I promise I'll try to use more than a brain cell next time I commit to a witty remark.

Two cells would be fantastic :D