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Share your original poems and be a part of the Immortal Poet Society Oct 11, 2017

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    1. Reindeer
      Reindeer
      Of 7 billion people
      There is no one just like you

      Meeting you is nothing short
      Of a dream becoming true

      There is nothing more I wish
      Than to have you by my side

      If it takes a thousand years
      A thousand years then I shall bide
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      2. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        ^_^ Hehehe, don't Worry, you'll get better as you go.
        Jul 12, 2017
      3. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        If I had to make one (constructive) suggestion,
        I'd bring all 4 stanzas into 2 though, It flows a little better.
        Jul 13, 2017
      4. Reindeer
        Reindeer
        It was originally 2 stanzas but I thought the lines were too long.
        Jul 13, 2017
    2. Nahrenne
      Nahrenne
      When we look Past Ourselves,
      We see Brightness, Love and Hope..
      When we look In Ourselves,
      We see Darkness, Pain, Despair...
      When we meet our Other Half,
      We are both Reflected on Each Other...
      On our Own, we are Blind,
      Together, we See...
      We were Not meant to be Alone,
      Our Hearts, Not to be set in Stone...
      We were meant to be With Others,
      Supporting one another, as Lovers...

      X
      1. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        ^_^ it was good,

        glad to have more people here.
        Jul 12, 2017
      2. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        Make sure to post more stuff later,
        You're a good writer and this place needs more stuff.
        Jul 12, 2017
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    3. Land Of Tea
      Land Of Tea
      Thy heart that was frozen in ice
      Felt a warmth that it did not dislike
      Afraid of the pain it was
      After the shattering and the time used to piece it self back
      Chains bounds the heart
      Grounding it to logic and saying that love is just a chemical reaction
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      2. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        *clap clap clap* And here I though I was going to be the only one here for awhile!
        Jul 12, 2017
      3. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        But really. Its a good feeling behind it. Cheers! gl
        Jul 12, 2017
      4. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        If I had to make one (constructive) suggestion,
        I'd say to watch the flow of each line. It'll vary depending on the tempo, but some words just flow better. for example, your first I would suggest something like;

        thy heart was frozen deep in ice
        then felt a warmth it could not dislike

        You want it to roll off the tounge and not cause it to stumble over the words.
        Jul 13, 2017
    4. Osamaru
      Osamaru
      .
      Wings
      -------------------
      I'll tell the story of a bird,
      who wished to fly,
      to stretch his wings
      and touch the sky
      to kiss the Sun,
      as clouds pass by
      yet all he could do,
      was but watch and sigh

      His wings were broken
      and his feathers torn
      His mind was weary
      and his body worn
      as the song he sung
      hid the scars he bore,
      a coward’s soul,
      a heart forlorn.
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      2. Hotato
        Hotato
        But the song he song?
        Jul 8, 2017
      3. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        surprised grammerly didn't catch that *hi5*
        Jul 8, 2017
      4. Hotato
        Hotato
        You should reread it <.<
        Jul 8, 2017
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    5. Osamaru
      Osamaru
      Ok! Last one for now! I promise lol, Its a short one.

      The Illusion of Distance
      -----------------------------------
      Distance is an illusion, born of the Heart
      Some surrounded by others, yet set apart.
      Some torn from loved ones, by the land, sea and time,
      Yet together always in each other's mind.
      1. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        .
        Distance can be a poison, a barb upon the Soul.
        Allowed to run it's course, it will take a heavy Toll.
        Yet we must remember, we're not bound by time or space.
        When we think of those we love, Home is not just a place.
        Jul 6, 2017
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      2. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        .
        Don't fall for the lies of Distance, that old twisted, sneaky snake
        In the end I'll stay beside you, what ever may come of Fate.
        Distance is an illusion, and although we may separate.
        No matter the miles between us, we are never far away
        Jul 6, 2017
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    6. Osamaru
      Osamaru
      .
      Lock and Key
      -------------------
      The young man asked his Master, "Why do you struggle on?"
      "What drives you to keep going, throughout the night to dawn?"
      The old master simply smiled, and gently pat his Head.
      Then with a sad tear in his eye, he looked down and said.
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      2. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        .
        "Every Soul and every Life, are bound by Chains of Fate.
        every man will one day feel their great and heavy Weight.
        some will drag the chains behind, caught on every stone.
        some will seek to hold them, to choose their will alone."
        Jul 6, 2017
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      3. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        .
        "yet no matter what we try, we are all slaves to Fate's sway.
        but my child, don't you tremble, for there is another way.
        To every chain there's a lock, and to each lock, a Key.
        and when one grabs the Keys of Fate, then is he Free.
        Jul 6, 2017
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      4. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        .
        The young man looked up with a questioning gaze, "but where can these keys be found?"
        The old master grinned and he stood up straight, then leaned his cane on the ground.
        "The Keys of Fate have been here the whole time", he said as he touched his Heart.
        "But don't think the journey ends, with the keys in hand. That is just the start."
        Jul 6, 2017
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    7. Osamaru
      Osamaru
      This one is a little Rougher, but I made for Mother's Day, so don't be to harsh >_<

      Rules
      --------------
      When I was but a little boy,
      My favorite word was "Why?"
      I thought I was a sneaky snake.
      No method I would not try.

      I screamed, I yelled, and did what I could,
      to earn that smack upside the head.
      And when I had at last simmered down.
      She would just sent me off to bed.
      1. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        .
        For years in my old crooked heart,
        She was nothing but a witch
        She had though herself a queen
        when she was always just a *cough-cough-cough*!
        Jul 6, 2017
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      2. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        .
        but when at last the time had come
        to strike out on my own
        I was lost without a clue,
        and longing for my home.

        And so after years of pain, I now
        count myself among the fools
        It was only at the end I learned,
        There is reason for the rules.
        Jul 6, 2017
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    8. Osamaru
      Osamaru
      .
      Tunnel Vision
      ---------------------
      I once was told,
      for one to hold
      The Stars within your hands.

      it takes the will,
      to climb the hill,
      and reach for distant lands.

      and when at last
      my journey passed
      I looked the way I came

      I shook in fear,
      and wept a tear.
      I could not hide my shame

      along the way
      I did not stray
      My will was straight and true.
      1. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        .
        yet in the end,
        I say my friend,
        I could not see the clue

        The truth was bare
        I'd missed it there,
        That Star along the way

        I could but weep
        and stomp my feet.
        I did not think to stay!

        and in my haste
        I missed the place
        I'd come to see I sought

        My heart was pained
        for where I aimed
        was not the place I thought!
        Jul 6, 2017
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    9. Osamaru
      Osamaru
      .
      Chances
      -------------
      Some times I wonder,
      About those I've left behind.
      and all the stories,
      we had yet to bring to life.

      As I sit here now,
      I can't help but think, "what if?"
      I'd taken that chance,
      not been stubborn and so stiff?
      1. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        .
        But time is cruel
        and the choices that we make,
        will not come again
        for as from a dream, we'll wake

        and see the scars left
        from our fear and stubbornness
        of the chances wasted,
        blown away like morning mist.

        so If I could give
        but this one piece of advice
        it would be just this
        don't let your chance slip by
        Jul 6, 2017
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    10. Osamaru
      Osamaru
      This is cool, here one of mine.

      Power of Words:
      --------------------------
      Life is a battle,
      and Words are our Blade.
      with each utterance
      A price will be paid

      some will be in tears
      and others by blood
      some will break a heart
      or stain it with mud
      1. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        .
        They say sticks and stone
        are what we should fear
        that words are just words
        to ignore the jeer

        But how we forget
        a heart that was stirred
        by the cutting blade,
        of a hateful word.

        so do be careful
        as you live your day
        that you don't regret
        the words that you say
        Jul 6, 2017
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    11. kursys
      kursys
      All around me
      In the air hangs a wreath
      Of blackest bile, and smoke
      That only I can see

      I open up my heart
      And let it all in
      And it kills all my love
      And hope for everyone

      And it hasn't been easy on you
      I know that more than most
      I am born to be alone
      I am just some lonely ghost
      1. kursys
        kursys
        All around us
        Hangs an air of darkest doom
        And it flows out my lungs
        And slowly fills the room

        I open up my heart
        And stick my fingers in
        But you will never want
        What I have to give
        Jul 6, 2017
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    12. Asteodia
      Asteodia
      Seeking the unknown
      Seeking the unseen
      Seeking, just seeking
      For the sake of being

      Consuming too much
      Just to prove a point
      Consuming too much
      Afraid to get cut

      Light is there
      Even when we don't seek
      Trying too hard
      Is for the weak

      Trust in yourself
      Don't feel that you need
      To please others eyes

      For you can seek what you want to seek
    13. Incarneous
      Incarneous
      Seven strikes upon a wall,
      Five fingers brush against snow.
      Waiting ten weeks for your call,
      Six days, my hand to your toe.

      A love poem about numbers.
      A moment before slumber.
    14. Shem
      Shem
      You called me Lewd
      Even linked the post for the proof.
      You shipped me with guys
      And you thought that it was nice

      I told you to stop
      Cause I don't like the way you're pushing
      But you pretended like a daft!
      And kept on shitting!
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      2. Shem
        Shem
        You even commented on it. Lmao.
        Jul 12, 2017
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      3. Raizhee
        Raizhee
        *rolls eyes until white comes*
        Jul 12, 2017
      4. Raizhee
        Raizhee
        Now it's truly revived
        Jul 12, 2017
    15. Deleted member 41274
      Deleted member 41274
      Sometimes I am out of my mind.
      I do things that don't make sense,
      I speak words which hold no meaning.

      When I look back, I feel regret.
      When I see what I did,
      I can only shake my head.

      I feel bad about that.
      And I feel that it's my fault.
      Maybe it's entirely my fault.
      1. Deleted member 41274
        Deleted member 41274
        Somtimes I am too active, sometimes I talk too much,
        because I don't know how annoying I am.

        Now I annoyed myself. Yet, there are upsides.
        I have lost what was not worth it.
        Jun 18, 2017
    16. Land Of Tea
      Land Of Tea
      We are all novels and writers
      we write the story of our life
      sometimes some novels connect together
      some end too early, some on a cliffhanger
      some whisper of hope and beauty
      some of darkness and greed

      people walk into a page of our life
      some stay while some have damaged the novel in some way
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      2. Land Of Tea
        Land Of Tea
        some authors starts pretending
        trying to please the reader
        some start becoming artificial
        masking themselves
        it was impossible to please every reader anyways
        why try when reaching the skies is easier
        Jun 18, 2017
      3. Land Of Tea
        Land Of Tea
        this novel may be slightly damaged, having gloomy parts and not being able to please you but it only has 17 chapters who know what may happen in the future chapters it may be bright and pleasing to the eye so let's continue writing.
        Jun 18, 2017
      4. Lonelycity
        Lonelycity
        comparing life to a book, the comparison felt fresh. it's a good one!!
        Jun 22, 2017
    17. Lonelycity
      Lonelycity
      I see a fresh new page and a fresh new start....
      Hi did we ever meet ??
      coz I am sure you have been shadowing me
      like a certain Cheshire Cat.....

      Two headed and witty.....
      Never cross it's path
      Else you'll get reckt and tossed
      Like a certain @Dummy00001 had
      Oh did I mention she has the backing
      Of the last boss @Parth37955 ?
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      2. Lonelycity
        Lonelycity
        NOTES: I always thought I never wrote a poem on other people's profiles but today I remembered I did write a few... One at pyoo's too(gotta look it up)
        this poem was written for @Arcturus and it's still untitled. Someday I will title it.
        Man, it took me time to dig this up.
        Jun 18, 2017
      3. Lonelycity
      4. Pyoo
        Pyoo
        on mine? whew good luck with tht~
        Jun 18, 2017
    18. Sylvie
      Sylvie
      Pretend that I smile.
      When its hurt inside.
      When they think I am laughing,
      Even though I'm not.

      "Smile"they say.
      I cant
      Pretend to be happy.
      Why?
      At least it wont kill you.

      I will try to pretend.
      That I'm happy.
      That I don't feel bad.
      That I don't feel anything at all.

      They just left me there.
      Think I can do it on my own,
      But they dont know that I
      Just pretend to be okay.
    19. Shem
      Shem
      Something inside me break
      And I felt the familiar ache
      The lost regretful feeling
      That meant everything

      Broken promises.
      Empty words.
      Wasted efforts.
      Silent cries.

      I took a deep breath
      And I could feel my heart hurt
      Not because I was running
      But because I was breaking

      Breaking into pieces
      Like those shattered glasses
      Losing myself and nowhere to be found
      While trying to find the missing part on the ground.
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      2. Raneday
        Raneday
        tl;dr: Shem's shoutout that she lost the thing called sanity
        Jun 17, 2017
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      3. Shem
        Shem
        I'm not sane though <.<
        Jun 17, 2017
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      4. Osamaru
        Osamaru
        *pats @Shem* Like I said, simple words, but paints a good picture.
        Aug 26, 2017
    20. Lonelycity
      Lonelycity
      A city stands alone in a lawless country..
      A country ruled by an evil king
      It acts as THE sole sentry
      against the evil curses and fires
      (of the notorious dires)

      The infuriated ruler
      ordered his followers
      "I want THE CITY DOWN!!"
      He said with a visible frown.
      Teach them RADIANTS a lesson
      that they fear my every transgression!!
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      2. Lonelycity
        Lonelycity
        All we need is to spread an open secret
        that the lonelycity is a hidden pirate...
        For, my king, poison is a silent killer.
        and I, the awesome fake bard @Pyoo,
        will poison and CRIPPLE their minds!!!

        LOOK on my LIEGE as we LEVEL n CRUSH this LONELY LONELY CITY.
        SHAMED n SCORNED by the SAME ppl it SOUGHT to SAVE!!
        my king, this birdie bard feels a thrill run down her spine~~
        Jun 17, 2017
      3. Lonelycity
      4. Lonelycity
        Lonelycity
        done. and no title yet..
        Jun 17, 2017
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