Is that so? I think I just read for the enjoyment, rather than to see the thought processes, but to each their own I guess.
Cool! XD Yesss!! Their past experiences and beliefs are also reflective in that Did you read them all? There's so many @-@
Nope not yet~ I have read the first half I think. Will read the rest later today. There are a lot but seeing the improvement is nice \o/
Oh you switched the colours? Super nice, I've never tried this concept before, but merging 2 poems to one is always an interesting one *nodnod* I would love to do that but damn there are a lot Have you seen @Poetic Hall of Reflection ? And the some people like @Risus and @Accidentally poem on their own profile. some like @Lonelycity poem in other people's profile (I forgot who his partner was) I mostly do this too cause there's simply too much But the poems that make you think are nice~ I like those more I guess, makes you pause and ponder~ and think of their beliefs and thought process~ XD that's a nice poem but WHOAAA you read them all!? *hugs* thank youuuu You're the second person I know of to do so XD Hm~? Improved in what way~? What did you like most and why~? Which came to you (at you?) most~? Whoa >/////< Thank youuu! You honestly just made my day~! So you write poems now?~ Haha no, no, different backgrounds and spheres of mind (as in you're exposed to different things from me and what the poem convey may be lost on you), which were they? Limericks are fun~ Tho I free verse most of the time XD WHOA~ Tell me what you think of them as a whole and individually \o/
Hahaha~ Yeah I did~ @seven taught me some color codes to make it better~ ^^ Thank you~ >W< It's was a sudden idea that came up~ But I think it's something nice~ A bit hard but nice ~ XD Hehehe~ Pyoo always inspire new poets~ As your poems are nice and interesting~♥
ayee Oh since ur startong to poem more, u should rly consider making ur own pool Oh i never rly heard ur take on my poems, have i? Like the whole of it Totally not forcing u to read everything~
hahaa~ I will start to consider it~ ^^ It will be a bit difficult to find the older ones~ >w< hahaha~ you haven't XD hahaha~ okay~ ^^)7 I will read them all~ and tell you my take on them~ *wink*
There are a lot, we just need more time lol Oh thanks for that Pyoo, I will check out those profiles and read their poems when I have time~ Alright o7 I will tell you when I eventually finish them all~ \o/
New Wars with @BlancFrost and @Carm Spoiler: BlancFrost Series Spoiler: Blanc: Sweet Sweet Don't turn around, Let me look at your back. It is more reassuring, Then the smirk you just had. I can do this myself, Without any help. One step, Two steps, Crash. I hold in the cry, But you turn at my gasp. Watching me fondly, Before coming back. Reaching out and giving me a hand, I take it eagerly, Blushing red with shame. My first steps were wobbly, You are to blame. Spoiler: Lucky: Dirt Dirt A misty morning Lingering dew Freshening the earth Sticking closely Giving life to the ground A glistening leaf Rustling under the sun Shading the earth Rooting firmly A life born from the ground A joyous deer Leaping among the grass Tending the earth Playing carelessly Its life upon the ground A wise man Sitting on tender soil Gazing the earth Its everlasting company Life that'd return to the ground Spoiler: Blanc: Winds of Change Winds of Change Passing by each other, Like strangers. Not glancing, Not acknowledging. Change was too sudden, As the storm rolls in. Splattering across the sidewalk, Not letting anyone in. Sun shines through, When it has a chance. But the storm rages on, Holding its stance. She comes in, Sweeping across the clouds. All is now well, Peace at last. Lucky: The morning sun scatters through my room, I would like to hear wind chimes from you. Spoiler: Carm Series 2 Spoiler: Carm: Liar Liar Deceit, A mistruth to oneself, As they continue to look away, Run away, From reality, Continuing to make delusions, Create illusions, And lie. Spoiler: Lucky: Running Out of Time Running Out of Time Rushing past Leaping fast The rabbit ran As fast as it can Oh no! It held tightly its watch Running out of breaths to catch On this important day its late Hope it won't lead to bad fate Spoiler: Carm: Unnatural Tidiness Unnatural Tidiness Sweep left, Sweep right, Sweep left, Sweep right, A speck of dust shall not escape my eyes, A cleanliness that will not be undermined, My broom will sweep, And those dirty shall weep, As cleanliness engulfs them, And order is restored, Sweep left, Sweep right, Sweep left, Sweep right. Spoiler: Lucky: Why do birds fly Why do birds fly Dance along the wind Shift from breeze to breeze Run through the sky Feel the air rush by Live like a bird should Conquring the skies Crossing the seas Soaring through the land Freely, without limits Fly like a bird should Spoiler: Carm: Whispers of the night Whispers of the night The wind caresses the land, Following it a silent melody, Overhead the moon shines bright, As you walk across the sand, The gentle echoes of the breeze come forth, As the whispers of the night. Lucky: Bliss
Oohhh~ I guess so~ imagery eh~? *nodnod* I guess cause at the beginning I poem to poem, but now there are intentions or stories or something behind the poems? Hm~? you're the second to comment on my metaphors~ XD welp~ they won't be a poet too that way XD Oh~! Commitment and Dreams is something I never expected to have a mention. Cause it's like a collection of shorts and it's kinda all over the place (?) Yea I gues it's related So you like the theme of A River Flows the most~? (Since it's continued in Commitment and Dreams? iirc?) Why so~? yay thanks~ Red was made with self harm in mind. The exhilirating cuts and the death in red. Tainted, well it's about someone who cares, empathizes, or dramatizes about someone else's hurt, enough for the person hurt to have to be the one acting strong for the other person. Something like that. I'm the one tained but you're the one hurt. I'm the one who should be crying yet I can't. Cause you won't let me. Dead Crypt.. Guess that's an inside, context relevant joke. It's on discord tho, so there's no link to the context. Ooo~ You have some poems here~? Strict stress schemes? Hahaha~~ I don't like it rhyming (unless I'm feeling like having fun (?)) Tho even as I free verse, I find it fun to stick to some patterns and self-imposed rules
OMG I have even forgotten I wrote something like that XD Thank youuu! Well the river is a reference (metaphor?) to life anyway (most specifically time), life goes on after all~ Ah your words for it are nice~ But yes that was my thoughts as I wrote it~ <3 i'm so happy you chose this ^^ My favourite ones are I guess this and Charmed (Old Man) Hmm? Those count don't they? After all I started here, as an amateur poem in a random profile post~ XD that's a fun poem~! haha good luck if you end up doing that~ Ooohhh sometimes i have ideas I want to explore and put that in draft but those usually get forgotten lol and the feeling is lost so i like poeming on the moment more~ also means I get inconsistent in terms of frequency when the inspiration hits, it hits hard after all~, then just exploring the words i like more or the message i want to show more~ hahahaha i'll look forward to them! I always like it if and when more people poem here ^^
VIVA UPDATES! Spoiler: Post # 12 (Update 18 Jun) Spoiler: Change (source, replies to Peony) Must the change be of heartache? You'll reminiscent of the old times A nostalgic feeling with soft smiles Since your change makes you grin As you tackle the world with gritted teeth And a laugh to fill the void - - - Sing your hope and dreams The bubbles doesn't come from outside Seek warmth and comfort within The success of breaking through Sparks the joy and laughter - - - A youngster looking for a laugh Cozy beds only luls to sleep Step outside and bask in the storm The greatest adventure happens there At the rough seas the sails are jolly - - - The forest sings of hopes Dreams it brings towards lost adventurers They may be lost forever in dreams Or get out with riches and tales of glory Better brave through with their swords in hand The forest sings of hopes And I'll sing for the future Spoiler: Freedom (source) Basking under the sun Breathing in the chill air Walking along the pavement Skipping my steps lightly Humming a random tune Ridding myself of thoughts Letting any chains go Enjoying the moment as it is Living life weightlessly Looking almost like flying Freeing myself to spend the days Smiling at each passing moment Spoiler: Warm Scribbles (source) She took up a pencil and puts it on the paper. Quiet, she kept her pencil still. A line, a circle, random scratches on her paper as she wonders what to create. She took off the pencil from the paper and left the "drawing" be. She came back with some water color. Picking her favourite colors she made her strokes Yellow petals over the circle, green to cover the line. Then she took off and left the "painting" be. Washing away her paint palette, she decided to use the crayons instead. Taking a brown one, she filled the circle. With a light and dark green color she colored over the green watercolor. Without fully coloring it in, she stopped. She pondered whether the watercolor would have been a better choice. She tried adding a few strokes to make it better. But she stopped in her tracks. She picked the paper up and looked at it. Before finally deciding that she's unsatisfied by it and left it behind. What she can't see, is her mismatch of colour and tools bloomed a unique and beautiful sunflower. One that inspires warmth in others. And none of her strokes were for naught Spoiler: Beautiful Flower (source) Wind gently blew Swaying the soft brown hair Sitting among the colors Enjoying the flowers A girl donning a white dress Wind tenderly flew Spreading the sweet floral scent Caring for each one Showering with love The lady tending the garden Wind quietly shew Taking your breath away A magnificent landscape A marvelous sight A flower brimming with beauty Spoiler: Grow (source) (source) Slowly peek through the door Careful to open a little more The barrier from uncertain future The shelter where we were nurtured Through the gap, chilly winds blew in Harsh light as far as can be seen A scene welcoming dread A view making you afraid Taking a step back you look The memories which made you shook To the scene when your heart cracked To days when you feel like a wreck You hands tighten to a fist A clear direction without any mist Your watery eyes shines its light A step with all her might Dearly hoping for the best A little bird leaves its nest Without any life vest Looking for a little rest Spoiler: Apathy (source) Breathe underwater Floating weightlessly Where the current flows With the light shining through Black and white world Filled with silence Cold deadpan eyes Seek excitement Spoiler: The Writer (source, reply to Accidentally) A story of a little girl destined for more A story of an orphan boy taking up sword A story of kings, their fall and ruin Different worlds and different people Spoiler: Drown (source) Emotions like a swirl of currents Crashing against your skin Pushing your body aside Drowning your soul in it Yet you let it stay You give yourself to it Volunteers to be consumed You enjoy your powerlessness Indulging in the waves of the ocean - - - Letting myself drown in an ocean so deep and heavy Letting myself be, accepting the tears as it flows without resistance Letting myself get carried by the currents and torrents of emotions I was indulgent - - - Drowning, I find myself somewhere I don't recognize. Drowning, I find myself someone I don't recognize. Drowning, I find myself someone I don't want to be. The river cares not who you are. It cares not where you hope to be. It cares not what you will be. But it's my life. And it'll be my regret. If I hope to soar like the bird I am, I must swim. And thus, I'll swim. Spoiler: Content (source, reply to BlancFrost on A Frost Flower) A weak smile A warm heart All it has hoped Has finally come Teeming with life Her barren land loved No longer alone A frost flower bloomed Beautifully as its last Spoiler: Meeting (source, reply to BlancFrost) Fleeing the frigid winds Fleeting glimpse of your shine Flying closer in admiration Seeing your petals of ice Sitting carefully beside Saying my weak hello - - - Peeking out to the white land The view the storm has sent Remnants of the storm gone past Who came and went just as fast The bird nuzzles the frost Who was there when she most Safely protecting her from harm An ice crystal who made her warm A fire bird found warmth in winter Without needing to go hither and thither The unlikeliest friendship grew From meetings so rare and few Spoiler: My Song to You (source) Singing my song to the sun Whose shine is reminiscent of yours Singing my song to the stars Who tenderly watches over your nights Singing my song to the sea Who connects my voice to you Singing my song deep within Where you reside close to me Spoiler: Walk (source) Each move makes a gait Each step leaves a mark Each walk shows yourself For others judgement Spoiler: Geez! (source) You make me sad Over and over again Geez I miss you! Hurry and come back You make me cry Over and over again Geez It's tiring! Yet I can never get tired You make me lose sleep over and over again Geez I'm tired! But I still want to talk You make me hot Over and over again Geez I'm feeling embarassed! You better feel the same You make me fuzzy Over and over again Geez You flirt! Kiss me more You make me warm Over and over again Geez I wanna hug you tight! Come and cuddle with me You make me safe Over and over again Geez I love you! Take responsibility! Spoiler: A Cup of My Life (source, made inspired by and in collaboration with Shad12ow) Holding a cup Meeting you Each with their own Each sharing theirs Every drip, a new story Every drop, a new experience And I'll continue meeting more And I'll continue sharing mine Drops from my own life Drips from others life For their learnings For their sharings - - - You gave me inspiration Each meeting a different story Here and there, him and her I hold my cup forward Receiving parts of you Your thought and experience From here on I'll still hold my cup And I'll share it With everyone I meet And everyone I will meet Share the story Share the experience Share my meeting with you Maybe they can get something from it Maybe they can give it to someone else Maybe they can inspire others as well Spoiler: Summer (source) Open your umbrella! Ready your bikini! It's summer time I want to play Let's have some fun And meet at the beach! Spoiler: Sun (source) Let the sun shine on you And keep your days bright Let it envelope you And keep your body warm Let it send my love over And keep your heart snuggly Spoiler: Kid (source) What a kid Wanting to join Yet only sulking Feeling lonely All on my own Such a kid Trying to follow Not undersanding Seeking attention All on my own I'm a kid Breaking into tears Just want pampering Hating to be All on my own - - - I'm a kid Breaking into tears Look at me, spoil me I don't want to be All on my own - - - Oh a little naive Oh a little trusting Full of hope Full of joy Protect them Shelter them Don't let them see Don't let them know The world we live in
Easily the cutest thing I've ever posted here. It makes me all warm and fuzzy to see you guys come and participate >w< There was only 3 poets or something when I first started poeming on NUF, @Risus @Autumn Wind @Pyoo Now when I call upon 'poets' so many showed up >w< Tagging the writers @Accidentally @Land Of Tea @Mindless-Genius @Bielt @Trent @Yurika @Zone Q11 @Osamaru @Fabulist Ed @hatoyin97 @Aster Anemone
Hehehe~ We all come to the call of the cutest bird~ Who sings stories and rhymes~ As she is a important presence on our lives~ On our stories and songs~ *Glomp* I am glad you are happy~♥