Chinese X Dragon Age

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  1. Lionking

    Lionking Active Member

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    Name: X Dragon Age (X龙时代)
    Raw Link:http://www.ty2016.net/net/Xlongshidai/
    NU Link (if avaliable): none
    Why It Should Get Picked Up: The flow of the story is very interesting and the way the protagonist deals with the situations around him
    Description (if you can find one):

    Is about an ordinary person named Xinyun, in an opportunity to cross to a unknown world, but because of being lazy he doesn't do anything to get strong and make himself lose the opportunity to become the strongest, when nine strong forces were under collision, he was hit by a blow in the middle of the fight and happened an incredible miracle to Xinyun he had come back to the time when he crossed to the unknown world and notice he is on the same well with 4 boys and 3 girls one being the girl he likes and remember that they spend a lot of time there making everyone hungry and the four boys begin to drink the blood of the girls seeing this Xinyun kill the boys and 2 girls die for blood loss saving just the girl he likes. Knowing what would happen he does everything to get strong and protect the girl that he love and make her strong so that nothing happen to put her in danger. So this time he will do anything to get strong and he won't'care if he have to kill anyone

    I'm not much good in english so i can only do this much
     
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  2. Yunchii

    Yunchii Best Waifu - Tamamo-no-Mae

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    Format or this thread will be deleted by mods
    here's an example
     
  3. TheUnbreakablePlotArmor

    TheUnbreakablePlotArmor Mt.Tai cannot see me, as you cannot see Mt.tai

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    i want to explode right now.
     
  4. IMM

    IMM 『X.O.X.O』

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    Looks good. Hopefully someone does pick it up
     
  5. lucjanssens

    lucjanssens a very ¨rabbit¨ bunny

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    this is going to be locked if you don't use the proper formatting so use it
     
  6. Jigoku Shounen

    Jigoku Shounen An Envoy From Hell

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    Try to make the correct format next time. Though, " but because of being obsessed by one girl and make himself lose the opportunity to become the strongest", are you sure this novel gonna be good? Cause this plot never seem good. Unless, the girl is Actually Likable?
     
  7. DeathStroke96

    DeathStroke96 『President of Sindria Trading Co.』『Uncle』『GOD』

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    Haha :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO: I really don't think that the novel you want picked up is called Jin Yong martial arts Otherworldly rampage :D:D
    Also the raw link is not the actual raws but a website similar to wikia.com try find the actual raw website!!
     
  8. IMM

    IMM 『X.O.X.O』

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    Im lost
     
  9. postbank

    postbank Well-Known Member

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    Also the main char looks like an idiot, he is so naive that he does nothing at all in a different world not wanting power not even a bit.
    Putting not only himself in danger but also those around him.... such people do not deserve a 2nd chance.
     
  10. DeathStroke96

    DeathStroke96 『President of Sindria Trading Co.』『Uncle』『GOD』

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    On what?
     
  11. IMM

    IMM 『X.O.X.O』

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    You quoted something then I checked back to see his original post but it didn't match. just realised he edited it
     
  12. Jigoku Shounen

    Jigoku Shounen An Envoy From Hell

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    So another one of "those" novels? We got enough of that already so I don't think this novel gonna have much chance of getting picked up.
     
  13. Lionking

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    It's not the second time, it's the third time.
    And he will no be naive anymore
     
  14. postbank

    postbank Well-Known Member

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    The reason i am this harsh is quite simple it may seem like i am a douche.... but i have my reasons to think like this, i dislike hopping back in time to fix mistakes.
    This is because i believe whenever i watch a time leaping movie or whatever that its the same way of going true time as in dragon ball Z or the all to famous manga Psyren.
    So your loved ones are dead doesn't matter if you encounter them again because you went to a different timeline.

    So in the end this MC didn't do anything and then he dies... together with his waifu...
     
  15. Lionking

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