Art My Art.

Discussion in 'Community Creations' started by Wobbly, Sep 6, 2017.

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Best drawing?

  1. Some Guy

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  2. Frank N. Stein

    38.2%
  3. Frankenstein

    11.8%
  4. My Cubitat

    35.3%
  5. Musket - Quiddity

    5.9%
  6. Machete - Panic

    5.9%
  7. Wonder Hat

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  1. Wobbly

    Wobbly [Unstabbable][He Who Courts Death][Whimsical]

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    I don't believe construction criticism was meant to include words like "pathetic" and "awful" as their own sentences.
     
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  2. Suijin

    Suijin Blood God [Medic]

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    it is when its that bad. and ive seen even worse criticism on other artwork on stuff that looks better than this.
    and if you plan on posting online with this.. you better expect it, rather than complain. ffs

    go learn textures already. you are welcome
     
  3. chillo

    chillo NUF BioTerrorist

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    its not that your pictures are bad, but its just remind me of most Filipino's rrl novel cover that I drop, whole lot of them.
     
  4. Wobbly

    Wobbly [Unstabbable][He Who Courts Death][Whimsical]

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    Uhhh . . . well, I don't know how to shade, if that's the thing. I'm also bad with the crinkles in clothing and stuff.
     
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    chillo NUF BioTerrorist

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    its the style, not the clothes and the stuff, so relax
     
  6. Wobbly

    Wobbly [Unstabbable][He Who Courts Death][Whimsical]

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    ok thanks.
     
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    I like the third picture Frankenstein
     
  8. Sharudeis

    Sharudeis Semi-narcoleptic

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    Your art isn't all that bad, I'd say, but the best way to improve would be to work on your technical skills.
    Basically, rely less on digital editing and colouring. :blobpeek:
    For clothing and textures, it is easier to take references from real objects, and note how the tones change.
     
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  9. Wobbly

    Wobbly [Unstabbable][He Who Courts Death][Whimsical]

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    okay thanks~
     
  10. SilverFeather

    SilverFeather [Seeker of Yuri]•[Likes tomboys]

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    I like your style... however I believe you should kinda improve the anatomy... not all of them tho let's see... both elves and wunder reaaaly have room to improve in anatomy tho

    Love your av by the way...
     
  11. Wobbly

    Wobbly [Unstabbable][He Who Courts Death][Whimsical]

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    Thanks for the advice!
     
  12. akki

    akki [Ani's C☕ffee-mate #3] [Shady Merchant]

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    I'm liking Frankenstein and Frank N. Stein. The musket isn't too bad either~
     
  13. Wobbly

    Wobbly [Unstabbable][He Who Courts Death][Whimsical]

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    Arigato! :blobsalute:
     
  14. Heavenly_Curry_realm

    Heavenly_Curry_realm Well-Known Member

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    Wow that's rude. But to be honest it's really average, but it's quite decent.
     
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    Suijin Blood God [Medic]

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    meh. its shit in my perspective. since ive seen more art than a gallery curator
     
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    AMissingLinguist [Not Here][Blank Sect][Nuffian #N]

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    For the musket, I believe the Frizzen, or "battery", but be "L" shaped so that the flint scrapes on it and ignites the black powder in the pan. Otherwise, the musket is a terrible weapon meant to look fancy and be a hazard to wield.

    The machete has hints of Latin America design, so that's a plus. The black color can be of Filipino origin since the Filipino Bolo, or itak, does have a much darker blade than a machete.

    If the pictures were sharper, the colors darker, and the font different, then the drawings may improve. I'm not an art expert, but I do know what I prefer in my weapons.