Our New World

Discussion in 'Community Fictions' started by Yukkuri Oniisan, Nov 12, 2015.

  1. Randompasserby

    Randompasserby Active Member

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    ^no no nononono that's the devil's whispers up there.
    I'll wait, must wait for the complete chapter. Take your time lol

    Btw if it's okay with you I'd like to try editing some of the earlier chapters. No promises though I kinda suck at grammar myself and it's literally my first try at editing
     
  2. Yukkuri Oniisan

    Yukkuri Oniisan 『Procrastinator Archwizard Translator and Writer』

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    It will be appreciated.
    My English is kinda terrible after all.
     
  3. Neiri

    Neiri Well-Known Member

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    Do you know german? Seeing you give german sounding names.
     
  4. zhifangshifu-senpai

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    You tricked me, your English is fucking good.
     
  5. zhifangshifu-senpai

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    I've read the first prologue, it's really cluttered and word, unlike other novels I've read. I have no fucking idea of what is going on? The novels go into such great detail, that I'm genuinely confused. I'll try read it again, but try to simplify it - or maybe I'm just dumb...
     
  6. Yukkuri Oniisan

    Yukkuri Oniisan 『Procrastinator Archwizard Translator and Writer』

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    The prologues was:
    1. A passage from a book to introduce the world.
    2. A Miss Exposition and Miss Don't Know Anything conversation to introduce the short history and how people in that world see the main location.
    The purpose of these two was to grant the reader some basic knowledge of the setting.
     
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    Yo my friend your novel is keeping me awake! It's very goood!