Novel Legends Of Valkyries:Endless war on Middle Earth

Discussion in 'Community Fictions' started by Unsleepyknight, Dec 9, 2017.

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Do you find this lacking or not?

  1. Hell yeah!!!

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  2. Just needs some minor improvement(´・ω・`)

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  3. This is thrash(LOL)

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  4. Maybe will follow this to see if it gets interesting

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  5. Will follow this if have some spare time

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  6. Maybe if you... never mind

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  7. I have a suggestion

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  8. The author was weird!

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  9. I like your Avi(>^ω^<)

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  10. Your humour was dank

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  1. Unsleepyknight

    Unsleepyknight Corrupted

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    Hallo peeps(>^ω^<)〜(^∇^〜)
    I decided to post the chapters thrice a week, so that the story will progress faster. I set aside the illustrations and will now just focus solely on the chapters on the first 3 weeks of the month. The release will become M-W-F.
    BTW You can also read this at RRL and Wordpress tho I recommend just reading here to lessen the hastle.
    So Long Introduction was over and hope you can provide feedbacks if you like it or not.
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    RRL Link:Click Me
    Wordpress Link: Click Me

    Genre:Fantasy,LitRPG,Drama,E-Sports

    Chapters:
    Prologue
    Chapter 1:The birth of a Legend
    Chapter 2:First Blood

    Chapter 3: Burn the Witch!!!

    Chapter 4: Let's Talk
    Chapter 5: Be Careful With My Heart
    Chapter 6: Player's Unknown Battleground
    Chapter 7.1: Poor Signal Strength
    Chapter 7.2
    Chapter 7.3
    Arc 2: The Dimwit Adventurer
    Chapter 1: A new arc?
    Chapter 1.1
    Chapter 2
    Chapter 3
    Sypnosis:
    Our protagonist Ron Acreman was born in a bloodline known for it's long history in the field of architecture. He strives to become the CEO of the company their family running, so in that goal in mind he decided to enroll on the most prestigious university in their vicinity. But, as soon as the school year started, Ron was late on attending his first class. As he was late, he was punished by cleaning the library on their campus. There in the library he will meet his first love interest. He will pester her for the entire school year while trying to stalk her online activities. He will then stumble upon a game played by the girl, the MMORPG called "LIFE". They uses the online identity provided by the users on their SNS. He nows register and start the tutorials, but to his surprise a familiar face will appear. It's the girl whom he've been stalking over a month. Fortunately the girl didn't recognize him, instead she just refer to him as "newbie-kun" and just get over with the tutorial. Feeling annoyed Ron send a PM on her and said that 1 day he will go on the TOP PLAYERS list and from there she must agree to be his girlfriend. The girl, laughing out loud, just agree as she see it as a joke. But she added some terms into it, he must make his way on the top within 4 months time. With this condition agreed upon, Ron starts grinding for levels. Can the MC reach the top before the timelimit? or something will happen?
     
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  2. Unsleepyknight

    Unsleepyknight Corrupted

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    Genesis
    In the beginning, God created the Universe, The Earth was formless and desolate. The raging ocean that covered everything was engulfed in total darkness, and the Power of God was moving over the water. Then God commanded, "Let there be light"--and light appeared. God was pleased with what he saw. Then he seperated the light from the darkness, and he named the light "Day" and the darkness "Night. "Evening passed and morning came-that was the first day.

    And so the Week of creation continues, Until finally it's time to create the inhabitants of this land. The first human was created, Naming it as "Adam". When he finishes the creation, he dicided to rest. But before he rest, he tells Adam what are the laws here. He tells to him that Adam must not go near the fruit of good and evil, let alone eat a fruit there. But as soon as he leaves, Adam curiously runs towards the forbidden tree and picks a fruit. He doesn't know what to do with the fruit so he just hold it. But a surge of knowledge rushes through his mind, knowledge that is forbidden. It's name was "Magic"



    After just a few moments, the clouds grew darker and the sorroundings has been filled with strange vibes, Making all the other Organisms terified and fled for their lives. Adam feels that strong energies been surging throughout his body, Making him so powerful. With his new power he created his own army, An army akin to him, holding unimaginable powers at their disposal. When things grew wild on Earth, God descended and stopped Adam at his rampage. Feeling ashamed of himself, Adam fled to the vast universe and from there vanishes. Without leaving any clues on where is he now, Adam's whereabouts was still not confirmed.
     
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  3. athif23

    athif23 Active Member

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    IS THERE HAREM?! IF NOT, THEN GOODBYE. LoL

    THANKS
     
  4. Unsleepyknight

    Unsleepyknight Corrupted

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    Yes there is!
    (Seven Loli's and 3 Onee-sans btw)
     
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    Ddraig Frostfire Dragon|Retired lurker|FFF|Loved by RNG

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    Unsleepy is that you?

    Also 7 lolis? So unknightly
     
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    Unsleepyknight Corrupted

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    7 holi(loli)
     
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    Maid Chan [Professional]

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    Ddraig, a knight (atleast in every story that I read) is always a figure that goes around being loved by children of the whole world
     
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    Maid Chan [Professional]

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    I don't think so, Adam is like, the first human and male evar. God in this story haven't even created female yet.....
     
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    Maid Chan [Professional]

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    Lol is this your own version of Adam and Eve
     
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    Ddraig Frostfire Dragon|Retired lurker|FFF|Loved by RNG

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    That still does not justify having 7 lolis
     
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    Maid Chan [Professional]

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    Rather than him making he has harem of 91283918391 lolis from every part of the world...
     
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    Ddraig Frostfire Dragon|Retired lurker|FFF|Loved by RNG

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    maybe its better that this story just has 7 of them
     
  13. Maid Chan

    Maid Chan [Professional]

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    + 3 onee san btw
     
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    Ddraig Frostfire Dragon|Retired lurker|FFF|Loved by RNG

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    ............... Onee san is still okay.....not acceptable for the most part but definitely better than 7 lolis
     
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    Maid Chan [Professional]

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    Later it will turn into "Sleeping Knight and 7 lolis"
     
  16. Unsleepyknight

    Unsleepyknight Corrupted

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    Yep
     
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    Did he created another human by himself after that?
     
  18. Unsleepyknight

    Unsleepyknight Corrupted

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    This will be a bit spoiler,but it's okay at least not revealing the main plot.
    He will create a new world,without the forbidden tree.From then the society we are in now was classified as second earth.
     
  19. Zek

    Zek I write sins, not tragedies.

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    Put a space after each punctuation.

    And seven lolis, not one but seven lolis...
     
  20. Unsleepyknight

    Unsleepyknight Corrupted

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    I'm the Emroy of Satou-sama〜(^∇^〜).
    Thanks for your suggestion,will fix it now
    Edit:Fixed!(>^ω^<)
     
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