Oneshot Kidnapped Saintess x Betrayed Hero!

Discussion in 'Community Fictions' started by AardwarkThe2nd, Dec 31, 2017.

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How to continue he story?

  1. Increase the story size to 8 chapters

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  2. End the story at 5 chapters

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  1. Yukisora Haseo

    Yukisora Haseo [Human] [Complete Weirdo] [Sane]

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    *Watching now*

    Interesting indeed keep it up !!
     
    Yukisora Haseo, Dec 31, 2017
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    Srius Active Member

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    hmm
     
    Srius, Dec 31, 2017
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  3. Eternalce1

    Eternalce1 Well-Known Member

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    Not sure if I'm supposed to be happy...
     
    Eternalce1, Dec 31, 2017
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  4. CoupDeFri

    CoupDeFri My shadow is my best friend.

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    bcouse u r the demon who kidnap the saintess
     
    CoupDeFri, Dec 31, 2017
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  5. Vamps31

    Vamps31 Well-Known Member

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    Hello where is the part 3 i can't wait it's a good story
     
    Vamps31, Dec 31, 2017
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    ┴┬┴┤( ͡° ͜ʖ├┬┴┬
     
    CenSword, Dec 31, 2017
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    zhainan2157 『Villager No.2157』『Kawaii Connoisseur』

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    The looks like the good version of another betrayed hero princess kidnap novel that I forgot the name of. It was such a horrible novel despite the good plot idea. Gonna lurk here for a while and see if this can help me overcome the trauma of that horrifying novel.
     
    zhainan2157, Dec 31, 2017
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  8. 0000000

    0000000 I B SMILING!

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    Watching this thread yeah!
    So from the info, our MC, or me in this case (BS much?), is actually genre savvy? Cool.
     
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    Enough talking. Start acting. :blobpopcorn_cool:
     
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    Maid Chan [Professional]

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    Title please?
     
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    AardwarkThe2nd (R-18 writer) Aardwark, the king of aardvarks!

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  13. AardwarkThe2nd

    AardwarkThe2nd (R-18 writer) Aardwark, the king of aardvarks!

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    Part 3 up. https://forum.novelupdates.com/posts/3576269/
     
    AardwarkThe2nd, Dec 31, 2017
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    AardwarkThe2nd (R-18 writer) Aardwark, the king of aardvarks!

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    Well, if you check, Part 4 has been uploaded. The whole thing is a bit too huge and even half the story hasn't been told yet. I can end it tommorow but a majority will be cut short. Or I can lengthen it to 8 chapters, allowing the size to bloat up.

    What to do?

    There is a Poll up.

    Also, is the 2nd person POV interesting?
     
    AardwarkThe2nd, Dec 31, 2017
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  15. Eve

    Eve Title under construction

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    Since its new year, end it with a big loud BANG!
    just kidding. kinda hype because I just finished a train wreck manga.
    i'll check it out after a short nap.:blobsleeping:
     
    Eve, Dec 31, 2017
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  16. 0000000

    0000000 I B SMILING!

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    Thx for the call up, so why is the watch thread thingy not working with so many people posted after me?
     
    0000000, Jan 1, 2018
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  17. justanotherreader

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    it doesn't matter to me how long you wanna do it. I just want to see a good ending pls
     
    justanotherreader, Jan 1, 2018
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  18. Harry

    Harry Now you see me

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    The art of brainwashing MUST LEARN ITTT
    Should i go to isekai first?
     
    Harry, Jan 1, 2018
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  19. Yukisora Haseo

    Yukisora Haseo [Human] [Complete Weirdo] [Sane]

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    Nice !!! Oh yeah
     
    Yukisora Haseo, Jan 1, 2018
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  20. sealteam14

    sealteam14 Your friendly HI3 SEA monkey farmer

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    Okay.... one thing.
    Start. Middile. End.
    Hope to see mind break somewhere between chapter 4, 6 & 7. And thy hero return back to his original home along with trophies. Oh, and some killing still be premitted, as long as it not cutting people into multiple body parts and split the victim's inner organs for show. Oh, and some interesting idea.... dying while being raped and climax. Just some twisted refeence, you know. And do the repeat of dead while climax until target are broken pieces of a walking slave... something like enternal slave collar that instantly restrurect dead target back to life to serve their purpose until the collar was off, after that, they'll die for good.
    Man, i'm currently being heavy influented by anti-hero lead..... and sone hardcore Hentai/ dojin... And mind-control the princess to kill her own family after being raped by MC, then mind break her after that, would be a good sight to behold..
    Hold up! Can you get from an unknown being that afloat around MC, yet they can't interact with each other, but that entity still have thought, kind of that 2nd POV gonna juicing the story, like Standley Parable, but a bit different.
    And that's the idea for those extended chapter. BUT, as a oneshot, make it less than 10 chapter. If reach 10 or more, it no longer a one-shot.
     
    sealteam14, Jan 2, 2018
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