Chinese Crystal 《晶体》

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  1. Too Honest

    Too Honest Creature of Repressed Desires

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    Its a trap!!
    But in all seriousness, i hope ppl do read it. I just personally am not interested in it based off of the synopsis you gave.
     
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    oh!
     
  3. Murcott

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    作者好! :)

    你的句子很干净, 很清晰, 很合乎逻辑也很精致。他们其实在谷歌翻译做得很不错。;P
     
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    谢谢,但我的英文实在不太好,很多语法之类东西我都不懂:cry:如果你能帮忙就太好了,你愿意的话就翻译几段,这样其它人觉得好的话,也会来帮忙的.:LOL:

    再次感谢你帮我翻译之前的内容:X3:
     
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    没关系很正常,中文和英文的语法非常不同,很难得有人可以完全掌握这两个语言
     
  6. Murcott

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    如果有时间,当然可以帮忙。:) 其实我在翻译另一本书,但是它用的字对我真的有点太难了,所以......哈哈。没关系,等一下在回去翻译。 ;P
     
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    真是太感谢你了:X3:你愿意帮忙真是太好了:LOL:
     
  8. Murcott

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    ......作者,这个地方不太清楚......

    “伊斯特拉?真是个好听的名字”男人打量着手中这个孩子,拨开他胸前覆盖巨眼的皮肤,然后将他在了地上:blobdizzy:

    意思是 "在了地上" 吗?
    :sweating_profusely:
     
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    我现在才看见这本书。我有时间会去看一看。我现在翻译另外一本书但是我考试好我应该会有更多时间。对不起如果我的中文不太好,我在美国出生的。:sweating_profusely::blob_grin::blobReach:
     
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    不用担心,你的中文很好,如果你打算来翻译的话,一定会做得很好。:blob_grin:我只有翻到第一章,但觉得作者写得很好,真的很有趣。:blobrofl:
     
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    是的,像扔东西一样扔了出去,因为伊斯特拉是个孩子,所以像包袱一样扔在了地上.

    哦,那是个错别字,真是非常抱歉,因为中文输入法的原因,文中可能有很多错别字:oops:.

    真是太感谢你了,朋友:LOL:有问题尽管说,翻译好之后你作为翻译者,可以随便发到小说论坛;)

    再次感谢你的帮忙:)
     
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    欢迎你的加入,这会让更多人能够看到这部作品.:LOL:

    加油,祝你考试得到好成绩.;)
     
  13. Murcott

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    请不用那么客气,你是我的长辈,我也不是好手或专业翻译的,这样子会让我害羞。:blobsweat::blobsweat_2::blobtired:
    反正有作家在这里,可以随时问一问,很轻松。我们现在有新的朋友了,看他能不能满足你的愿望。:blobcheeky::blobparty:
    对吗,你是这么想来吧你的作品翻成英文的?我有点好奇, 因为其他的作者没有来过这里有这样的创见。:blob_grin:
     
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    ^^ 如果有什么英文的问题我可以帮满。再过两个星期我就考好了,可以帮多一点。 :blobhug: fighting!:blobfistbumpL:
     
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    哈哈,算不上什么长辈,咱们以后就是朋友了.:LOL:

    这部作品我从构思到最终完成,写了15年左右的时间,包括那些造型设计和概念绘画,故事中隐含了我的一生,晶体这部作品就像我的生命一样,共同成长,直到我将自己全部的思想都写进了这部作品之中,我的人生已经没有任何遗憾了.

    并不是为了名与利,当你将晶体这三部作品全部读完,你会发现我真实的想法,是一个从幼年起就存在的思想.

    我希望这部作品能够让更多的人看到,在第三部故事中,通过发生在生命体身上的一切经历,预言了我们人类的未来和结局.通过这部作品,可以看到我们人类自己的映照,我们的过去,现在,未来所要经历的一切.这是一部公益性的作品,不包含任何商业元素,从最开始到结束,都带有极度沉重与压抑的氛围,没有一丝搞笑的元素,话题十分沉重.当你读完它就会发现,犹如做了一场恶梦,被惊醒之后,会发出感叹.我们,仍然还活着,我们仍然还有机会.
     
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    在这里, 我们都是好朋友:blob_grin:
    我觉得你说的话很有意义, 所以翻译一点给大家看一看。:blobsmilehappy:

    这部作品我从构思到最终完成,写了15年左右的时间,包括那些造型设计和概念绘画,故事中隐含了我的一生,晶体这部作品就像我的生命一样,共同成长,直到我将自己全部的思想都写进了这部作品之中,我的人生已经没有任何遗憾了.
    This work of mine, from its conception to its final completion, has been close to 15 years in the making, including the planning of its shape and drawing of its concept; this story carries within itself my life. This manuscript, Crystal, is my life and existence, we matured together, till all of my pondering and thoughts towards myself has been written into this book, my life on this earth has no regrets whatsoever.
    并不是为了名与利,当你将晶体这三部作品全部读完,你会发现我真实的想法,是一个从幼年起就存在的思想.
    (I did not write) for the sake of fame or wealth. Once you have finished reading Crystal, these three manuscripts, to its entirety, you will be able to discover my true ethos. It is a philosophy that has existed from the time of my infancy.
    我希望这部作品能够让更多的人看到,在第三部故事中,通过发生在生命体身上的一切经历,预言了我们人类的未来和结局.通过这部作品,可以看到我们人类自己的映照,我们的过去,现在,未来所要经历的一切.这是一部公益性的作品,不包含任何商业元素,从最开始到结束,都带有极度沉重与压抑的氛围,没有一丝搞笑的元素,话题十分沉重.当你读完它就会发现,犹如做了一场恶梦,被惊醒之后,会发出感叹.我们,仍然还活着,我们仍然还有机会.
    I wish this manuscript can help more people see and, through all the experiences that occur to the life-forms in the third part of the story, foretell the future and outcome of our human race. That through this piece of writing, they can see the reflection of our human race itself; everything we experience that which has gone, that now transpires, and that is yet to come.
     
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    thank you so much:blobsmile:
     
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    新年快乐! Happy New Year!

    [第一章:伊斯特拉之眼] [Chapter 1: The Eye of Yisitela]

    “我,是谁?”

    “Who, am I?”

      “我,从哪里来?”

    “Where, did I come from?”

      “我,去往何处?”

    “To whence, am I going?”

      一个中年男性,走在自己生命中最后的旅程,不断重复的询问自己这些简单而又复杂的问题。

    A middle-aged male, walking on the final journey of his life, continually examined himself repeatedly with these simple and yet complex questions.

      我是谁?那个依托脑中记忆存活的自己?还是在别人眼中看到的那个自己?

    Who am I? The self which relies on his mind’s memories to survive? Or the self that is seen in the eyes of others?

      每个人的心中,都会有一个自己,问题是,哪个才是真正的自己?

    Inside the heart of every person, they will have a self. The question is, which one is the true self?

      中年男人在这样的思索中独自前行,虽然他一直都在向着一个方向走,却永远都无法走出这片昏暗的寂静森林。对于现在的他来说,早已经迷失在这生命的最后旅程之中,虽然走不到尽头,却又无法停下前行的脚步。

    The middle-aged man walked forward alone in this type of contemplation. Although he had been constantly heading towards one direction, he was forever unable to leave this quiet, dusky forest. To speak of the current him, he had long been lost inside this final journey of his life. Even though he could not walk to the end, his footsteps still advanced ceaselessly.

      中年男人仍然在向着一个方向前行,虽然周围的环境未曾改变,依旧是那片低沉寂静的森林,但他仍然没有停住自己的脚步,漫长的旅途最终让他的身体接近了极限,他迈出的脚步开始漫了下来。

    The middle-aged man kept on heading forward in that one direction. Even if the surroundings did not ever change, and were as before that quiet, dusky forest; however, he still did not stop his footsteps. The endless journey finally made his body approach its limits, and his footsteps started to slow down.

      现在的他很清楚自己的处境,永远都无法走出这片森林,早已经迷失在这片森林的他却不想停留在这里,更确切的说,他不想死在这里。

    The current him was very clear about his situation, forever unable to leave this forest. Yet, he who had long been lost in this forest did not want to stop here. More specifically, he did not want to die here.

      他的人生,还不想就这样结束。

    His life on this earth, he still did not want to end like this.

      他蹒跚前行,在他周围的森林已经无法再看到任何树木,黑暗早已遮挡住他迷茫的双眼,缓慢的吞噬着他的灵魂,绝望让他停止了自己的脚步,伤痛折磨着他脆弱的生命躯壳。身体已经到达极限的他终于倒下了,像一具尸体般沉重的倒下,躺在那里等待着自己的死亡。

    He staggered forward. Already the trees in the surrounding forest could no longer be seen, and darkness had long since obscured his confused eyes, slowly swallowing his spirit. In despair, his steps halted, and pain tormented the frail form that housed his life. He, whose body had already reached its limits, finally collapsed, heavily toppling over like a corpse, lying down in that place as he waited to die.

      “站起来,命运神”

    “Stand up, God of Fate”

      “我们的时间已经不多了”

    “Already our time here is not long”

      “站起来,命运之神,你的生命绝不能这样结束”

    “Stand up, God of Fate, your life absolutely cannot end like this”

      “我们古代神挽救的世界,即将毁灭”

    “The world saved by our gods of ancient times, is on the verge of destruction”

      “而作为最后一位古代神的你,是我们最后唯一的希望,站起来”

    “And you, as the last of the ancient gods, are our single, final hope; stand up”

      “只有你,命运之神,将会改变这世间的一切命运”

    “Only you, God of Fate, will change the entire fate of this world”

      “你,是我们最后的,希望”

    “You, are our last, hope”

      神秘的声音不断在呼唤着这个中年男人,或许这些声音已经让他有了自己是谁的答案,但倒下的他仍然没有站起来,阴冷的黑暗笼罩在他的周围,仿佛要将他彻底吞没在这无尽的深渊之中。

    The mysterious voices unceasingly called out to this middle-aged man; perhaps these voices already gave him the answer to his question of who he was. Yet he who had collapsed still had not stood up. The cold and ominous darkness enveloped his surroundings, as if it were thoroughly engulfing him inside this endless abyss.

      经过了数天的昏迷,他终于醒了过来,缓慢的睁开了自己的双眼,环顾四周后,看到的却是一片无尽的沙漠。他站了起来,继续向着一个方向前行。

    Passing numerous days in this unconscious state, he finally woke up. He slowly opened his eyes, and after surveying his surroundings, what he saw was actually a sheet of endless desert. He stood up, and went on in one direction.

      沙漠的风沙很快就笼罩在他的周围,在他模糊的视线中,一具干枯瘦弱的尸骨向他走来。那具尸骨的脸紧紧的帖在了他的脸上,那是一颗拥有着四只眼眶的头骨,而尸骨的手臂直接刺穿了他的身躯,在他的胸前挖出了一个巨大的空洞,穿透了他的胸膛,然后风暴与这具尸骨,瞬间被吸入了他胸前的这个空洞,伴随着剧烈疼痛的同时,一股强烈的记忆不断的在冲击着他储藏在大脑深层的记忆片段。剧烈的冲击让他跪倒在地。

    Soon the sand blown by the desert winds enveloped his surroundings. In his hazy eyesight, a weak, withered skeleton walked towards him. That skeleton pushed its face closely to his own face, with a skull possessing four eye sockets. The skeleton’s arm promptly impaled his body, digging out a massive cavity on his chest, penetrating his chest. Afterwards, in a flash, a violent storm was sucked into that cavity on his chest along with the skeleton. Along with a aching pain, an intense recollection incessantly pounded against the fragments of memory deeply imbedded in his brain. The fierce attack made his knees sink to the ground.

      风暴停止了,跪在那里的中年男人,贯穿他胸口的空洞紧紧的封闭着,只留下一道深深的裂痕,鲜红的血液倒流回那条伤痕处。当他用自己的手指去触摸那道伤痕的一刻,那道裂痕缓慢的睁开,一只巨大的眼球包裹在他的胸前,贯穿他的身躯。同时那具尸骨生前的记忆,再一次侵蚀他大脑深处的记忆,巨大的眼球表面渗透出鲜血,仿佛在向他诉说着自己生前的经历。透过那只眼,让中年男人经历了在这具尸骨生前所发生的一切。

    The storm stopped, and the middle-aged man kneeling there closed the empty hole in his chest, tightly sealing it. Only the deep mark of a crack remained. Scarlet blood flowed back into that scar; in the short moment that he used his finger to touch the scar, the fissure slowly opened; an enormous eye bound in his chest, running through his body. At the same time, the recollection of that skeleton while it lived again corroded the memory in the depths of his brain. Blood permeated the surface of the enormous eye, as if recounting to him his experiences while he was still alive. Through that eye, the middle-aged man experienced everything that happened during the life of this skeleton.

      那是一个阴沉昏暗的傍晚,大批的侵袭者进入了这个古老的小村庄,手持长斧的侵袭者不断的追赶着居住在这里的村民,这些村民的脸上,都长着与那具尸骨相同的四只眼睛,却没有眼球,只是一个空洞,只有胸前的巨眼是张开的。他们在追赶中被杀害。

    It was a dark and dusky evening. Large numbers of invaders entered this ancient little village. Holding a spear in their hands, the invaders relentlessly pursued the villagers that dwelled here. On the faces of all of these villagers, there grew the same two pairs of eyes as that skeleton, yet there were no eyeballs, just an empty socket; only the huge eye in their chest was open. They were slaughtered in the midst of the pursuit.

      一个孩子在逃跑中被绊倒,在他身后的中年人想去搀扶他,却被身后的长斧砍下了头,身体倒在了他的身旁。

    A child tripped as he fled; the middle-aged man behind him wanted to help him, but a spear behind them chopped off his head, and his body collapsed besides the child.

      “站起来,快跑,伊斯特拉”这个孩子的族人停止了逃跑,不断的在鼓励他站起来。

    “Stand up, hurry up and run away, Yisitela” The child’s clansman stopped his own escape, persistently encouraging the child to stand up.

      “停”

    “Halt”

      侵袭者很快就将这个小村庄包围,随着一声号令,他们停止了杀戮。所有人的目光此刻都集中在这个绊倒在地的孩子身上。

    Very quickly the invaders surrounded this tiny village. With a shout of this command, they ceased the massacre. At present all eyes focused on the child who had tripped and fallen to the ground.

      从侵袭者的队列中,走出了一位与这些族人相同拥有巨眼的男人,在他的脚上穿着一双厚重的钢靴,每走一步都会发出清脆的金属响声。

    From within the formation of the invaders, a man with the same gigantic eye as the clansmen walked out. He wore a pair of thick and heavy steel boots on his feet, and they made a crisp, metallic sound with every step he walked.

      他走向了那个倒在地上的孩子跟前,手指扣进了那个孩子空洞的双眼,就这样拎起他的头。

    He walked up to the front of the child who had fallen to the ground. His finger hooked the sockets of child’s eyes, and lifted his head in this manner.

      “伊斯特拉?真是个好听的名字”男人打量着手中这个孩子,拨开他胸前覆盖巨眼的皮肤,然后将他仍在了地上。

    “Yisitela? What a nice name” The man sized up the child in his hand, brushed away the skin that covered the eye on his chest, and then threw him to the ground.

      “现在你们已经不再将这样的废物抛弃了?”他环顾四周的村民,带着嘲讽的语气质问着。那些村民沉没的低下了头,气氛异常的寂静。

    “You have already stopped throwing away this kind of trash now?” He looked around at the villagers around him, questioning them in a mocking tone. The heads of the villagers sank down, and the atmosphere was abnormally quiet.

      “我叫泰伽,你们都记得这个名字吗?”村民们没有一个人听到过这个名字。

    “I am called TaiJia, do you remember this name?” Not a single one of the villagers have heard of this name.

      “是的,你们怎么会记得那些被你们抛弃的孩子呢,更不会给他们起名”

    “Yes, how would you remember the names of the children you threw away, much less give them a name”

      “没事,别害怕,我们是一样的,我们会成为朋友的”男人蹲在伊斯特拉身旁,抚摩着他的头

    “It’ll be all right, don’t be afraid; we are the same, we will become friends” The man crouched beside Yisitela, stroking his head.

      “那我就告诉你们那些被抛弃的孩子,都遭受了怎样的待遇”话音刚落,他将一把长矛刺入了伊斯特拉的腿。

    “Then let me tell you, under what kind of treatment all of those discarded children suffer” His voice had barely fallen, when he stabbed a spear into Yisitela’s leg.

      “啊……”随着伊斯特拉一声哀鸣,在场村民的脸都流露出哀伤的表情,泪水从他们空洞的双眼中流下。

    “Ah……” At the sound of Yisitela’s wail, the face of the villagers at the scene revealed an expression of grief, and tears fell from the empty sockets of their two pairs of eyes.

      “你们,现在感觉到一些痛苦了吗?”泰伽看着在地上挣扎的伊斯特拉,又拿出了一只长矛

    “You, do you feel some anguish now?” TaiJia looked at Yisitela struggling on the ground, once again taking out a spear.

      “我们是一样,对吗?”第二根长矛刺穿了伊斯特拉的另一条腿。

    “We are the same, right?” A second spear thrust into the other leg of Yisitela.

      现在的伊斯特拉已经无法再站起来了,族人们看着伊斯特拉痛苦的挣扎,听到他惨痛的哀鸣声,却无法阻止这眼前发生的一切,他们内心在不断的忏悔曾经的过错。

    Now Yisitela was already incapable of standing up anymore. The clansmen saw Yisitela’s painful struggle, and heard the sound of his bitter cries, yet were unable to prevent all that was happening before their eyes. In their innermost heart they regretted the mistakes they had previously made without pause.

      “你们的眼睛,无法看到这些被你们抛弃的生命,更无法看到那些孩子最终会有怎样的下场,但看不到并不代表这一切从未发生”泰伽脸上的空洞流下了泪水。

    “Your eyes, cannot see the lives of the children you discarded, and even more so cannot see what kind of final end these children will have, but not being able to see does not mean everything never happened” Tears flowed from the empty sockets on TaiJia’s face.

    “但是现在,伊斯特拉,我会告诉你,曾经发生在我们种族身上所被遗忘一切”

    “But right now, Yisitela, I will tell you, everything that once happened to our species was forgotten”

    “或许这些并没有被它们彻底的忘记,而仅仅是不愿提起”泰伽站了起来,用流下泪水的空洞眼眶向那些已经低下头忏悔的族人望去”

    “Perhaps these things have not been completely forgotten by them, and they are merely unwilling to mention them” TaiJia stood up, and, with those empty sockets of his from which teardrops flowed, looked towards the clansmen who had already lowered their heads in repentance.

    泰伽的四个眼眶中虽然没有眼球,却仍然能从那张面孔上看出他对这些族人的憎恨。

    Even though TaiJia’s four sockets did not have eyeballs, nevertheless the hatred he had for these clansmen was still able to be seen from the hollows on his face.


      “从晶体第二次碎裂之后,在我们的种族身上产生了一些异常的影响,原本和普通生命体一样的双眼,逐渐失去了光明,无法再看到这个世界,之后我们进化出了第二双眼,悲哀的是仍然无法看到一丝光明。我们大部分族人的一生都在漫长的黑暗中度过,命运的不公最终让绝望的族人用极其残忍的手段,在胸前切开一道裂痕,利用禁术植入了古代龙族的第三只眼,才让我们终于再次感知到了这个世界的一切,虽然仍无法识别颜色,这只眼所看到的一切都只有灰暗,但却让我们的种族看到了希望”

    “From the time following the second shattering of the crystal, some abnormal effects began arising within the bodies of our species; their two original and ordinary eyes that were the same as the average life-form, gradually lost light, incapable of seeing this world. Afterwards we evolved a second pair of eyes, sorrowfully still unable to see even a little bit of light. Throughout the majority of our clansmen’s life, they always pass their life in the midst of an endless darkness. Destiny’s injustice made the despairing clansmen use exceedingly cruel methods, to cut open a fissure on their chest, and use forbidden arts to implant the ancient dragon clan’s third eye, to let us finally once again perceive all that is in this world. We still remained unable to discern color; everything that this eye sees only has murky grey, but it let our race see hope.”

      “但违背了生态法则的行为注定将受到诅咒,我们的族人并没有意识到他们的过错,甚至在战争席卷而来之即,在这只眼中融入了破坏性,当我们的这只眼球完全睁开的一刻,会释放出毁灭力量,同归于尽。族人对拥有毁灭力量的欲望并没有就此止步,试图以这种力量统治这个空间的一切。最终我们的族人遭到了其它部族的抵抗,在那场抵抗战争中逃亡的族人,侥幸活了下来,但违背生态法则带来的诅咒最终还是在这些新生的孩子身上发生了,出生了很多残次品婴儿,而这些孩子胸眼的眼,没有一点利用价值,而且因为是在逃亡,养育不了那么多没有价值的生命,最终这些残次品在逃亡中被随处的抛弃,或许是内心的愧疚,让它们有了些许迟疑,虽然依依不舍,却仍然还是将这些新生儿遗弃”

    “However our actions violated ecology’s laws and doomed us to suffer a curse. Furthermore, our clansmen did not recognize their mistake at all, even to the extent that when war engulfed everything and approached, inside these eyes merged a destructive nature. In the very hour this eyeball of ours completely opened, it would release the power of destruction, and all will perish together. And yet the clansmen’s desire to possess the power of destruction did not stop at this point; they attempted to dominate all in this dimension with this power. Ultimately, our clansman met with resistance from other tribes. Luckily the clansmen who fled during that long war of resistance were able to survive, but the curse from going against ecology's law still finally occurred on the bodies of these newborn children. Many defective infants were given birth to, and the eye in the chest of these children did not have even a bit of useful value. In addition, because they were fleeing, they were unable to rear so many useless lives. In the end these defective goods were discarded everywhere as they fled. Perhaps the guilt in their hearts let them have some hesitation, but although they were brokenhearted at having to leave them, they still abandoned these newborn babies.

    “没有人,知道那些被抛弃的孩子,遭遇了怎样的折磨与痛苦”

    “No one, knows what torture and suffering, those abandoned children bitterly experienced”

    “更没有人,会想到这些被抛弃的孩子,还能够在没有生存条件的状态下成活”

    “No one, thought of these abandoned children, if they could still survive in a situation without any conditions for survival”

    “谁都无法想像,幼小生命并不会在短暂的时间内死去”

    “No one was capable of imagining it, that the young lives did not die after a short while”

    “饥饿,干渴,寒冷,黑暗,无时不刻伴随着它们的周围”

    “Hunger, thirst, cold, and darkness; at no time did these stop accompanying their surroundings”

    “一切的一切,都将这些孩子,推向死亡的边缘”

    “In all things and in everything, they were always with these children, pushing them to the brink of death”

    “在这样的环境下,却仍然存在奇迹的出现”

    “Under this kind of environment, nevertheless a miraculous existence still emerged”

    “你们?为什么不将那些孩子的生命结束之后再去抛弃呢?”

    “Why? Couldn’t you discard those children after their lives had ended?

    “这样就不会看到,今天出现在你们面前的我了”

    “This way they would not see, the me that appeared today in front of you”

    “哈哈,哈哈哈!”泰伽一阵诡异的笑声之后,传来的却是他悲泣的哭声

    “Haha, hahaha!” TaiJia laughed strangely for some time, yet the sound that came through afterwards was the sound of his weeping

    “只顾着种族的逃亡,却从没有考虑过那些被你们抛弃的幼小生命”

    “The race was entirely engrossed in their flight, yet you never considered those young lives that you abandoned”

    “只有我活了下来,只有我成为了那些孩子中唯一的奇迹”

    “Only I survived, of those children only I became a miracle”

    “被抛弃的我,爬过这些孤儿的尸体,啃食着他们的血肉”

    “I, who had been abandoned, crawled over the corpses of these orphans, feeding on their flesh and blood”

    “是的,饥饿的我,是吃着那些孩子的尸体活下来的”

    “Yes; I, who was staving, survived by eating the corpses of those children”

    “为了活下来,一口一口将自己身边同胞的血肉咽下”

    “For the sake of surviving, bite by bite I swallowed the flesh of the siblings beside me”

    “在我体内,流淌着每一个孩子的鲜血,这些记忆带来的痛苦与折磨,伴随着我的一生”

    “Inside of my body, flows the blood of every child; the pain and torment these memories bring me, accompany me all throughout my life”

    “那时幼小的我,内心中对你们的憎恨与求生欲望,才支撑我走到现在,无论怎样都只想要活下去,活着去看一眼,那些抛弃我们的人,是否跟我们长着相同的脸,是否跟我们有着同样的生命”

    “The hate for you and the longing for survival in the heart of the young me of that time, supported me to walk to today; no matter what I only wanted to survive, to live to see, those people who abandoned us, whether or not they grew the same face as us, whether or not they possessed the same kind of life”

    “悲哀的是,即使现在我找到了这些抛弃我们的人,却仍然无法用自己的双眼,看到他们”

    The sorrow of this is, even if I have now found the people who abandoned us, yet I am still unable to use these two eyes, to see them”

    “与那时侯一样,在我的眼中,只有无尽的黑暗,而我透过它看到的世间,也与你们不同”

    “The same as that time, in my eyes, there is only endless darkness, and the world I see through it, is also different from yours”

    “灰暗的一切,失去了原有的色彩,我们这些孩子的生命,就像这只眼狭窄的视角之外,无法看到的死角,被永远的抛弃”

    “The darkness of everything, has lost the original colors; the lives of we children, just like this eye’s narrow view of the outside, the areas we are unable to see, were forever abandoned”

    望着这些族人的泰伽,泪水从他那四只空洞的眼眶中不断的流下。

    As TaiJia watched the clansmen, teardrops continually flowed down from his four empty eye sockets.

    泰伽走向了那些村民,抓起他们,用自己的脸帖在对方的脸上

    TaiJia walked up to those villagers, grabbed them, and pushed his own face up to their faces.

    “抛弃我们的人,就长你这样吗?”然后又抓起了下一个族人,泰伽与那个族人脸部的轮廓还有那些空洞,完全的吻合了

    “So the people who abandoned us, grew this way like you?” Afterwards again seizing another clansman, the outline and empty hollows on TaiJia’s face was completely identical to that clansman’s.

    “告诉我,我们有什么不同?”

    “Tell me, what difference do we have?”

    “告诉我?为什么?”

    “Tell me? Why?”

    “就不能让我们都活下去”泰伽的泪水从它脸上的空洞流下,流过它的嘴角与下鄂,泪水滴洒在地面。

    “Just cannot let us all stay alive” TaiJia’s tears streamed from his empty hollows, flowing down over the corner of his mouth and his jaw, teardrops dripping and scattering onto the surface of the ground.

    “泰伽,时间不早了,没必要跟它们多说,现在就该把他们全杀了”一个侵袭者向泰伽询问着

    “TaiJia, it’s getting late; there’s no need to say more to them, we should kill them all now” an invader made an inquiry to TaiJia

    “恩,杀了所有人”泰伽回应了一声之后,那名侵袭者将手中的长矛刺穿了泰伽的身体,鲜血从他的口中喷出,夹杂着泪液,愤怒的泰伽转过头注视着那名侵袭者,瞪大的眼眶显得十分的惊讶。

    “Mm, kill them all” After TaiJia answered, that invader used the long spear in his hands to impale TaiJia’s body. Red blood spurted from his mouth, mingling with his tears; TaiJia, enraged, turned his head to look at that invader, eye sockets staring widely looking completely astonished.

    “这是怎么回事?”

    “What is going on?”

    “原谅我,泰伽,你跟那些人是一样的,呵呵”侵袭者阴险的说着,又将另一只长矛刺穿了他的身体

    “Forgive me, TaiJia, you are the same as those people, hehe” the invader said sinisterly, using another spear to pierce through his body

    “王室下令,将你们这些劣等的种族,彻底从这个世界中铲除,抱歉了,哈哈哈”

    “The Imperial family has ordered, to thoroughly eradicate this inferior race of yours from the world; sorry, hahaha”

    “单纯而又可怜的泰伽,王室一直都在欺骗着你”侵袭者走到了泰伽的面前。

    “Simple and pitiful TaiJia, the Imperial family has been deceiving you all along” The invader walked up in front of TaiJia.

    “在你生命的最后,就让我来告诉你一切的真相”

    “At the end of your life, let me tell you the truth about everything”

    “你口中的那些被抛弃的孩子,的确都已经死了,只有你一个活了下来”

    “Those abandoned children in your mouth, are truly already dead, only you survived”

    “但这并不是奇迹,那些被抛弃的孩子们是被王室们收养的”

    “But this was not a miracle at all, those abandoned children had been adopted by the Imperial family”

    “而你也只不过是王室们利用的工具,在“打磨”你们这些工具的时候”

    “And you are also nothing more than a tool used by the Imperial family, during the time you tools were being ‘polished’”

    “只不过其它的孩子,没能在恶劣的磨练中活下来而已”

    “It is merely that the other children, were unable to survive the vile tempering”

    “唯一活下来的就只有你,不仅失去了双腿,还遗忘了所有的记忆”

    “The only one who survived was you; not only did you lose both of your legs, you also lost all of your memories”

    “王室为了根除你们这个种族,使用了很多卑鄙的手段”

    “For the sake of eradicating your race, the Imperial family used numerous despicable methods”

    “而你,却一直都被它们所欺骗,不断的填充你缺失的记忆”

    “And yet you, kept on being deceived by them, constantly filling in your missing memories”

    “让你坚信着自己是被族人所抛弃后,吃着它们血肉才活下来的”

    “Making you firmly believe that being abandoned by the clansmen, you only survived by eating their flesh and blood”

    “只有这样的你,为了向抛弃你的族人复仇,才能够带我们来到这里”

    “Only this kind of you, in order to avenge the clansmen who abandoned you, would be able to lead us here”

    “是那些编造出来的仇恨支撑着你的身躯,活到了现在”

    “It was that fabricated hatred which supported your body, to stay alive to now”

    “既然你的使命已经完成了,也就没有再存活下去的必要了”

    “Since your mission is already complete, there is no need for you to keep on living”

    “要恨,就恨那些将你们抛弃的人吧”

    “If you want to hate, then hate those people who abandoned you children”

    侵袭者拿出了自己的长剑,不断的刺向泰伽的身躯,血液很快流满了一地。

    The invader took out his own spear, unceasingly stabbing TaiJia’s body; blood very quickly flowed out everywhere on the ground.

    “啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊”得知自己身世真相的泰伽那充满愤怒的呐喊声传遍了整个村落。

    “Hahahahahahahaha” finding out the truth about the history of his life, TaiJia’s angry shout brimming with fury spread throughout the entire village.

    “王室们,居然敢利用我”泰伽的脑海中闪过王室们虚伪的笑容,紧握住了手中的利刃转过了身。

    “The Imperial family, unexpectedly dared to use me” The Imperial family’s false smiles flashed through TaiJia’s mind, firmly taking hold of the blade in his hand to turn over his body.

    “我要杀了你们”

    “I will kill you”

    但是,愤怒的泰伽刚迈出一步,身体就开始摇晃,全身流下鲜血的他已经站不稳了,他拔下了插在身上的长矛,向侵袭者反击,却没有命中,他的伤势实在太严重了,血液顺着伤口止不住的流出。

    However, just as the wrathful TaiJia took his first step, his body began to shake. He, from whose entire body flowed blood, was already unable to stand steadily. He pulled out the lance that was pierced into his body, striking at the invader, but did not hit his target. The condition of his injury was simply too serious; blood kept unstoppably flowing out from along the cut of his injury.

    而身后其它的侵袭者也开始向泰伽的族人发起进攻,身体摇晃,胸前被血液染红的泰伽,视线模糊的看着族人在侵袭者的进攻中一一倒下,愤怒与绝望的他,跪倒在地,手臂支撑着自己的身体,抓挠着干裂的大地,发出低沉的吼叫。

    And the other invaders behind him also started launching their attack on TaiJia’s clansmen. His body swayed; TaiJia, whose chest had been died red by blood, watched with hazy eyesight as the clansmen collapsed one after another under the invaders’ assault. Angry and in despair, he fell to his knees on the ground, his arm propping up his body, scratching at the dry and cracking Earth with a deep and low howl.

    “都结束了,泰伽,不要再做无谓的挣扎”

    “Everything has ended, TaiJia, don’t struggle meaninglessly anymore”

    “这就是你的命运”

    “This is just your fate”

    “永别了,可怜的泰伽”

    “Farewell, pitiful TaiJia”

    侵袭者手中紧握着长矛走向了跪倒在地的泰伽,对准了它的心脏位置,重重的刺了下去,鲜血从穿透的矛尖滴落在地。

    The invader, with a spear firmly held in his hand, walked towards TaiJia as he kneeled on the ground, took aim at his heart, and heavily stabbed into him; blood from the point of the piercing spear dripped onto the ground.

    绝望的泰伽已经放弃了抵抗,接受了死亡的命运。

    Despairing, TaiJia had already given up on resistance, and accepted the fate of his death.

    “为什么”

    “Why”

    “我还活着?”

    “Am I still alive?”

    原来是在长矛即将要刺入泰伽胸口的一刻,双腿流着鲜血的伊斯特拉冲到了泰伽的身后,挡下了对它致命的一击,长矛刺穿了伊斯特拉的肩膀。

    It turned out that at the moment the spear was about to pierce through TaiJia’s chest, Yisitela, with blood flowing from both of his legs, rushed behind TaiJia, blocking the fatal blow to him; the spear impaled Yisitela’s shoulder.

    “对不起,请你原谅他们”

    “I am sorry, please forgive them”

    “我愿意,承担他们曾经犯下的过错”伊斯特拉哭泣着向泰伽为族人求情

    “I am willing, to bear the wrongs they’ve done” Yisitela wept as he pleaded with TaiJia for the sake of his clansmen.

    “为什么”

    “Why”

    “你要来救我”

    “Did you save me”

    “为什么,你要救一个伤害过你的生命?”泪水大量的从泰伽的眼眶涌出。

    “Why, must you save a life that has harmed you?” Teardrops streamed out of TaiJia’s empty sockets.

    “为什么”泰伽话语声中带着哭泣,紧紧的抱住了眼前受伤的伊斯特拉

    “Why” TaiJia’s voice sobbed, as he tightly held the wounded Yisitela before his eyes.


    “因为你,跟我们一样”伊斯特拉空洞的眼注视着泰伽的脸。

    “Because you, are the same as us” Yisitela’s empty eyes gazed at TaiJia.

    “我们是一样的啊”

    “We are the same ah”


    “谢谢你”在哭泣中,泰伽再一次站了起来。

    “Thank you” As he wept, TaiJia once again stood up.

    当那些侵袭者再次向泰伽刺杀的一刻,已经重伤的泰伽紧紧的抱住了伊斯特拉,用自己的身体去抵挡了侵袭者全部的攻击,长矛的利刃割开了它全身上下的血肉,却依然无法穿透他的身躯,被他保护的伊斯特拉几乎没有受到一点伤害,这简直是一个奇迹,一个血肉之躯的生命,却抵挡下了钢铁利刃的疯狂进攻。遭遇这一幕的伊斯特拉也被深深的震撼了,泪水止不住的流下,想要挣脱,不想让泰伽再遭受更多的伤害,却仍然被紧紧的保护着,同时周围的族人也开始了向侵袭者的反击。

    The moment those invaders tried to kill TaiJia again, the heavily wounded TaiJia tightly hugged Yisitela, using his own body to block the entirety of the invaders’ attacks. The sharp blade of the spears sliced open all of the flesh on his body, but was still as before unable to cut through his body. Protected by him, Yisitela didn’t suffer a bit of harm. This was practically a miracle; a flesh and blood body of a life, nevertheless was able to resist the wild attacks of the sharp blades of steel. Yisitela, encountering this scene, was also deeply shocked. Teardrops flowed down uncontrollably; he wanted to struggle, not wanting to let TaiJia suffer even more injuries; the surrounding clansmen also started to counterattack the invaders.

    “现在,我原谅它们了”

    “Right now, I forgive them”

    “谢谢你”

    “Thank you”

    “伊斯特拉”

    “Yisitela”

    已经奄奄一息的泰伽断断续续的说出了这几个字,望着眼前的伊斯特拉,脸上终于露出了笑容。

    Already on his last gasps, TaiJia spasmodically uttered these few words, looking towards the Yisitela before his eyes, his face finally revealing a smile.

    他缓慢的抬起手去摸伊斯特拉的头,然后顺着他的头发划落在地,再没有抬起来。

    He slowly lifted his hand to stroke Yisitela’s head, afterwards, fell to the ground along the direction of his hair, never again lifting.

    伊斯特拉的族人,睁开了他们的眼,选择了与侵袭者同归于尽,最终保护下了伊斯特拉。

    Yisitela’s clansmen, opened their eyes wide, and chose to die with the invaders, in the end protecting Yisitela.

    血流成河的古老村庄,遍地都是血肉模糊的尸骨,只有伊斯特拉活了下来,族人没有像以前那样再舍弃他,他们选择了付出自己的生命,来保护这个承担他们全部过错的孩子。

    In the blood-soaked ancient village, there were badly mangled skeletons everywhere. Only Yisitela survived; the clansmen did not abandon him like they did the others before. They chose to pay with their own lives to protect this child who undertook all of their mistakes.

    命运神从伊斯特拉的记忆中苏醒,目睹了曾经发生在这个世界历史长河中的一幕。这段记忆将深深的刻印在他现存的脑海中,直到生命的尽头。同时他的身体上留下了伊斯特拉种族特有的生命之眼,而命运之神的旅程才刚刚开始。

    The God of Fate awakened from Yisitela’s memories, witnessing the scene which had once occurred during the long river of history of this world. This segment of memory was deeply carved in his existing mind, until the end of life. At the same time, his body kept the eye of life unique to Yisitela’s race, and the journey of the God of Fate was just beginning.

    "与那时一样"

    "流过它的嘴角与下"
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    :aww::blobhighfive::blob_pompom:新年快乐,我的朋友,你翻译的真是太棒了.

    你作为翻译者,可以在任何地方发布和分享这个作品,也可以用来展示你翻译的成果.

    :X3:真是太感谢你了,辛苦了.
     
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    xiaolong255 Well-Known Member

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    第一章翻译完了,在#78楼.每个人都可以转发,因为这部作品是公益性的,希望让更多人看到.有wuxiaworld账号的朋友可以帮忙转发到那里,可能是网络问题,我无法登陆wuxiaworld的论坛:cry:

    转发的时候,请注明作者(牧场的晓龙)和翻译者(Murcott).

    再次感谢Murcott的帮忙,能让这部作品被更多人看到:LOL:

    The first chapter of the translation is over, at #78.everyone can forward, because this work is nonprofit, hoping to let more people see. Friends wuxiaworld account can help forward there, it may be a network problem, I can not login wuxiaworld Forum:cry:

    When forwarding, please indicate the author (牧场的晓龙) and translator (Murcott).

    Once again, thanks to Murcott's help, this work can be seen by more people::LOL:
     
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