Spoiler [BL] Straight Guy's Goddess System

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    I thought they were napping
     
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    x.x if only >.< but yea i threw them at husband so I can do another part maybe 2 then its time for me to coax baby to sleep, she's very excited atm and refuses to settle down.

    Editted: 8.09pm 1/19/2018
    It seems i lied...its getting too detailed like usual argh >.< i can't seem to stick to my goals lol.

    The Qing Meng Yuan sect was closed after 2 days of clearing out the demon clansmen and the demonic beasts, during this time MC was in a coma for 7 days and nights, MC finally woke up and noticed he's in an unfamiliar place...its not the sect nor is it the old uncle's house...the room is spacious and seems to have simple but quality furnishings... then he decided to check the system panel

    Blue task I: Get acquainted with Zhu Yuan, completed, Reward: 10 gold
    Zhu Yuan [blue target]: Friendly: 0% / Hostile: 0%

    MC started to think about why ZY was summoned when he used the blue paper rune and was confused... shouldn't it be a spiritual being so why was a person summoned instead. ZY end up mistaking him for a summoner. Eventually he put it out of mind and checked the system store instead and was stunned at what he saw, 5/6 slots were filled with the blue summoning runes [the blue paper rune thinge], he was really unhappy, he didn't want to face ZY again so why are all these filling up the store slots!

    MC saw the last slot had a golden pill, pill effect, after taking it, increases cultivation speed by 3x, duration 1 month. MC wanted to buy it but the system prompt that he didn't have enough gold to buy it....the pill costs 200g and he has only 130g, short by 70g. MC regrets that he won't be able to get it next time he gets enough coins because by then the store would be refreshed..keeps in mind that he will save up carefully and not spend wantonly.

    The system prompt that he can now have a discount since he completed more than 10 tasks, MC immediately jumped for this and the system said he can buy items for at a discount but he must purchase everything in the store or the store will not refresh. So the price was reduced by 90% and so MC decided to go with it..that just means he can buy the pill for 20g instead of 200g, the extra cost of the blue summoning runes were negligible. MC suddenly regret...maybe he should've waited til the store had more expensive things and use this discount but o well.

    MC hears YW outside and it seems she invited someone to check his condition, the man also said that MC's spirit can't be located...MC started to panic. YW started to cry and asked what will happen to MC now, because if he doesn't have a fighting spirit then how can he survive the rite of adulthood which was the trial of the ancient gods, MC is now 16 and this rite occurs at 17 for all cultivators. YW started to beg TY to ask his uncle [?] to come help MC.

    The author started to talking about the cultivation system of the world:

    Fighting spirit innate quality: white, green, blue, purple, gold
    Cultivation stages: awakening, transformation, spirit boundary, integration, mahayana, and supreme and each period has 10 ranks

    Zhu Yuan: gold fighting spirit, 10th rank of integration stage - Fighting spirit: Golden Six Wings [金色六翼]
    Ling YunYi: golden fighting spirit, 10th rank spirit boundary *destroyed* - Fighting spirit: Fierce Sword blood remnant [? 凶劍血殘]
    Li Yan: Blood clan holy spirit, 6th rank of integration stage - Fighting spirit: Blood Jewel [血凝珠]
    Last ML hasn't appeared yet will add later.
    He Wei[MC]: purple fighting spirit, 3rd rank of awakening stage *destroyed* - Fighting spirit: Binding Spirit Immortal Robes [結靈仙衣]

    Um...baby is tired now so maybe i can fit in one more after she falls asleep, that is if i don't fall asleep too lol!
     
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    You are awesome!!! :blobparty::blobparty: Thank you for the spoilers. :aww::aww: We can wait so if you want to rest then do so...:blobpeek::blobokhand::blobpeek:
     
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    Thank you for spoilers!! You deserve your rest :blobsmilehappyeyes::blobmelt:
     
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    MC was worried about his missing fighting spirit, but TY said that if its that person then maybe they can really solve the problem and the man YW invited also agreed. MC thought about the rite of adulthood and seems to be worried but felt that he was determined to survive it no matter what. He started to meditate[?] and saw various elements but he was rejected by most of them until he saw blue elements and felt the urge to absorb this particular element, he instinctively felt that if he absorbed enough of this blue element he might be able to gain a new fighting spirit....he was focused on absorbing elements and woke up to a knock to find that the person they invited was SDY.

    When SDY checked MC's body, MC noticed the blue aura again and felt the compelling urge to absorb them but he controlled himself and suddenly it was gone. SDY noticed something at MC's chest and his eyes darkened for a moment before he said that MC's fighting spirit wasn't gone but it was severely weakened and if he was able to absorb water spirit energy he will be able to recover his fighting spirit. SDY decided to take MC back with him to his own water spirit spring because he happens to be a water spirit cultivator as well.

    MC found himself in the spring with SDY and for a moment he was nervous but remembered that they were both men so there shouldn't be any nervousness anyway. SDY mentioned that MC's birthday is in 3 days and MC didn't' know it was so soon but SDY said not to worry and he would help MC out. SDY just told him to sit down and meditate and SDY will help guide....tbh i don't get much of details going on here but SDY will help MC heal his fighting spirit by absorbing the water spirit aura i think. After MC absorbed a bit of the aura, SDY told him they have to enter the water so i guess they stripped anyway and MC was trying not to stare at SDY's great body [;)]. MC keeps telling himself SDY is a man don't get excited, eventually MC following SDY into the water, SDY turned around and pulled him closer and said that the aura is strong and maybe too much for MC so he's going to help MC with absorbing it. MC was thinking about how there's a difference in their heights and got a bit depressed for a moment then settled down to focus on absorbing.

    After a day and a night, SDY looked over MC's features and then looked at his chest and he can see the patterns of the beautiful ice flower and it seems to be growing...someone sealed the Holy Ice Spirit of the Ice clan into MC, SDY deduced that ZY was the one who did it..and started to wonder about the reason behind it, MC's fighting spirit and innate talent isn't enough ...then picked up MC and looked over him carefully and found that MC was a natural born spirit body[?] and felt a bit happy. SDY put some sort of seed into MC's mouth and did something else before a sweet fragrance started to spread and smiled. The Holy spirit of the Ice Clan have the power to go against heavens but the demonic spirit of the wood clan will linger in one's bones [?]. SDY thinks that since ZY wants a worthy opponent then SDY will make sure that MC become someone worth admiring.

    edit: 6:24 pm 1/20/2018

    MC finally recovered enough to see his fighting spirit and noticed the robe now has some ice blue flowers blooming on it, he was a bit puzzled as to where this came from but when he asked SDY about it, SDY just said that his fighting spirit is improving in quality so its gaining patterns[?]. MC felt a bit like something was off but didn't feel that SDY would need to deceive him so he accept it. SDY reassured MC that his current cultivation is enough to get through the trial. YW and TY were talking about the adulthood trial and he blurted out that it seems more like a curse than a trial. SDY stared at MC when he heard this and he agreed with what MC said and then offered to take MC as his disciple after the trial since they are both water spirit cultivators. MC happily accepted and in 3 hours he will turn 17.

    Suddenly MC felt an overwhelming pain just like the moment ZY placed the ice flower in is body, and as he was curled up in pain suddenly an overwhelming evil aura with a sweet fragrance exploded out and caused YW and TY to go into a daze, SDY quickly put the 2 children to sleep and helped MC suppress the evil flower and the ice flower, SDY didn't think that the ice flower would cause the evil flower to bloom so soon...not long after MC opened his eyes and SDY said that he will take MC as his personal disciple, MC wanted to protest but SDY said that MC meets all his requirements and so MC agreed and then SDY painted a symbol of blood on MC's forehead which seeped in and disappeared and SDY finally introduced himself.

    宋端儀 - Song Duan Yi

    [At first i thought it was Duan Qing but it isn't >.<I realize i might have missed his whole name pfft...sorry i'll go fix it >_<]

    He realized this guy was the ultimate villain of the novel, SDY was the most dead inside [亡徒] person in the entire story and he just took this guy as his master. He also realized he received SDY's blood mark as his personal disciple so he can't betray him or he will receive a severe backlash. MC thinks to himself, he's totally finished this time... SDY treats people kindly on the surface but his favorite pastime is to raise someone from the bottom and then once they reach the heavens he would kick them down into endless hell. [sounds like pride pft]. Dammit author did you have to make him seem so amiable and beautiful, i wouldn't have fallen into this trap ahhh. While MC was caught up in his dilemma he heard a prompt:

    The main story will resume, please prepare to change.

    MC was startled, is this to help LYY? He quickly opened the system panel and saw his task:

    Red Task VII: Escape from the Land of Trials. Accepted.

    MC started to inwardly curse, just when did he accept this task?! Then he saw another line:

    After task completed, Reward: 5000 gold and 3 store refreshing coupons [? 商店刷新卷三張]

    MC: .... Birds die for food, humans die for wealth..I'll fight. MC quickly thought back to the plot and remembered that the Land of Trials is perpetually dark and there the Blood Kin and the Demon Clan reign, the place is violent and a place where the strong rules and the weak can only die. As a result of his baptism there, LYY 3 views became warped. MC starts to think about how he's going to help LYY get out of there not only that this is all according to SDY's plan..how can he find the way out of his master's plan. MC started to think about what he should try to bring along but then he saw another prompt:

    Black task I: Get acquainted with Song DuanYi completed, Reward: 10 gold.

    MC quickly checked the store and was stunned all 6 slots were filled with beautiful things~,
    Hercules's Pill [大力神丸],
    Blizzard Summon [?暴雪臨世],
    Universe Bag [乾坤袋],
    Invincible Shield [無敵護盾],
    9 revolution life pellet [?九轉回生丹],
    small pack of blast pills [?小包爆烈丸]。[forgive me i suck at this lol]

    MC felt like crying, he had only 102 gold and can't afford it, they were so expensive! The he noticed that there was a countdown and then he looked at the prices again...and it's suddenly discounted..what's up with that...does that mean that the discount he used last time is still ongoing? He saw that the small pack of blast pills has 10 explosive pills inside and its only 5 gold..so doesn't that mean the 90% off discount is still going. MC bought the universe bag and expanded his inventory to 10 slots, he bought the pack of explosive pills, he packed some of his clothes, and then decided pack up the blue summon runes too, and also stuffed the food left for him into the bag as well and got a prompt.

    The story is starting, re-positioning host, transmitting.....

    edited: 7:05pm 1/20/2018

    MC got sucked into the black hole and arrived in the land of trials in that female-ish body, and saw corpses everywhere and felt himself pale...but he was determined to find LYY, the system would not send him here if it was LYY was not close by. MC felt a bit sad that LYY had to deal with this terrible place, but toughen up, LYY is not a coward even if MC is..so surely he's alive somewhere in here. MC is currently at the 5th rank of awakening stage, so he can see a bit further than before and he saw some light in the distance and as he got closer he saw that it was LYY all bloody with a pair of dark empty dull eyes. LYY was fighting against 3 ppl, 1 blood kin and 2 demon clansmen.

    MC was worried if LYY can win but noticed that LYY was using the Fierce sword blood remnant. This place is full of the collected aura filled of resentment, despair, grief, and other negative emotions....it seems like LYY absorbed this aura and this caused his fighting power to increase. LYY killed them all quickly and saw MC, to LYY its like a goddess descent into hell, the only light in this darkness..he quickly went over to MC and hugged him. Although LYY's is hugging MC too tightly, MC didn't have the heart to push him off since he understood how LYY felt at this moment. LYY spoke in a hoarse voice...

    You didn't die.

    MC was startled...but then he said that he's alive so they need to find a place to rest and he will talk to LYY.
    They walked until they found a place with some water and LYY walked in with MC, MC wanted to protest but LYY told him its too dangerous and he needs to stay close. LYY made something like a red bubble and put MC inside so it floats with LYY while keeping MC from getting wet i think, and MC can vaguely see LYY strip and clean himself then wondered why LYY decided to do this since they were both men...until he saw his 'rabbits' then realized he wasn't quite a man atm. [:ROFLMAO:] Soon LYY finished and walked out of the water with his robe loosen worn and MC got out of the bubble, LYY pulled MC into his arms and started to kiss him deeply, MC was startled but quickly dazed and felt himself shiver as he got caught up in the intense kiss. LYY kissed him fiercely like he wanted to devour MC to keep him forever.

    LYY eventually stopped but still gently kissed MC's lips and asked for his name, MC's mind cleared up a bit and he answered with his real name. MC quickly told LYY that he didn't die, but he can't tell LYY what happened or how he got here but he doesn't intent to harm LYY. LYY just looked at him with clear eyes and said he believe MC then bent down to kiss him again. MC tried to stop him by offering food but LYY shook his head and went back to kissing MC. MC starting to daze as he tried to figure out why LYY was kissing him then realized maybe he needed to heal and so MC activated E.H. skill. The kiss became heated and deep eventually LYY stopped and rubbed their lips together and told MC that he just wants to kiss MC and not to use E.H. and MC just stared at him with his face flushing....then MC realized that LYY thinks he's a woman and ...so does that mean LYY ...oh no..!

    Then they were interrupted by another person who seem relieved to see them, this person introduced himself as Lin Xuan, and MC remembered that this guy was originally the first human LYY encountered in this place and LYY trusted him but LX had an ulterior motive. LYY and LX went through alot together and LYY trusted LX greatly but in reality LX was SDY's pawn arranged to blacken LY further... LX betrayed LYY.

    So by this time in the plot, ZY wiped out LY's sect/family[?], LY destroyed his body, and SDY completely warped his 3 views. MC thinks to himself with mixed feelings and wondered why SDY did this to LYY was there some sort of enmity between them? The novel never mentioned it.

    MC told LX there's some water nearby and asked if he wanted to freshen up and LYY turned to ask MC what was wrong, MC told him that LX seems suspicious...but he wasn't sure if LYY would believe him. LYY told MC that he understood, and when LX came back talking happily to them, LYY abruptly attacked him. MC was startled, he thought maybe LYY would just be wary of LX not straight out kill him. LX backed up after a few clashes with LYY and tried to use a black paper and MC told LYY to quickly take him down because LX is going to run away. LYY quickly killed him in a bloody way and MC was too scared to look anymore and closed his eyes and LYY went to hugged MC close to comfort him and bent down to kiss him again.

    MC was confused, LYY shouldn't have warped already, LX has yet to betray him so what happened, but then he thought back to the moment LYY was pushed through the gate and saw the moment LY killed him and it seems that made an impact on him. Not only that LYY also entered this place in his flesh and blood body which is worsen the torment he would have to go through. MC felt overwhelming guilt and held LYY and started to apologize while LYY gently stroked MC"s hair and whispered that MC saved him so he doesn't have to apologize.


    edit 8:12pm 1/20/2018

    MC asked LYY if he seen any ruins while he was here and LYY was startled and said that he didn't, then MC described it and LYY thought for a bit and whispered he seen such a place. It seems to be a city where the demon clansman gathers, the twin cities. MC realized that the time wasn't right, in the plot, this place should've been ruined already...but no matter that place still exist so they should go to retrieve the treasure. LYY said he will take MC tomorrow, but for now they need to avoid the blood rain and LYY picked up MC...MC said he can walk but LYY said this way was faster...MC didn't feel right being held in a princess hug not to mention his D cup rabbits are brushing up against LYY constantly. [:ROFLMAO:]

    LYY and MC found shelter in a cave, MC took out some rose crisps to eat and offered some to LYY, LYY said he's not hungry, but MC insists that its really good so LYY leaned in and licked MC's lips. MC froze and LYY leaned in for a deeper kiss then commented with a straight face that it was really does taste good. MC started to flush and then recalled that maybe LYY likes him and he told LYY that he was a man, but LYY stared at his chest. LYY looked him over and said he doesn't care, MC's gender doesn't matter. MC was confused at LYY's answer and MC has alot of secret he doesn't really want to talk about atm, so he just focused on eating and then went to sleep.

    MC had a strange dream, he dreamt that he had a male body and told LYY that he's a man and he even stripped to prove it but LYY expression didn't change and even hugged him close and kissed him. MC was startled awake and saw LYY was still meditating..but then he noticed a black hole open up and sucked him in....why didn't he receive a system prompt just now!

    MC woke up in his original body and saw SDY, he was a bit scared and then SDY said that he came here to check on MC and to give him a cultivation technique to him so MC can focus on cultivating so he came over in the middle of the night since that's the best time to cultivate water spirit energy. MC was touched but he still was a bit afraid of SDY, SDY asked MC what happened just now, it seems like he lost his soul again. MC said that after he ate, he just went to sleep and then woke up to see SDY, SDY said he will help MC treat it later, but leads MC to go cultivate in a blessed cave for cultivating.

    MC followed him out and thought that SDY is pretty powerful to actually go against the system and force his soul back into his body. SDY held MC and flew up the peak and MC started to think SDY, but SDY said that MC is is only personal disciple everything that belongs to SDY naturally belongs to MC as well, MC felt his heart shiver..though he wasn't sure if its because he was touched or scared. SDY left him in the blessed cave and gave him the technique then told him to take his time to cultivate and left. MC remembered his gold pill that triples cultivation rate for a month and decided to use that and also he needs to figure out how to get back to the other body, it would be horrible if LYY woke up to his empty shell. MC was also worried that SDY would call his soul back again.

    MC figure he might try to put himself in a trance like state while meditating and perhaps his soul can leave to go back, then he sat down to meditate and thought back to what ZY, he didn't think that the injury ZY caused him to only be exclusive to water elements. He started to focus on cultivating and while in a trance he felt his soul get pulled away from his body.

    SDY opened his eyes the moment MC's soul left and went to bless cave to check and saw that MC is still cultivating and sighed in relief. He went back to his room and suddenly a black flame appeared above his head.

    Hmmm...i need.....to shorten it damn x.x, but the kiss scenes teehee..
     
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    Ok, continue tomorrow gotta put the kids to bed, busy day tomorrow~
     
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    Pachia Go At My Own Pace~

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    :blob_grin: Even though I’m not that much of a fan of harem, this story is obviously different, not only are all the ML one and the same person, some of them are even evil and deserve to be hurt by the MC, which doesn’t makes me feel guilty or pained for them :blobowoevil_horns:
     
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    Aww you might feel it later tho, there's a reason why ML is the way he is, every single fragment.
     
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    Pachia Go At My Own Pace~

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    I know... this is kinda similar to the seven husband novel after all. People have reason why they turn evil, it was just that seeing the MC being hurt by them kinda made me angry. :cookie:
     
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    Thank you so much for the hard work on the summaries, @Kailyria20 !
     
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    Thank you so much for spoilers! :aww: Ooh the kiss scenes are just..:blobnosebleed: if you can remember more details feel free to put them in hehe :blobmelt: Keep up the good work!! @Kailyria20 :blobhero:
     
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    0TL ...how'd it turn into a summary o.o...wasn't it spoiling maybe too detailed lmfao.
     
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    Noooooooo its's not too detailed, keep the details the way it is pls! :blobastonished: well...you can add more details on THOSE parts...oh gosh I'm so rotten :facepalm:
     
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    MC arrived back in his female-ish body and woke up in LYY's arms, LYY said that he felt as if MC was gone but MC said he was just having a nightmare, so LYY told him to go back to sleep, MC wanted to move out of LYY's arms but LYY won't let go and MC didn't go to sleep because he felt awkward...LYY whispered if MC didn't want to sleep so he leaned down and touch his lips to MC's lips and MC froze. LYY lightly teased open MC's lips and deepen the kiss until it became almost frantic as if confirming MC is alive. MC after while suddenly thought of the situation, it's night time, there's only a man and a half-woman alone together, and kissing....let's not go there...he hurried backed up and said he wants to sleep right away. LYY just calmly looked at him and told MC to sleep...MC eventually fell asleep despite being nervous but LYY watched over him all night til morning. [:D]

    They head over to the twin city and as they head over to the dragon statue where the ruin was located, something caught MC's eyes and he was compelled to go look at it. The seller said it was wood beads[?] MC looked at it and thought that it was the wood clan's soul pellet[?] and wondered why he was drawn to it since he was suppose to be water spirit exclusive but when he touched it, it automatically absorbed into his hand. The seller got angry but suddenly MC felt heat surge in his chest and LYY quickly grabbed him close but the sweet fragrance burst out and quickly spread.

    Suddenly all sounds stopped and everyone turned to look at MC and they all felt the urge to completely possess the girl in white [MC], LYY held MC with one arm while fending off everyone else, he was the closest one to MC and felt it the strongest, but the urge to keep MC from being snatched was stronger. MC was caught up in the pain in his chest, he didn't understand why the wood bead would cause such a reaction. Eventually the pain dulled but when MC opened his eyes, the area around him was covered in blood and gore like a scene from hell. He noticed LYY killed off people that was lunging at him and he urged LYY to go to the dragon statue. Pain struck MC again and he tried to use his spirit energy to control it but it made it worse and in his heart, there's a scene of the ice spirit energy and wood spirit energy attempting to devour each other fighting for supremacy.

    MC urged LYY again to go to the statue, there's an underground palace they can hide in, LYY assured him no one can take him away and quickly ran off in that direction, MC made LYY promise to not stop until they reach the underground palace...after LYY agreed, MC activated E.H. skill in order to drain his spirit energy completely so the 2 flowers won't have any more energy to fight. MC didn't notice that there's a pink tender lovely flower budding beautifully in his chest...the seed SDY planted is starting to fully bloom.

    MC finally regain control and led LYY inside, there's a pathway of illusions, MC told LYY hold tightly onto his hand and not to believe anything he see here. MC at first saw LYY's illusion of his happy moments in lotus zen sect then it suddenly changed to LY holding a girl in white and kissing her neck, the girl's chest was bloody and her eyes were empty void of feelings, suddenly the girl quickly pull out a black blade and stabbed herself and blood burst, and the girl melted into ice and disappeared. MC was startled, why did that scene appear here...MC quickly pulled LYY all the way to the end out of the illusion and LYY pulled him close to ask if that really happened, he apologized to MC in a shaking voice and felt that if he was stronger that wouldn't have happened.

    MC told LYY that it was false, there was some other illusion that occur, of a child getting eaten by ghouls but the child didn't react at all even til he became bones and when the ghouls were finished the bones regenerated back into that boy again and the scene starts over. MC couldn't recall this scene in the novel but he doesn't know why this illusion is occurring. MC never stopped and kept pulling LYY forward..then he noticed that his hands were empty and LYY was gone, he turned back and kept yelling for LYY, LYY just told him to go forward and that he would catch up soon enough. Um anyway something xianxia-ish goes on >.> i don't get it but MC managed to help LYY out of the last illusion and they got through it to the treasure. IT was something transparent and apparently a Kirin Dan[?] but MC remembered it was suppose to be red but then again LYY wasn't suppose to be here yet, but the underground palace was starting nto collapse so they just took it and left.

    [I love reading Xianxia but i can't mtl it for crap xD, as for the kissing scene there imo i think LYY is teasing MC despite being so straight face lmfao!]

    Edit 7:07 pm 1/21/2018

    MC and LYY finally made it out to a forest outside of the twin cities when MC noticed his chest heating up and spread to the rest of body, he looked down a saw a pink tender flower in full bloom and suddenly strong enticing fragrance spread out and LYY hugged MC close and started to kiss him deeply and MC instinctively responded and felt a desire rise up which eclipsed his thoughts as he fell into the kisses and caresses. The fragrance spread out all the way to the twin cities driving everyone mad with desire.

    When one of their pursuers caught up and stared with intense desire at MC, LYY stopped, but MC protested and started to cling to LYY, LYY whispered gently that he has to take MC away from there and he started killing off the people that caught up. LYY's eyes darkened as he glared at these people.

    What qualifications do you have to see him?
    What rights do you have!
    He's mine!
    No one else can touch him!

    The Shadow Orchid fully bloomed, the people want her but was afraid of LYY....

    Apparently some elite demon clansmen i think[?] shows up and they were a pair of twins, they wanted to capture LYY [because of his golden fighting spirit] and MC [because of the flower causing desire] and they both attacked and manage to snatch MC out of LYY's hands.

    LYY felt darkness rise in his heart, why does everything get taken away, his home, his loved ones and even his He Wei [MC]....

    Even if i lose everything, as long as i have you, then nothing else matters [? 還憑什麼擁有]

    LYY madly attacked the twins and finally snatched MC back in exchange he was severely wounded. The twins thought he was going to escape but he decided to feed his fighting spirit his blood in order to destroy them, LYY's face twisted into a strange smile as he told them to feel the pain of losing everything, their city, home, wealth, power and their lives.

    Not long after MC woke up to the ruins of the twin city, he saw LYY was passed out and didn't respond to him, he checked over LYY's body and couldn't locate his fighting spirit. MC thought LYY died for a moment, but LYY is the protagonist so that's impossible then he decided to use E.H. skill and until the system prompt him about low energy MC realized LYY did not respond at all. He tried to absorb water spirit to replenish but this place has a low amount of it, then he remembered he can absorb wood spirits as well so he started to do so but then the water spirit and wood spirit started to fight again. MC eventually decided to look at his own robe spirit to see wth is going on. MC started bitching at his robe spirit for not controlling the other 2 in order to provoke it into dominating the other 2. Finally the robe joined the fight and robe took over the other 2 and MC was finally able to draw in enough energy to use E.H. on LYY.

    LYY started to recover and MC was relieved, MC thought that if he can absorb fire spirits and give it to LYY that would help and suddenly the robe flashed red and MC was able to absorb fire spirits. MC was really happy, so that robe is pretty useful after all, and went back to healing LYY. Then MC remembered the Kirin Dan and saw that its now flaming red so he fed it to LYY and suddenly flames burst to the sky, it seems the Kirin dan is not just fire but a very rare fire and blood spirit coexistence. Now LYY can absorb fire and blood spirits,


    edit 8:10 pm 1/21/2018

    MC decided to move to a safer place, so he took LYY to dragon statue to stay for the night, and went down into the cave under the statue, but then he was a red silhouette of a man heading his way. LY landed and smiled at MC....

    I didn't expect that it really was you.

    LY held MC close and licked his neck and bit down...MC felt as if blood was flowing out uncontrollably. Normally blood clansmen prefer to use blood spirits to drink blood, the act of drinking blood personally is done with dolls or lovers, regardless this is normally not done in public. LY for hundreds of years never kept a doll, much less a lover but in front of the crowd he actually bit into that girl's neck, stunning everyone. Everyone suddenly realized why LY did so, they got a whiff of the girl's blood and it was so fragrant and seductive making them all restless. LY almost couldn't stop himself from draining MC completely, the blood was much more delicious than he remembered, but finally feeling MC go limp he stopped when MC asked him to stop before he passes out.

    LY compromised and looked at MC and said that he can spare LYY if MC goes with him willingly. MC decided to do this in order to save LYY and LY warned MC that if he commits suicide to escape again he will kill LYY right afterwards. MC asked to move LYY to a safe place then he will leave with LY, and LY followed closely behind...MC smiled and said that he can't possibly escape under LY's watch..

    Little girl don't excite me, I won't be able to hold back, when we go back... *LYY lower his voice seductively* can't help but to eat you.

    MC stiffened, his heart shook, why does that sound so ambiguous...forget it lets focus on saving LYY first.
    MC led LY who was floating LYY along and found a hidden room between the dragon statue's forefeet and placed LYY inside and left him some clothes, food, and a note.

    LY commented how MC was so nice to LYY, when he saw MC stiffen, he felt discomfort in his heart and held MC close and scrapped his fangs against his neck and whispered that he wouldn't make MC into a doll but instead will marry MC. MC was stunned...wth is with this. LY picked him up and gave an order to his subordinates to prepare his wedding right away.

    Everyone at the blood clan was in a frenzy, the leader is finally getting married and when is it? Today, right away! MC thought that if it wasn't because he needed to buy time for LYY, then he would commit suicide right away.
     
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    Ah kid's sleepy time and school for them tomorrow so i might come back and continue that is..if i don't fall asleep haha.
     
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    Nooooo!!!!!! More, I was left hanging.
     
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    MC hearing that they were going to get married fainted right away, LY didn't think MC fainted out of happiness but so what, MC can only belong to him from now on, her body, her blood, her everything will belong to him alone...while carrying MC LY thought, first he needs to fatten up his wife, otherwise she'll be accidentally drained dry one day. LY ordered for full details on the living habits and needs of an Ice clansman and ordered an ice palace to be build right away, sending the blood clansmen into another frenzy.

    MC woke up in a luxurious room and some maids came in calling him madam and asked if he needed help changing, ofc MC immediately told them no and they comment how beautiful MC was that the city lord [LY] was in love with him. After the maids left he realized it was a formal wedding attire and started to panic. MC thought he can hold off LY until LYY gets teleported out to a random location via that hidden room where they left him but he didn't expect LY to hold the wedding this night, the teleport only works once a day but during the day...right now still night. LY won't be able to do much to LYY once he fully absorbs the kirin dan so long as he has enough time to wake up but what's with this situation and what happens when that guy finds out I'm not female. Besides that couples of the blood clansman tend to feed on blood whilst doing 'that', MC doesn't think he can accept that fall of his morals....plus they are both men how can men do 'that' anyway.

    So LY walks in and tells MC to get changed so they can get married, MC was entranced by LY's beauty for a moment and sighed that its too bad LY wasn't a woman and then MC blurts out that they were both men and can't get married, LY stares pointed at MC's rabbits and MC said these are fake. LY demands that he prove it while chuckling, MC was stunned for a moment and LY kept looking at him with mirth and told him to quickly prove it and so MC grit his teeth and showed LY his 'lil bro' and suddenly LY grabbed him and stripped him all the way. LY stared at MC's body intensely then touched 'it' and commented that MC had an unexpected little secret and then said that the 'lil guy' was as lovely as MC.

    MC blushed and didn't dare move since LY held him and then LY slowly put the bridal dress on him and held MC close and whispered that when the wedding was over he can't wait to taste it *and licked MC's neck* MC's blood and beautiful body as well. They were held close together and MC felt LY hold his 'lil bro' and felt it respond and suddenly felt like killing himself...wth why did you respond!

    The blood clansmen wondered why MC was able to attract LY enough to marry him when they mentioned that MC was part of the Ice Clansman, which had strong healing abilities and even rebirth...which makes them a really ideal partner for a blood clansmen, but ice clansmen are actually very rarely seen and even their clan's location is unknown. They can only imagine how it would be like to drink from an ice clansman, is it cool and sweet?

    MC meanwhile during the wedding ceremony was trying to figure how to get out of the wedding night, and thought back to the blue summon runess, he's a bit scared of the risk but this is an emergency. LY eventually announced that they are to celebrate all night and he quickly carried MC back to their room. LY cut his own wrist and told MC to drink, MC just stared, LY said that if MC won't drink on his own then LY will feed it to him, so MC leaned forward slowly and steeled himself as he forced himself to drink the blood, in that instant, MC felt the blood surge to his heart and felt his fighting spirit respond happily and felt compelled to keep drinking falling into a trance.

    LY looked at MC drink his blood and felt obsession rise as he leaned forward and drank from MC's neck and felt desire rise and started to pull off MC's robe. MC felt a cool breeze then woke up from his trance and quickly used the blue summon rune and LY suddenly stopped as he felt a strong aura suddenly appear in the room. MC quickly pulled his robes back on and tried to cover himself up as much as he can in order to hide. [:LOL:]

    ZY looked on with interest and said that it's only been a few days and MC[?] end up in central city and he seems very happy to see LY, while LY was very angry as asked who ZY was.

    Feeding time for baby, be back in a bit.

    Edit: 12:49pm 1/22/2018

    SDY was sitting alone playing chess while he listen to a report, LX was confirmed to be dead, twin city was in ruins, LYY seems to be seriously injured and LY went to the twin cities for some reason, the person reporting asked if they should do something about LY, but SDY said that LY can't die and told him to leave. SDY opened his hand and a black aura rose up and formed 4 shadows, a blue eyed arrogant man [ZY], a provocative red hair blood kin [LY], a cold indifferent youth [LYY], and a man with silver snow hair [SDY] and stared at them for a while and waved his hands and they figures started to fuse together....SDY thought to himself this time he cannot fail.

    After ZY answered LY and told him his name, LY instantly attacked since ZY interrupted his good mood. As for ZY he was really happen to find a worthy opponent to fight so he immediately attacked back. ZY glanced at the figure under the quilts, it seems this kid didn't fail his expectations. MC observes as these 2 villains fight it out and seems entranced but then realize he's very close to the battle. As the battle got more intense, ZY sent out a powerful attack towards LY when they realized that they forgot to shield someone, they both rushed towards the bed at the same time intending to grab MC out of harm's way when MC got a system prompt:

    Extra task triggered, use sacrifice on the purple target.

    MC: ....

    The golden feather arrow [from ZY's golden six wing's attack] arrived close to LY and suddenly LY found MC's body infront of him, LY held MC's body close and demands that MC will not die...MC saw LY's face and when he heard him, he felt his heart twinge and he wanted to say something but he quickly lost control of the body due to the pain.

    Sacrifice was successful, extra task completed, reward: 100 gold.

    MC felt angry all of a sudden and wanted to uninstall the system, wth, he died for LY, won't LY misunderstand now? Thinking of what will happen next gave him a headache.

    LY looked at his empty hands as the snow melted,

    He will find him and keep him forever!

    Meanwhile MC is back in his original body in the blessed cave still cultivating sighed, did LYY manage to wake up and MC wonders where LYY could've been sent. So much dog blood, more than the dramas, MC didn't think he would be forced to die for LY....he also remembered that ZY tried to save him before he died but oh well, he died because of ZY so maybe LY won't go after LYY. MC checked the system and saw that the main quest is suspended for now. He decided he needs to focus on cultivating and gain some abilities otherwise if he keeps falling in situations where he's completely dependant on the system he will keep falling into these dog blood traps.

    MC checked on the store and found all sorts of cheat-level items...unfortunately the discount time is over and everything is quite expensive...he can't afford anything with his 147 gold. MC suddenly thought there seems to be a pattern to what appears in the store, it seems to somewhat respond to what he wants but at the same time the store's IQ is not too good as it doesn't take into consideration of how much gold MC has on hand. MC quickly ate something as he was gone for a days for his task, luckily food is kept fresh even if its layed out for a few days for him.

    After a few cycles of absorbing water spirits, MC started to feel pain in his heart and he noticed a pink flower there, he didn't wanna bother with it but as he continue to ignore it, he felt the pain increase and realized that pink flower wanted to be nurtured too, but there's no wood spirits here..then he thought about how the robe spirit had change elements for him to use and suddenly had it convert the water spirits into wood spirits which satisfied the Shadow Orchid, however MC didn't realize that caused the seductive fragrance to spread over the mountain.

    Baby nappy time.~
     
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    Ah i posted a bare bone spoiler in the introduction post if there's people that wanna know the whole reason behind the story ahead of time, i'll probably continue sometime later tonight probably...running around after my brats. xD