Spoiler Pleasing Start-Over (BL)

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  1. azure_sea

    azure_sea Well-Known Member

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    Title: 快意重来[快穿]
    Link: https://www.sto.cc/book-157927-1.html
    http://www.danmeila.com/chongsheng/20840.html

    Summary:
    Qiao Chen strangely enough transmigrated into an interstellar-age world and grew up once again. Then again, for some strange reason, was requested to go to different worlds and search for the soul parts of this world's military general. As he hopped into different worlds with the help of a system, he unexpectedly discovered that he transmigrated to his other self in every world.
    It doesn't matter if it's a coincidental chance or destined arrangement, since he has the chance to start-over, why not, while he is doing his task (of finding the soul pieces), try to get revenge and fulfilling his other self's wishes?
    Since God gave him the opportunity to change his fate, why shouldn't he live a pleasing life?

    Tags: MC=shou, very thick golden finger, 1v1

    NOTE: if anybody found the summary a bit confusing, a little explanation: MC is requested to travel to different worlds and find soul pieces of this general that is currently in a coma. he gets equipped with a system that the military provides (by plugging cables to his head), the system is more a program that helps him in his task. system doesn't talk, MC can press mentally a button that, for instance, make his body extract poison or alcohol. in the first world he woke up in a body and got information from the system, but while doing it and during his mission, he sometimes gets feelings/emotions that isn't his own, so he wonders if it comes from the previous owner. after the first world, he returns to the real world and asks one military officer if they made the system so that MC can get more into his role (by getting emotions from previous owners) and the officer said no. so MC thought that's strange, where is it coming from? he doesn't like the feeling bc it feels like as if he really lived through it all. then during the second world he thought maybe he woke up into his other self in this world? (you know, parallel worlds and different selves, etc.) thus the summary of transmigrating into his other selves.
    it's from the same author as "Cannon Fodder Cheating System" but with less typos and mistakes, lol. the story is finished and doesn't feel rushed as the one mentioned. but it's also half the length (around 108 pages), so that could be a reason xD
    i actually like the cannon fodder cheating system more despite all the mistakes and typos, bc of the unique worlds. this one is more standard although it has some twists, too. half of the worlds MC travels to has something to do with the military, in one of them it even has some SM play (ML whips MC's butt and MC gets aroused to his shame, lol) xD

    @alexfilia
     
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  2. alexfilia

    alexfilia Bromance & Fluff <3

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    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    I say Yes to this one. Will read :blobReach::blobsmilehappyeyes:
     
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  4. HesheFell

    HesheFell [Out of Retirement] [Looking for Recs Everywhere]

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    Muahahaha
    More food:sushi_tea: for the soul
    I will be reading this one as well.
     
  5. ludagad

    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    Can I ask for a teeny spoiler before I invest myself in this... Okay, not so teeny spoiler, and not just one...

    Does the MC get to live out his life in the alternative worlds? Like, get his happy ending and die of old age. And is the ML doting on MC, is their love exciting? :sushi_peak:
     
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  6. Kailyria20

    Kailyria20 Perpetually distracted

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    This one looks interesting :blobsmirk:, wonder if ML is that general hum.. ^^
     
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    Moonlightlily13 Well-Known Member

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    On the boat to follow this x
     
  8. Tintl

    Tintl Well-Known Member

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    Oo, this is going on my read list (which is surprisingly short, hmm I need to find more soon)
     
  9. theragingpanda

    theragingpanda ‹ lost in the books ›

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    Imma just lurks in like i always does in other BL threads for the spoiler
     
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  10. lizabernal96

    lizabernal96 Bella

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    Please more spoilers guys:aww::blobpopcorn_cool:
     
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    Finishing Arc 1:blobmelt:
    @ludagad so far they do life until old age despite MC hope he can leave before they are older.
    The scientists speculate that the general soul doesnt want to leave the time and space because he has unfinish wish, so MC mission was to help fulfill the wish.

    Arc 1, MC was switched at birth with (lets say) X. When they were 20 years old, X got in a car accident and in need of blood and the family finally know that X was not their son, and bring MC back. The story supposed to end like in hidden marriage with MC died in X schemes. But this time MC arrived when he just come to the family.
    According to MC, one body cannot take two soul so when he arrive, the real soul will disappear so he vowed to take revenge for the original soul instead.
    ML in this world is some big group president, when they first meeting MC was wondering what unfilled wish ML has, because he is so perfect, wealthy, genius, and come from loving family. When MC accidentally touching him the soul downloading system was activated. (I think ML fall in love at first sight)
    Their second meeting was when ML forced invite MC too his house and proceeded to "eat" him :blobparty::blobpopcorn_cool:
     
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    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    And ML's words were: "Young one, life is short, we shouldn't waste it by waiting around." (not quoting, my memory isn't that good) Lol, MC thought if it wasn't for his mission, he'd stay away from such a rogue. I also read arc 1, couldn't stop myself...Lost sleep over it too haha, now I have to go do work with bags under my eyes :blobdead:
     
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    Anie Well-Known Member

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    Looks good. Thank you for yours summaries.:blobsmilehappyeyes:
     
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    azure_sea Well-Known Member

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    Haha, i lost sleep over it, too :blobjoy:
     
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  16. Shem

    Shem ┃ᐕ) ⁾⁾「Lv 69 BL Hunter」☆ Vrelty's Seme ♤♡ ꪋς꧖ ☆

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    *peeks behind the curtain* |w*)
     
  17. lizabernal96

    lizabernal96 Bella

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    more spoilers please:aww:
     
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    System bl... :aww:
    Now if only there's a zombie arc :blobpeek:
     
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    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    Arc 2 is interstellar world: There are no males and females with drastic sex differences as here, both look male, but one gender has the characteristics of female - weaker, more slender, able to give birth. Not sure what role it played in this setting at all lol, mostly it didn't impact anyone's lives, unless you count one sentence at the end of the arc saying MC was pregnant (and that was it... no buns no nothing blah).

    Anyway, MC (original body) was a mecha mechanic (lol) who was engaged to one of the officers in the fifth fleet and they were supposedly in love. But after the officer crashed on some planet and was saved by some dude, he started losing interest in MC and falling in love with the dude, whom I'm gonna call white lotus for obvious reasons... The fiance gets the white lotus a job as a mecha engineer in the fifth fleet, and that's when MC also joins in order not to let the two get closer. CM was a genius engineer, but soon started making mistakes while white lotus fixed them and gained the glory. White lotus is a transmigrated individual with a system and he used the system to hack and steal MC's work. Eventually, the MC causes a huge accident and is dismissed from work, gets depressed and takes his own life.

    So our MC enters the body just after a minor accident that original body MC staged in order to check where the fiance's loyalties lie - both he and white lotus were in danger, but fiance went to save white lotus who was further away from him and let orig.MC get injured. So after (our) MC wakes up, he decides to use this as an excuse to let go of fiance and dissolve the engagement (in the prev life the fiance dissolved the engagement after MC's many mistakes, the emperor approved it, and also approved fiance's marriage to white lotus because white lotus had made many contributions by then). Fiance tries to argue that he still loves him, bla bla, but MC doesn't believe him. Both families are very powerful, so it was hard to dissolve the engagement, but MC sweet-talked his grandpa and fiance apparently put on some pressure on his dad, because it only took 5 days.

    MC then quits his job at the fifth fleet just when his superior wanted to dismiss him from head engineer to normal engineer. MC was like 'Nah, I need to learn more, I'm going back to school. Quit.' The vice-captain apparently hated MC because of some spat with MC's teacher, so he always took white lotus' side regardless of who was wrong. MC had enough of it. MC wanted to see what white lotus would do now that he wasn't there to get his work stolen (apparently, white lotus needs to see the work in order for the system in his head to be able to hack it and steal it). MC went back to his teacher and asked for a lab where he could build some mecha stuff in order to see whether he really lost his mojo, or someone was tampering with him (he obvi knew the truth, but he was setting up a long-drawn game of cat and mouse). MC developed some program that let mechas operate in air with ease. There was a testing ground for the various fleets and their gadgets, but the testing ground was double booked from the fifth fleet and the third fleet and no one would ease up. The fifth fleet was very public with some innovation they were making, while the MC was low-key with his. The 5th fleet vice-captain (calling him jerk from now on) suggests to battle the prototype mechas and it would serve as a test too. Mc's teacher was like 'You sure? Better sign this agreement that you won't bitch if your stuff gets turned into scraps.' (not quoting, but well, you get the idea) So MC's mecha and white lotus' Mecha battle it out and MC's mecha turns the other one into scraps (they're operated by soldiers). The soldier who operated MC's mecha was from third fleet and immediately asks MC's teacher to make more mechas for the third fleet because it was so easy to operate. Then third fleet's captain shows up and pesters teacher too, but teacher said it wasn't his decision, because the work belonged to MC. Together with that group was also our ML who's a high ranking officer in third fleet (called captain too, but MTL can't be counted on, he's more like a commander I guess). MC and ML don't interact yet.

    --Right, after MC woke up after the first arc, he learned that there was something installed on his system that made the ML get attracted to him, and that's why ML only met him once and fell in love, met him twice and pressed him on the bed in the first arc. MC was bitter that the feeling didn't come naturally, so he asked for this to be deinstalled. So in the second arc, he's happy that the feelings' development is normal paced.--

    Teacher convinces MC to enter the third fleet, and MC agrees because his father used to be there, and his condition for entering was to get his father's mecha. The mecha was very special - hundreds of years ahead of current science, so no one could turn it on after the father died. The mecha was created by father's lover, who later died in order to keep his secrets when he was chased by other countries. The father died revenging for his death. MC's 'mother' was forced to marry the father, both had their own lovers, but father's lover died, then father lost interest in everything else, so he married the mother and only showed some soft feelings when MC was born, but he remained cold to the mother. But later, he realized he wronged her too much, so asked the grandfather to let her remarry to her love after his death (he knew he was going on suicide mission). Mother was too happy to escape that hellish existence, so kinda forgot about the son (well, daughter) she was leaving behind, and by the time she came to her senses, orig.MC was already disillusioned and never forgave her. But MC in this life slowly mends their relationship. He also has a half-brother that ML gets jealous of at first, before he knew they were siblings.

    So there's this mock battle between fleets, and as the top fleets - 3rd and 5th battle each other. MC helps them win overwhelmingly, pissing off the vice-captain and the white lotus lol. In the meantime, he was always asking half-bro for this and that, but ML would inexplicably rush over and snatch the tasks. MC wanted to hack the 5th fleet's defenses, but had to do it manually, so ML volunteered to go with him to their base (in the mock battle). On the way, they had to swim through a river and MC ditched most of his luggage and clothes (to be light? sure buddy, you're totally not planning anything) and swam in underwear. He wore ML's overcoat after that (reaching his thighs) and ML couldn't stop staring at his body when MC dressed, even though he knew it was rude. Then they had to sleep for the night in one sleeping bag and ML got a hard-on. Then MC called him a rogue and grilled him why he has no self-restraint. Then ML says 'your butt looks good' earning himself a smack, lol. Anyway, third fleet won the mock battle and got some privileges.

    Urm what else. MC manages to revive father's mecha and even makes it operational, then lets his half bro pilot it, while he designs a new mecha for ML - more powerful and advanced. The army discovers some planet with minerals and metals and goes to plunder it. Third fleet leads, but fifth fleet constantly butts in, but makes errors, so third fleet gets more benefits. MC keeps creating new stuff and white lotus keeps trying to steal it but fails and brings trouble to others. MC gets injured on his back when he protected his mom from a corrosive metal liquid that white lotus and ex fiance smuggled in - they get punished as a result, but ML thinks they didn't get enough punishment. (glossing over details...) A vulcano erupts and people and equipment are stuck on the planet, the mechas have low visibility so they can't rescue. But then MC installs some improvements (he had them ready for the new model mecha), so third fleet manages to save everyone and everything important. But the other countries that came to mine and negotiate lose everything, so negotiations break and massive mini battles ensue. MC finishes the new mecha and ML dominates the battles, so most countries pull out, empire gets the goodies. White lotus makes ex fiance bring him to the new mecha to tamper with it, but MC already installed a firewall and a virus that invades the white lotus' system if he tries to hack his stuff (he already did that before with a seeking machine earlier, so the white lotus' system already had a virus). This virus ends up wiping the system from white lotus' head. MC reveals that white lotus always left a recognizable code whenever he tampered with his stuff, so that's why he always made errors in the fifth fleet, but was rising up in the third fleet. Ex fiance doesn't believe. MC says, we'll let the authorities investigate and decide, who cares what you believe.

    White lotus is found guilty and sentenced to 30 years for treason (tampering with the empire's mecha). It was found out that he hacked not only MC's work, but all the engineers in the fifth fleet (no choice after MC was gone). Fifth fleet also gets lowered in ranks and punished for various stuff. Ex fiance who was a co-conspirator (poor dude, he was the most clueless one...his only sin is stupidity, oh well...) goes to some distant planet to try and start anew and rise in ranks after he gets dismissed from the fifth fleet, but he was only oppressed there. White lotus was also bullied and tortured on the prison planet. He thinks it was the MC's work, but MC couldn't care less about them already. He was married to ML and was pregnant. The one revenging was the grandfather who resented the ex fiance and white lotus for injuring his grandson.

    MC and ML lived till 200+ years, MC died, ML died right after despite his good health, ML soul dl complete, end of arc 2. Glossed over lotsa details lol. Oh, the way ML proposed was in the middle of sex, MC got pissed and refused, but after a 6 hour marathon he said he'll agree to anything, let him sleep. So they got married as soon as they returned to the empire. (romantic :blobexpressionless:) I'm getting a grasp of the ML's character already. Pushy, silly and devoted. I personally find him more interesting than the various iceberg ML's out there xDD
     
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    kiara8 Lurking

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    All of the MLs I know are silly silly to their MCs, which iceberg are you talking about? LWJ? LFY?