Spoiler 100% sweet love: The delinquent XXX wife is a bit sweet

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  1. Laylieth

    Laylieth Well-Known Member

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    :blobokhand::blobokhand: we have a pretty common sense then, its a pity actually, this novel had a good and promising story, but....:sweating_profusely:
     
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    I read somewhere that authors on Qidian get paid by number of chapters/ novel length. Yeah it's a pity. There's so much already that can be done with the plots from the beginning of the novel. I found SYH interesting and I really want to know more about his background. For a "romance" novel, this is lacking.

    I think though...even with trying to lengthen the novel... it's still possible to make it interesting. Author can just use existing characters and give them more development. SYH desperately needs more screentime and more dialogue.

    I vote LC gets more screentime too! :aww:
     
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    There was this scene where YWW goes rampant in the bar and SYH comes and stop her, there he thinks about something happening in the past. Due to MTL I couldn't get much of it. What was he thinking?
     
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    JuuHachi Be My Glucose Guardian

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    As the novel goes on and on, more holes are dug, SYH's ML position is always shakey, and when will the bring Da Bai to work day arrive? lol

    YWW and SYH is too kind lol if all my employees were like that I'd fire them all and hire other people lol I'm not only helping my business but also the job market lol
     
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    I am starting to loose interest in this story... Too much side characters ... I don't know it's just me but I would prefer romance between MC and ML....
     
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    I know right guyssss ... Tragically I'm looking forward to actual REAL character and story development. I really don't get it with these people looking down on YWW, don't people normally don't dare? Aren't they afraid of getting beaten to death by SYH for disobeying and disrespecting YWW? at most they'd just use disdain eyes only. Excluding people of QRX, since her family rivals Si family power.

    But then again, for those casino gambling place, they've their own power , so I get that they don't cower to Si family, nor the 'baby doll' YWW. But then here comes those 5 weirdos Nie Wuming etc, their empty silly conversations. I'm starting to question modern Chinese novel, I don't think this is a normal trend and author is really losing her drive. I love to read Chinese modern novel since little, and this author is definitely the unique type, throwing here and there whatever idea comes.

    Do anyone know how the writing author works? Do they get pressured by editor and fans like the Japanese mangaka?
     
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    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    I can't speak for this one, but there was this novel I was reading a while ago, and the author kept asking for reader feedback and said she can take suggestions and request to turn the story certain directions or certain characters. The story quickly went to shit later. My number one advice for any author is: Never take readers' requests.
     
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    really?? Now that is kind of nasty for the author and delightful for readers like, if i can interfere i will make mc stay with the second male lead lol:blobnosebleed: and i am mostly not satisfied with this turn of event coz the author prolonging bitches squad (SMQ, QRX, LC)existenses plus all these unrelated plots which is confusing like dude, let the girl finish either her studies or deal with her job environment first:blobfrowning: ok, me done spouting nonsense~
     
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    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    The novel was a reverse harem novel where the MC was a virgin who played some VR game and got the 'prostitute/brothel girl' occupation which let her level up her stats every time she 'slept' with a strong client. So it was kinda intriguing at first, especially with the shameless reason and the fact that she could keep her identity secret and pick her own 'clients', but then... I assume both the author and the readers were male, cause it went in a very shitty direction with the requests - she got raped in public in the game, got some weird quests (the rape was part of the quest too), got sex tortured (too big things stuck in her), random sex with random strong players when she already had 2 potential ML's, then things moved to reality and she met with the two guys, but by then she was addicted to cock and was looking to get fucked, dressed like a slut, but then wouldn't you know it, suddenly the futuristic world is low on female population so women can have many men, then she got raped by a handsome dude because she was dressed too sexy, but then she recognized him as a top gamer and struck a deal with him - he turned into her bf too. And by then I was wondering why do I still read this... It went even worse later haha. Gave up, gave up.
     
  10. Laylieth

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    I know, if i were syh and knowing some of my employees looking down to my love one....imma gonna kick their ass out of my house, they dare to disrespect verbally and behaviour showed that they dont have enough loyalty. Why do i need to keep them around. Its like keeping a time bomb. Harm to myself and to my loved ones too, is not like i'm sort on money to hire more loyal soldier right? And if i have to keep them i had to be sure i have a strong reason. So what is syh reason for keeping them? The author dont even mention it if i dont remember it wrong.
     
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  11. Aster Anemone

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    At last digested the latest morsel of the summary chapter :blobparty::blobparty:
     
  12. lacerem

    lacerem Because... I'm Batman

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    XY told SYH how YWW made an agreement and she is about to lose her connection to Si home's business. SYH didn't care and XY was panicking, then a phone came saying YWW won the bet.
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    YWW called SYH asking to be praised with a 1000 words. SYH didn't even talk that much in a month. SYH said I prepared almond cake for you and YWW started praising him instead. YWW asked why he trusted her skills and SYH said even she didn't do the job his support would always be hers, since he is the boss. more praises for YWW in myanmar
     
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    Wow thanks
     
  14. lacerem

    lacerem Because... I'm Batman

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    they go to the mission of saving the man that YWW want to have connection with. YWW asked the Taoist group if theyheard about red rose and they said they created the legend of it, but the red rose doesn't exist.
     
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    lacerem Because... I'm Batman

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    Right you don't see people going around saying Melinda Gates is bad for Bill Gates because Bill Gates has capable secretaries. business partners and love interests are 2 different things and you respect people's wives or husbands, not because they help with business, but because you respect their partners. These kinds of disrespect is enough to cut business ties.
     
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    Would like them to take constructive criticism though. Someone's gotta mention the downward spiral of a plot to the author if they can't see it themselves. Gave the author a little leeway for HM ending because it seems she was more into writing this story but this is just getting bad and we're almost 800 chapters in. >.<
     
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    Lol, true. But never alter the original story to get readers' approval. In the sense of changing the ML, changing someone's death, you know, key points. Some criticism might be good, but some things are either cultural or just the particular novel genre. Saying something like 'the ML is an asshole and doesn't deserve MC, make her leave him and get with ML2', while it's something I say all the time, if the author actually did it, it would ruin the whole ML build-up and would change the genre of the novel (which is oppressive love - the abusive ML is a must; who even reads that and why, lol). But some criticism like 'Take a break and write a manuscript or at least bullet points and get your shit in order, this is taking too long and too many fillers' is fine by me :9.
     
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    Thank you for the summaries:blobxd:

    #whysoserious?
    Picking a novel to read is akin to gambling for me anyways
    As a reader i’d like to enjoy the story based on my imagination, like a director making a film in my head :blobpopcorn_cool: Yep, i give up trying to use logic with this novel. They’re plain idiots anyway lol It is rude to comment about people gf ALL THE TIME okay? Try it, you might just get a prize of nice beating :blobxd: IT is a different case if mom does it tho, kind of like their duties to torture son/daughter-in-laws and finally SYH got mentioned for a few sentences(??) as of late ? Where is da bai? Or lil bun? How is NWY case? Do they still gonna trick lil bun? :blobamused:YWW is out to attract bees and butterflies again hehehe
     
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    God:facepalm:how am i not surprised if this is for boys, i mean hell can they even accept a used woman AFTER witnessing she being used by men, that is just sick lol im very impressed by your mental power for being able to read it :blobpopcorn_cool:
     
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  20. OHtheNovelty

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    Ew, wtf. The minute rape popped up, the author should have known this wasn't going to end eell, the story was obviously getting tailored to a certain niche of readers instead of a broad audience.
     
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