Genesis has it all to become someone great. Power, Determination, Commitment, Brilliance, Sheer Will. However, he is within the grasp of his asshole of a Father who only desires to use his gifts for his own benefits. Yearning to break free, he sets into a journey to change his fate, taking sanctuary within his Great-Grandfather’s Ancestral House and cutting all contacts with his family. Then one day, just a few weeks after his 16th Birthday. A package and a letter from his departed Great-Grandfather arrived at his doorstep containing an invitation to enter the world of Eternal Empire, the VRMMORPG that literally conquered the World due to its 100% Realism. And along with the invitation was the revelation that Jenova Corp, the company that created Eternal Empire is offering a share of their company to the First Player who can reach the Top and Conquer the Game. With the discovery of such riches within Gaming, an extent enough to buy himself his Freedom, Genesis stepped forward into the Game and aim to reach the Top. “This is his story as he create Legends while taking the Path of Conquering the Worlds in the persona of the Enigmatic and All-Powerful Grimm, The Mythical Detective.”
I like this quite a lot, but in the later volumes the speed of the story speeds up really quickly. I feel like months go by in one line spacing sometimes
Maybe its just me, but towards the end of volume five his friends and him are fighting a lot, and he suddenly gets a ton of cards and somehow gets really strong. The way he gets his powers from cards is not really focused on, it just happens, and where he is getting a lot of these cards is kinda confusing too. He also has a ?fire? from hell? I don't really know what is going on at this point man. Sorry if it's not really constructive but I honestly don't know what to say except that I'm confused as heck when I'm reading your story. There is just so much going on at this point
The fires from hell were the ones he got from the Gourmet Labyrinth and the one he got during the Solidor Selection. The flames of wrath and flames of envy. As for the flame of envy, he also got an emblem which enables him to contact one of the 7 rulers of hell which is the Sin of Envy.