Spoiler: Libeyra x Minako (LGotC) {} Spoiler: Monster from my dream (LGotC) {} Spoiler: unfinish Lord of Moon (unknown title) {} Spoiler: Gluck x Shirai (VoV) {} Spoiler: 7 kinds of ghost (HiP) {} Spoiler: Hayashi Yasunori {} Spoiler: Loli couple (C) {} Spoiler: Captain Violet (Pot7S) {} Spoiler: Yubijiro Jiryuu (MGS&LS) {} Spoiler: Happy ever After theme (MGS&LS) {} Spoiler: Miyauchi x Akiho (MGS&LS) {}
It’s really good. Just that I feel that the area of the neck and chin could use some work. Also the limbs like the arms (mainly how the arms kind of narrow or shink as it nears the hand) and tiny hands and legs need some work to make it look more natural and properly proportional.
#1 and #6 looks good. The loli couple needs to be a bit more loli. Loli's tends to be a bit more smaller than that. They still look like normal highschoolers. And similar to the comment above, the hands needs to be a bit bigger. No need to make fine details but you need the right size for it. Maybe look into some facebook pages that draws anime? They usually put out how to draw bodies and body parts.
not really, ONE is a successful comic artist, even though his drawing pretty much just scribbling at first. Not to mention, Mob Psycho 100 is also really famous.. Edit: Oh yeah, my comment earlier is an extension to his thread yesterday(?) about needing a mangaka.
I know, I loved mob psycho 100 (so sad it has finished), but comparing this guy drawings with his.... (especially at the start of opm, in mob psycho he improves a lot)
They're characters from my unofficial manga Vampire over Vehicle...Gluck is vampire and Shirai is one of the Imperial Army...they met after shirai and her squad were bombed
nope, i'm not from Japan, not working in a publishing company, and I can't draw, sorry. All I can do is say good luck, man.