Gimme a plot for an otome game pls

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  1. Kiki0246

    Kiki0246 Top Notch Fujoshi, Owner of ISO TLs

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    Hi~ sooo i posted a few months ago about wanting to make a OG VN. And so i actually did manage to finish the prologue.... and then i realized i am absolute trash at world building and plot making lmao. Visuals are good tho at least.

    So psst... any bored ppl want to give me a plot/male leads? Preferably with different choices, but that's prob asking for too much XD. Female MC btw.
     
  2. leonkam96

    leonkam96 Well-Known Member

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    Made 2 villainous female and we also ply as one of the Villainous female mc chara? It will prob feel different than usual otome xD
     
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    lnv ✪ Well-Known Hypocrite

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    The female MC is the hottest girl in school and worships her cat while ignoring everyone else. The male leads then attempt to go appease her cat to get her attention while she remains clueless.

    :p
     
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  4. Arcadia Blade

    Arcadia Blade ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ You can do it!!

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    Probally a womanizing character where he continually seduces the MC and as you progress through him, you realises that he was actually seducing the MC due to him given a bet where if he won her heart, he'll be given enough money to pay off his debt and you'll ended up with the MH.

    BTW, what world type are you making? Modern or fantasy?
     
  5. Kiki0246

    Kiki0246 Top Notch Fujoshi, Owner of ISO TLs

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    Modern :), ik how bad my world building skills are at my previous attempts of a fantasy world lol
     
  6. aliasluna

    aliasluna Well-Known Member

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    do you want the cliche plots or unique ones
     
  7. Kiki0246

    Kiki0246 Top Notch Fujoshi, Owner of ISO TLs

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    cliche tbh lol. its my first time anyways.
     
  8. aliasluna

    aliasluna Well-Known Member

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    hmm well you can go to the mc is from a poor family but she was actually the heiress to a influential family?
     
  9. aliasluna

    aliasluna Well-Known Member

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    psst hey can i read the prologue??
     
  10. Drake98

    Drake98 Concerned Fan

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    Let me in! let me in!
    So, where is the discord group?
     
  11. Shizun

    Shizun 《Jack of all trades》《Artist/Author》《Dao of BLedia》

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    Otome fixing plot System

    MC has to fix and fill the plot in every arc of each otome worlds. Either to fill the plot cuz the otome world was discontinued / abandoned or to make it more exciting and dramatic. Etc
     
  12. Molen

    Molen Well-Known Member

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    considering that alot of shoujo story has complicated story:
    the male lead is actually a female, while the main character is actualy a male. and they found out that they are actually blood related, but somehow it turns out that one of them are actually adopted. then before getting maried one of them will lose their memory or something.
     
  13. Nakakure

    Nakakure Zadiris Empress Faction. NNN member Nr.1.

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    Your audience target? Woman age? R18 or R15?
     
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    AIm21 Well-Known Member

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    Is your protagonist an escapist fantasy MC or is it a actual person in digital form?

    For male lead you can just go through random pick in the hat as they can be anything from a God going to high school for the lolz or Satan getting bored and want to feel what teenage call true hell on earth.
     
  15. simak

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    How about basing it loosely in a LN you like? But add a twist, Like the MC is reincarnted into villaness, who realizes that she's in a novel but meets with death by deviating from the plot or tragedy by letting it unfold. HoweeHo, one of the boys realizes that on a "playthrough", that they are being guided by fate and tries to help her break free.
     
  16. Fi

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    For the female lead, she is a time traveler who retains her memories, thus each new game+ she would have remembered everything in her previous play through. So if she discovered that character A is plotting against character B, in her next playthrough she can use that information when she interact with character A, B.

    For male MC, let's make two groups. There is two antagonist female, depending on which side you are against. And each male MC is a familiar of a female protagonist (which your MC are not). The hidden male MC capture target is the headmaster, which is the one who gathers those female protagonist and plot to make them destroyed in mutual destruction.
     
  17. Shizun

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    1. Otome main characters meet modern MC in modern World.

    *****

    2. MC used to love otome games until she is into gothic lolita and emo style, but then transmigrates into an otome game she used to love. However, the way the ppl talk there ala noble makes her feel nauseating. She has black hair. The only one there and does a makeover, shocking everyone, though it made the ML hidden prince interested.
     
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    A fantasy with some sort of magic that decides the fated partner.
     
  19. Kiki0246

    Kiki0246 Top Notch Fujoshi, Owner of ISO TLs

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    SOOOOO

    I ENDED UP CHOOSING TO DO DA CLASSIC REINCARNATED INTO A VILLIANESS GAME!!

    lmao the intro so far legit looks like a slide show rip
     
  20. Nakakure

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    WHAAAAAAAATTTTT, CONGRATULATION!
    Good luck to you