LCD M E M O R I Z E

Does anyone was able to find chapter 57?

 

Found it by searching for memorize chapter 57 in google or bing.
Alternatively you could search for the first sentence in google.
“I’d like to change the formation for a while.”

 

Hey guys, I'm Sword Saint the new translator for this series. I just wanted to ask you guys what you think about the translation quality of the chapters I've posted till now.

 

The quality is pretty good, the sentences flow very well and I understand what is going on. Glad you used Hyung, Oppa and etc, some terminologies should be kept in romanized korean

 

Thanks, I'm happy to hear the quality is good.

 

Personally I would rate the quality as so-so. Much better than MTL but has some issues.
Why are they following a stag-beetle(Caraban) containing people?
Simple word flow issues that might be in the original or not "it seemed like" repeating in two sentences.

Based on personal taste I think you use commas a bit too much but that could also be related to how the author wrote. Below are two examples.
As An Hyun also heard what the user said, he tried to deduce it, but hearing it, I shook my head from left to right in denial.
Their lips were soaked with saliva out of panic, and I felt that there was a need for explanation.

The nervous eyes of Hyun who nodded immediately after my question gazed at me. maybe immediately nodded instead

Nothing big is wrong, just minor stuff breaking the flow.

 

The translation is pretty good.

By the way, could you translate 57?

Slowly translating all the previously MTL'ed chapters would be nice too. One old chapter for every 2 or 3 ones maybe?

 

I'll think about it

 

Thanks for the feedback, I'll look into it.

 

Going through this again, I found this link - http://hallplain.com/product/view/1 . It looks like the official VN of the story with choices and quite nice artwork. Someone could post a few screenshots (I would do it, but I don't know how).

 

It continues here:
http://hallplain.com/product/view/2

A few images in an album:
https://imgur.com/a/G0lvzUq

I don't know any Korean so can't really say if it is good or not. Decent character design and using system notices and similar. They took some notice of the theme and ideas behind it, seems decent without being able to play it.

 

I need some help guys, posting a chapter in you website would get recognized by the Novel Updates and then it would automatically appear in the updates right? But the same thing isn't happening for the chapters I'm posting, that is I'm having to manually add every release. Can someone tell me what I should do?

 

This thread is about how to do that:
https://forum.novelupdates.com/threads/how-does-novel-updates-work.21477/

Was also some news a year ago about the bots. https://forum.novelupdates.com/threads/new-novel-updates-bot-added.25652/

 

Thanks

 

Anyone who know the romance partner of the mc here?

 

I found the translation from when they started talking about the doppelganger difficult to understand.

In regards to the missing chapters. Even the MTL'ed chapters are gone so the only people who will read the new chapters would be the one's that already read the MTL'ed chapters or came to this thread and found the Google Drive ones.

Just something to consider. I have, myself, already read them so it doesn't affect me.

 

Concerning chapters from 52 to 57, I have recently received permission from Rainbow Trutle to host them on my website. And I will translate and release chapter 57 before this week ends, so there won't be anymore missing chapters.

 

Thanks. You're being pretty much the antithesis of your username so thanks for TLing.

 

For the Memorize readers out there, I wanted to know if you guys feel there is any improvement in the quality of chapter 63 compared to before.
I mean, now I have two editors working alongside me, so I want to know if the quality is better compared to before.

 

From what I see The quality is getting better now I commend you and the 2 editors for the hard work! But I hope the TL'ing process is still have some room for growth for better quality, anyways its much easier to read unlike the past chapters i saw a lot of awkward conversation and it's kinda difficult to understand, you need to use a lot your personal logic of understanding / imagination and re-read the line some more to play the scenario inside of your head.