Misc Writings and Idea dumps

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  1. pandadodod

    pandadodod Active Member

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    Hello, I am Pandadodod.

    I'm trying to get better in writing so while skimming Community Fictions forum, why not post my own?
    Maybe someone will read and give feedback. Might as well try...
    Some writings are for RPG Maker games I want to develop.


    EDIT: will also add my ideas that you can adapt and copy(If you want).

    Story Snippets
    Hedge + Witch
    1. Found
    2. For my Sister
    3. A Tainted girl

    Idea Dumps
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    I'm a Healer Only!
     
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    Bad Storm and replay like this.
  2. replay

    replay ★Milk and Honey smelling Merchant★

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    hmmm, it doesn't have links yet,
     
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    pandadodod Active Member

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    Well
    I'll be posting it now. Connection problems... :(
     
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    pandadodod Active Member

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    Hedge + Witch Writings
    "Found"
    Note: This is one is a fugly draft.

    Agnus slays the monsters near the fainted girl. After defeating those monsters, he and 3 more warriors from vale brings the girl to the town.
    Athea wakes up in a room. there was a woman in a hat like a witch with her. Are you awake, dear? the woman said. Um, where am I? Althea groans...
    Rest up, explanations will come later.
    She feels herself drowning into sleep.
    Wakes up and investigates the surroundings
    Getting out she is in what seems like a wooden house. Various books surround her. If she tries to read a book.. a girl will stop her.
    That is precious artifacts, newcomer....
    sorry..
    Well, waking up from a slumber spell.. you must be brimming with mana.
    huh? I don't know what you are talking about?
    You will know soon.. best come with me..
    brings althea to one of the elders.

    Elder: Welcome to vale young one.
    Althea: What is this place?
    E: This is our haven, a sanctuary for those like you and me.
    People with magic in their veins. persecuted and thrown here in this maze.
    Agnus found you in the maze, nearly eaten by a monster.
    A: why save me?
    E: Our hospitality isnt free young one,
    We need more hands in this place.
    Help us, and we'll give you shelter, food, and a way to defend yourself.
    We can be family here.
    But if you cross us, you will be facing your nightmare.
    Just to let you know. Haha.
    Prove yourself to us... and you will have a place here.
    Will give you two months to show your sincerity to Vale.
    Just to let you know, we don't like dead weight.
    Fail, and you will be cast out to the maze... alone

    First introduce yourself with everyone. Then come back here.
     
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    Hedge + Witch Writings
    "For My Sister"
    She is everything that I have.
    I don't want to lose her even if that means sacrificing myself.

    Cassie has always been with the weak constitution.
    Some say she must have been cursed by a witch.

    Even when mom and dad were alive, she was always weak.
    Better were those days where I am a carefree child.
    Better were those days when my parents income was enough for the visit to the doctor.
    We were getting by but everthing changed.
    Now all I have is Cass, bedridden without energy.
    But her smile whenever I come home from my waitress job put an ease to my aching body.
    the gods know all the disgusting things I have to endure to put a roof in our head and I can only do so much.

    Some say a witch is inside the city... Maybe she can cure my sister...
    They have knowledge of the mysterious things....
    Although if mom was to know, she would put a tantrum...
    Witches are impure, works of dark gods...
    But when the doctors can't cure cass then where do I have to go..

    Today, a person I've paid has given me information about a witch... an alchemist they say...some witch with the arts in healing with some stuff...
    If she could heal my sister... I could give whatever I can...

    She was supposed to be in a run.. Doing some healing in exchange for money. I need to find her..
    I arrive at an inn... some inn in the slums. She may be here.

    I eye the person inside the bar. How could I spot the witch here.
    I meet in the eye a woman with red hair, there is something about her. She may be the witch. She smiles at me as if knowing I seek her.
    I plan to talk to her. But some person drags her out. A hooded figure. She follows... Who might that be? I shrug my head. It's best to follow her.
    The innkeeper talk to me...
    Better stay out of the way of the witch..
    What witch, I feigned ignorance.
    Many people have come seeking remedies from that woman...
    You should leave...



    How could I leave? I ignored him and followed that person with the woman.


    Huh?

    They seem to be quarelling..

    "I don't care if you are really a witch...just cure me out of this...
    "That's what you get Harold for being such an ass.
    " I can talk to the guards to imprison you and throw in that hell of a place.
    "Well do that. As I have said. My powers have dwindled. I can't cure you...not anymore. Now leave me be.
    You- I don't care if they said not to- I will kill you...

    She was stabbed in her guts...

    Ahahaha. So its the end for me.

    Heal me, after you heal yourself.

    You are mistaken Harold. Everyone is...

    What the hell.

    The man ran, the wind took off his hood and revealed a face grotesque filled with lumps looking red.

    After he's gone. I turn to the bleeding witch.

    She was laughing.. and then,

    I thought you would protect me..

    Was she talking with someone?

    Ah i see, I got to the limit of my usefulness.

    Poor girl. Then she breathed her last.

    It was all naught.

    I plan to get away from this place...

    But a voice called me..

    You need help right? A disembodied voice rang to my head.

    Who are you?... I think I'm alone. me and the dead? body of the woman

    I can read your mind. You want to heal your sister right?

    Wha?

    I can help you.

    For a price...

    I surveyed my surroundings.. No one is here in this alley..

    Look here...

    A girl with white hair and white clothes materialized near the dead witch.
    She seems took something from the woman...something ball-like witht the palm of her hand

    Helping all she wanted... What a dumb girl..

    Then the girl faced at me...And munched the ball in her hand?

    What's that?

    This? A part of her soul...Moreove,

    Let's get straight to the point...

    Become a witch.

    I should go.. All this stuff is confusing my head.

    I can heal her. Your sister. through you of course.

    What are you? How do you know?

    I'm a demon okay? Time is running out, I will lose this physical form and won't contract you/.

    So, you want your sister healed? I have all the knowledge and magic to heal her. If you accept the contract with me...

    I gulped, her offer is tempting... but wait, will the demon eat my soul...

    Yes of course I would. It's not like you are sure to go to valhalla of course. Be my nourishment in exchange...
    I will give you power- the power of substances.

    Okay. I feel like in a trance.

    Good. We don't have time to spare. Sooner or later monsters will spawn when a witch dies...
    Hurry up, follow me. I stepped to the demon girl.

    Faster. Those annoying humans will come sooner..

    I see for the clearer time the dead witch.

    She's staring into space. With a wound gaping from her stomach...

    Take the knife?

    What?

    It should be easy if you had familial connection to this girl right here.

    To transfer the contract, Take the knife that killed the poor thing.

    I picked the knife,.it's metal cold.. dripping with blood.

    Now, I need your hand to bleed. Take the knife and slice your palm.

    For my sister, i thought, I winced at the pain my hand is dripping with blood.

    Ouch.

    Now, slice her palm as you did yours.

    I sliced the dead girls palm. some blood dripped.

    Now place your palm. Not that one, the one with the wound into her wounded hand.

    I do as the demon instructed.

    Then she hold both our palms together and held it..

    I feel something surging inside me... some kind of force....
    Knowledge of things, about diseases and cures about materials surged inside my head.
    It was painful...

    The girl was gone from my sight..

    But her voice sounded in my head.

    It's almost time... Run...

    I do what she told., holding the palm that is still bleeding... I ran as fast as I could.
    Looking back something like lighted in the place where the witch was...

    the witch was gone, in her place are humanoid things with black eyes... and wings in their back.

    They screeched...

    My knees weakened .. I feel so light as I run away from the place...

    I never looked back, But I could hear screams in that place..

    The voice interrupted me,

    That was a waste.. Those monsters can become a source of magic.. However..
    you are a support type of witch... haha, we can't stand a chance...

    I don't know what she's talking about..

    All I know is that I can now heal my sister...

    "Tainted Girl"

    I was once innocent.
    I used to be pure and seen the world as a beautiful place.
    But beyond the pretty smiles of everyone contained sinister thoughts.

    I looked at the mirror. Green hair natural from my home country and a face all dolled up.
    This is Giselle's Haven, a brothel, and I am one of "them".
    I danced and allured any man who met my eye.

    Sometimes I thought, was dancing seductively needed? All these beasts see are our scantily clad bodies.
    I don't like this life but I have to live. It's not as if I had a choice. All of us are bound by that "witch"

    Her name was Giselle. Most of the girls here said that she is a part owner of this place. Hence the name of the place.
    In our necks are bells imbued with magic. We cannot escape, we can't disobey. It's a curse one of the girls said.
    We can't tell anyone that Giselle is actually a witch. Hell, even guards of this city who should be throwing that piec of dayum in that place are one of our patrons.

    He's here, one of my regulars.
    I seductively clings to him.

    He throws a pouch of gold to the counter.
    Another hell begins.

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    Shayla, you must give yourself to man destined by the gods to you.
    Yes mother

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    The deed is done, I felt dirty. But involuntirarily a smile crept to my face.
    Sometimes her curse is useful to me. I can hide my disgust, my hate...

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    She came to the village. Our dainty village.
    She promised work in the city.
    I agreed.
    I wanted to become a person useful for our family.
    Send some money here.
    Maybe I could find the man of my dreams in there.
    I was so lucky. Giselle gave gold to my family. Advance payment she said
    If only I knew

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    Marko said bring the food to Giselle. I obliged.
    "Mother?" I knocked at the witch's room. We were cursed to call her mother.
    "As i have said, is there any way to replenish my power other than hunting some monsters?
    She was arguing with someone. But only her voice is heard.
    "There are no monster's here to fight"
    I knocked again.
    "Who's that?" She finally answered.
    It's me Shayla, your food is ready mother.
    "Another time."
    I got no choice to walk away. Who was that person is talking with?

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    I was instructed to buy some food in the market.
    It was one of the times. I got to wear my old clothes. Plain clothes and face free of artificial colors.
    After buying all the supplies...
    I bumped into someone while walking.
    "Sorry, my fault"
    It was a woman, simple in garb but there is something about her.
    Something that made you relax. But the choker with bells in neck reacterd.
    Damn this curse.
    "Are you okay?"
    The lady met my eye. She was smiling but her face turned to shock.
    "You are cursed, right"
    "No, I am not. I should go." I was to affirm her but as usual, the curse kicked in.
    I was about to run. But she stopped me.
    Usually, the curse should not let me go to places with non-customers.
    But a force made me follow her in an alley.

    With no one in our way. We stopped.
    You are cursed. A slavery curse. A witch has binded you. I am here to free you.
    I am dumbfounded and just affirmed.
    No one should see this. They may say I'm a witch but I am not.
    So what are you?
    It's something you better not know.
    You are lucky I have nullify curse as given me by an angel.

    It's only in legends that I hear someone blessed by an angel. And is given holy powers.
    But to see it with my own eyes.
    She took my hand. And something like light enveloped her.
    I cannot comprehend the things she are saying.
    But I feel something inside. Something pleasant.
    And the choker broke. The bells jingled as the choker dropped to the ground.
    You are now free. She smiled at me.
    I smiled. A genuine one.


    That person instructed me to bring the other girls to her.
    They could free them.
    The problem now is how to?
    I have an idea. But I should not say this to that person.
    She is pure similar to myself before.

    A came back to the brothel.
    I fake a smile to Mark.
    I still have the bell choker in my neck. But somehow what that person did was uncurse me.
    I have to hurry.

    Then the night came.

    I wore the scant garb knowing this is the last time.
    I took something from the kitchen. A tool for my purpose tonight.

    Giselle seems off. Like she is eyeing every girl in the brothel.
    Maybe she knows that her curse on someone wore off.
    I immediately took that man and seduce him.
    I brought him inside one of the rooms.

    Something have changed in you, Shayla...
    This abusive patron of mine remarked.
    You need some punishing. He was smirking at me.
    This time, it's me not you giving one.
    I stabbed his heart.
    The door suddenly opened.
    Giselle looked at me with animosity...
    So it is you.. she screamed.
    I hurriedly took the stabbed knife. And ran to her.
    A dark mass of something appeared from her and lunged at me.
    She may be making a curse.
    I confidently go near her.
    She is confused.
    I was thankful that girl, she may be a saint, give me some blessings to counteract some curses.
    Although she says it's not temporary.

    I lunged at Giselle. And stabbed her not at the heart. That would be easy.
    I stabbed her at the stomach.
    I looked at her eyes. She is afraid.

    "Help me, Maximus...
    Then I stabbed her multiple times.. muffling her head with a pillow.
    I laughed maniacally, I am free. I had my revenge.

    "After you killed her, then what?"

    Huh, an unfamaliar masculine voice sounded in the room.

    Who's there?

    A muscular man appeared out of thin air. He was clad in revealing attire. Looking closely, his skin is red.

    I am Maximus. That woman's former demon.
    Will you have a contract with me? I will make it worth your while.

    Hahaha. Why would I agree and become a Witch. I would rather die.

    You sure? You can't get out of this place easily. There are guard outside. By now, all of your co-workers are in danger.
    Do you think, the curse on them will be undone with you killing. Giselle? Wrong...They will stay at this place. Even after monsters will form with you killing a witch.

    So what would it be?

    Something tells me, I should run away and leave my sisters be...
    But they were there for me... They sort of became my family....

    It was like a dream. I followed the procedures of transferring the contract from Giselle to me.

    Oh. Was that saints power powerful? Maximus, the demon said in my mind after vanishing.
    Supposedly my former masters' knowledge should flow into you... Well, it's a challenge.. hahaha

    Then suddenly, a light bursted in the room.
    monsters formed inside the room.

    Doglike monsters appeared.

    Gnarling, fire bursted from them.

    This is easy monsters, maximus said, as expected of a sould of a weak witch...It should be easy on you...

    Maximus helped me chant a spell, petrification, it took a couple of times before successfully cursing the beasts...

    However, the room took on fire.

    After killing the beasts with the damned knife. Something like lights surged from them into me.

    I feel slightly more powerful.

    I hurriedly took myself outside.

    The place is in chaos.

    Patrons are complaining to Mark...

    I saw some girls frozen in spot like being in a daze. This would be the effect of the slavery curse halted by the death of the giver.

    Petrify! I petrified the men. Most of them are out patrons. They deserve it.

    Maximus helped me overwrite the curse of every single girl.

    The building is on fire inside. The girls are with shocked faces as I ordered them to get out.

    We ran to the place, the alley with that saint.

    I see in the distance, smoke bellowing from where the brothel should be.

    The saint waves her hand to me....

    But after seeing me, her eyes turned to vigilance, and readied something liked a staff...

    "Witch" her eyes seems to judge me.

    I didn't came here to fight you, miss saint.

    Why did you become a witch?

    I killed the witch.

    She was sad. Then why are you here...

    Please release the curses from this girls...

    I ordered the dumbstrucked girls to line up with the saint.

    I gave you a saint's blessing... why did you become a witch..

    Maximus: You are weak, that is why. Maximus appeared out of thin air..

    ???: Demon, please refrain from insulting my saint...

    I was surprised as a person with wings in their back appeared. I couldn;t say if they were a man or a woman.

    Saint: Maybe Augusta can help you rid that demon

    Maximus: Killing this saint will be hard but doable. Her soul should be delicious.

    ???: My lady, we should go..

    Shayla: I don't know what's going on. But Maximus, you are my demon now right.
    Let's get out of here. I command you

    Maximus: I thought you are much more interesting than Gisella..

    He disappeared..

    Saint: Wait, please I could help you rid that demon... right augusta?

    Augusta: it's possible but that parasite already tainted her soul. It will be hard and may destroy her soul in the process

    Shayla: Thank you saint for everything. I don't need your help. But all these girls do.

    The saint looked at the girls I brought.

    Saint: Please don't go. We need to cleanse your pure soul...

    I looked to her in the eyes. My eyes teared up.

    Shayla: You are mistaken. I am not pure anymore.

    I turned my back and ran away as fast as I can.

    I am a witch now.
    This demon will eat my soul in the future.
    I don't know what to do now but run.
     
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    SoulZer0 Heaven Refining

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    I'm a Healer Only (Working Title) (Feedback Appreciated)
    Idea: MC has only the healing class. Offensive abilities is Zero. Can't even crack a fruit with her bare hands. Can't even squish a level 1 slime with her staff. Born from a noble merchant family and lived a sheltered life. Always wanted to become an adventurer since being a wee kid.

    From here, this can go to...

    RPG Adaptation
    If I would make an rpg maker game based from this, The MC is the only one Playable and the other members of the party are uncontrollable.
    You use your judgement on who to heal. You get to ration the items basically allocating party resources.
    Posibble party members: brawny brainhead swordsman, foolish archer, airhead magician girl.

    Webserial Adaptation
    MC name would be something like Falrissa von Aradonna.
    She would live a sheltered life and treated like a fragile thing by her parents. Her idea of adventurers and heroes stems from books and romanticized being in a hero's party. Failing in learning and executing elemental spells. She was deemed magically incapable. Seeing a random kid being healed by a healer with a simple healing spell ignited her interest in becoming an adventurer again. Yet she would tackle hardships along the way. Using a single healing spell at first 0-3 months makes her go dizzy. It didn't stop her though and would practice in secret.

    I am stumped on making her an OP healer if I ever make this as a story. Or Maybe she has cleansing skills also and buffing skills? Feedback is appreciated.