looking for a novel

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  1. Mystletainn

    Mystletainn Member

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    im looking for a novel that have this kind of plotline
    Once upon a time in a cliche world of magic and sword a hero and his sister are summoned to defeat a generic villain #Overlord.
    the hero trained to defeat whatshisname Overlord in order to return to his world #forhislittlesister but even after training for a long time the hero is still weak.
    one day the hero sister is killed by the demon. the hero swore to kill whoagain Overlord #forhislittlesister and then his training montage bagan.
    finally he defeat whocares Overlord with his power but the hero was betrayed by his comrade no.1,2,and 3 the hero then learn that he was used all this time by the empire and that they kill his sister so that that the hero will wants revenge.
    now knowing the truth the hero fell silent remembering his time with his sister (going to E3 together, playing far cry 4 together, camping in cod together, and unable to play no mans sky that he pre ordered because they were summoned by dicks) and his promise to her.
    knowing he has changed so much after for his revenge and the blade thats about kill him. the hero smile and close his eye embracing death.
    as the hero about to be killed by the dicks he is saved by the dying Overlord. the Overlord give his life in order to saved the dying hero as the Overlord laid with his last breath he ask the hero to protect his people.

    once upon a time in a cliche world far far in the not so distant future a heroine and brother was summoned and SKIP........
    finally the heroine reach the Overlord chamber and meet the hero/Overlord.
    the hero acting like pagan min welcome the heroine talk about the heroine revenge and how she has changed for it the hero then says that he didnt kill her brother and gives her some evidence about her brother and the hero before her.
    finally the hero gives her a choice. kill him now or sit down and enjoy some crap ranggoon and will gives her the truth.
    THE END?
    thats it if anyone know a novel like this or this one (if it exist) please do tell. i have been reading the exact same storyline over and over again expecting diffirent result and tha is crazy.
     
  2. Tenor

    Tenor Hard Member

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    I installed mods for MineCraft #formylittlesister
     
  3. ninthlite

    ninthlite Well-Known Member

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    have you tried reading the Quran?
     
  4. Kamal

    Kamal uhmmm... hmmm... are you serious?

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    I have no idea what I just read
     
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  5. Astarte677

    Astarte677 POHHHTAAAAHHHTUUUU

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    Kid,,, are you mocking this benevolent senior?
     
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    jackateonetoo Wet Dog

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    I don't think anyone would write such a terrible story.
     
  7. Frozen ink

    Frozen ink Legally had harem『Cathulu』Power of Love & Evil』

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    Edonis Well-Known Member

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    The beginning sounded legit until your mentioned going to E3 together and playing various games. You probably read so many jap novels that you had a dream that you were reading a novel with that plot.
     
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    Screed Well-Known Member

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    Nothing is clear. Please explain clearly
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  10. infinit3aura

    infinit3aura [Infinit3 Clan] [delirious army] [meowstic]

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    I'm assuming you like playing videogames
     
  11. Eternal_Frosty

    Eternal_Frosty Active Member

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    WTF did i just read and it sounds like your life story.
     
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    NzoR Well-Known Member

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    Must be your Dream Biography..
     
  13. EvilDevil

    EvilDevil Guardian Devil

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    when you're looking for a novel
    1)you say what kind of novel you want,their tags,mc's characteristics etc
    but what you did here, looks to me like you're advertising some novel you wrote~
    that's a entire storyline!!!
     
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  14. Lucinia

    Lucinia Baby turtles are the Overlords of cuteness *_*

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    I tried to read it, i really do, but every time I fail halfway (this story is so shit, my brain seems to protect me)
     
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    ludagad Addicted to escapist novels

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    Eh, I don't think this sort of plot is bad, as long as the story concentrates on the second part - the girl getting revenge on the empire with the male lead. What the plot suggests is a cycle between good and evil - the hero turning into the demon lord for another hero to kill and so on. So the essentials remind me of this manhwa: https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=67189
     
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    kuroAnsatsu Realistically Stoic

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    So, what did you want dude?
    If you forget the title of a certain novel, you should put it in the I'm Looking For thread
     
  17. Cupcake Ninja

    Cupcake Ninja [Kind Sage][Lord Benevolence][ The Great Paragon]

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    Alright, i read all of it and actually understand what you wrote. so, to anser, i cant think of anything with that exact plotline. There are many novels similar to that, what with th ehero being betrayed, but one with another hero replacing him later and having her learn the truth? No, that isnt something i have ever read about happening before but the concept seems new and interesting.

    I have a few theories: 1, you dreamt it up and thought it was a real novel.
    2, Yuo have a fair bit of information wrong and your mind is making up details that seem like they would fit. This happend to mee to, sometimes my mind adds details that arent true, like a mashup of what i am looking for and other novels or manga i have read.
    3, this is not a professional work and something from a website like RoyalRoad. The detail of the siblings's life you provided seem to suggest this, as i cant think of any professional author who has done something like that. It sounds like something a amateur writer would put in.

    That said, i think you should copy and paste this to other websites too so that you can see if anyone knows what it is and if it really exists. Also, you might want to try looking at RoyalRoad. Does RRL have a forum place you can ask questions like this at? I dont go to RRL often so i dont know, but they probably do.
     
  18. ReadOrDie

    ReadOrDie already dead

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    Go home, you drunk.