A Returnee Wants to Play VRMMO Chapters: 8 including the prologue. https://www.webnovel.com/book/13262524805242405/A-Returnee-Wants-to-Play-VRMMO At long last, MC defeated the final enemy that was threatening the world he was summoned to countless years ago and fulfill his wish to return to his homeworld... only to realize that it has changed as well. But, none of this matter to him since his wish all along was to play games and laze around. Especially now, that there is finally an opportunity to fulfill his wish of playing VRMMORPG, nothing will stand in his way to play it how that he likes. "So, I can get one of the greatest Class there is huh... don't want it! it only has one profession slot!." "Hey! World Boss! Can't you see I'm in the middle of gathering ingredients? go scram somewhere else before I get angry" "What? You want me to join your Guild and help you rule the game?. Hell no! That too much work, I prefer to go on adventures!" Join Nex who don't want to fight and be the protagonist anymore, on his grand ambition of life full of games and leisure! Any reviews will be welcomed! Table of Contents: Prologue Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7
I'll give it a try, but the summary sounds like one of those cringy self insert OP Chinese fantasy...
The idea is good but lots of grammatical and few orthographic errors , are you writing in a hurry or something ? Just an advice mate: make sure to re-read what you write before you publish and perhaps read what you publish sometimes as it helps seeing the novel from the reader's point of view rather than the writer's and thus, you might find other changes that you might want to do
sorry about that. it's just that I don't know anyone else that read novels, not to mention one that knows English as good as me.
Reminds me too much of The Returner which was just wasted potential and bad comedy. I am pissed off that he refused to do anything. No goals nothing. So I am too angry to read your story but best of luck https://www.novelupdates.com/series/the-returner/
Although there are some similarity to this series. Do note that the story will mainly focus on the VRMMORPG aspect.
Will the game affect real life? I recommend novels line Devil's Cage for research https://www.novelupdates.com/series/the-devil-cage/
not exactly as it isn't some kind of death game, but I can't explain more as it will spoil the story.