This has nothing to do with the storyline of my manga but I decided to show you two pages from my manga... Spoiler: Page 1 {} this page is unfinish anyway but I just want to show you... Spoiler: Page 2 {} P.S. actually I don't know about what I want to tell you about my manga cause I forgot...D:
Your upload speed must be pretty slow for you to forget what you wanted to ask. Either way, nice drawings.
Ok, now I remember what I want... I want to know what kind of storyline do readers looking for? I mean I supposed to upload 5 pages to show readers if they like this kind of manga or not so I can sell it as soon as I finish the whole chapters... And if I've grammatical error in my translation (Eng-Jap) then try to correct it immediately (I'm still learning Japanese so a bit of difficulty in translating the language, anyway Japanese language are cooler especially when reading I feels like a seiyuu)
I forgot to mention about the paneling...yaa, I still newby so I don't exactly know how to do paneling perfectly like other professional mangaka did...