Beta Reader 7k words?

Hello

Is there anyone interested in Beta reading and giving feedback on the first two chapters of my work in progress?

It's a isekai novel so if that's your thing let me know

 

I'll read it

 

What other genres is it, besides isekai?
I’m not very smart and I don’t do very well with analyzing characters/worldbuilding, so what kind of feedback would you be looking for?

 

I'll read it, but can't promise a long term commitment.

 

I'll read, but what sort of criticism are you looking for?

 

I'm going for dark fantasy, Its honestly just the start I'm not looking for an in depth break down.

A simple good start suffices for me

 

Is it possible to send a direct message on here lol?

 

Uh, I think so? You choose the message/convo button and then @ the user of whoever you want to converse with? I think lol.

 

Count me in

 

I'll read ^^

 

I wouldn't mind helping out either. I specialize in worldbuilding. Then again... I dropped novels of the likes of Monarch of Evernight and rated them 2 stars because the author decided to fuck world consistency for some cheap plot points. So expect nothing but a semi constructive roast.

 

I'd love to take a look, if you still need help.

 

Please avoid putting in an SJW nagging Flat-Earth mother-in-law who lives in a van down by the river with Seymour, a Chris Walken-sounding and silent film-watching vegan cannibal zombie moose.

 

I don't mind reading.

Since I'm relearning grammar right now, I'll be able to spot prose problems relatively easily and be able to explain things if needed.