Poem Pyoo Poem Chain Round Robin Club™

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  1. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    Make it extra spicy if you want~
     
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  2. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    Spicy, 101
     
  3. SummerForest

    SummerForest Well-Known Member

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    A Spicy Touch

    The rain has stopped long ago.
    Shadows stretch their sinewy hands.
    Billowing clouds, chugging smoke,
    Squalor, sludge, filthy muck.
    Ghastly shades in rotten lands.

    The air is thick and heavy.

    The air is thick and heavy.
    It reeks of muck, it reeks of rot.
    Rot and decay.
    Moldy wood and festering hay.
    Smell of rice, bland rice, spread on a crooked tray.

    Bland and tasteless.

    It's bland, it's tasteless.
    The rice, the muck, the filthiness.
    My only salvation.
    Your salty skin,
    Scent of clove in your hair,
    Cardamom breath.
    My one and only spiciness.


    @Bielt > @Tilgarial > @Osamaru > @Siostar > @Pyoo > @Bad Storm
     
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  4. SummerForest

    SummerForest Well-Known Member

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    @Siostar, this is the best I could manage. The fluffy spiciness just didn't come to me.
     
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  5. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    Prompt onegaii
     
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  6. SummerForest

    SummerForest Well-Known Member

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    Yup!
    @Pyoo's theme: Autumn
     
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  7. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    But im summer
    And youre summer!
     
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  8. SummerForest

    SummerForest Well-Known Member

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    It's the month of September. Autumn in air~
     
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  9. Siostar

    Siostar Well-Known Member

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    It's great~ and unexpected~
     
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  10. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    [strangers Again]

    Bored I waited for a long time.
    Till you entered through that open door,
    With simple smiles we greeted each other.
    An awkward silence while you looked around,
    Till I noticed the look at your eyes
    As you saw something nice
    "Do you like it?"
    A simple question breaking the silence
    Was all we needed

    Small talks started
    Slowly learning what you like
    In time we laughed
    We talked about what we do
    We talked about our experiences~
    Our smiles were no longer awkward~

    But nothing lingers forever
    Not even Kinship and laughs
    When you finally found what you wanted
    Our paths separated again
    Once again I stayed alone
    Once again my day became dull

    And then someone else entered through that door...
    Another stranger who I never saw...
    With a weak smile I greet him
    The same way I greeted you before~
    "Welcome to our store~
    If you have any questions just call me~"

    Poem Chain
    @Bielt > @Tilgarial > @Siostar > @SummerForest > @Pyoo > @Bad Storm > @Bielt

    Took me long~
    But I finally did it XD
    Hope you guys like it~!
     
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  11. Bad Storm

    Bad Storm no thought, head empty

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    :blobtaco:
    Yay poem! Dammit, that twist! It totally got me haha.

    This doggo was waiting for a
    Strangers
    Friends
    Lovers
    Then back to strangers story
    :blobupset::blobrofl:
     
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  12. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    XD
    *Laughs*
    I am glad it got you~!

    I had this idea since I got the theme prompt~
    But didn't manage to get the twist to work till now XD
    *Giggles*
    *Is totally satisfied and smuggy*
    :3
     
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    Bad Storm no thought, head empty

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    I feel cheated! Where's the angst? The anger? The broken-hearted? The drama???

    *looks sulky at your smuggy self*
    *glomps*
    :blobnom:
     
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  14. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    *Giggles hysterically*
    *Points at you*
    The angst and broken-heart is there~
    XD
    *His glomped by doggy*
    Nyaa~
    >w<) *wiggles*
     
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    SummerForest Well-Known Member

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    Haha doggo wants drama!
    @Bielt it was really awesome! I was thinking about people meeting in a train on a long journey and then becoming strangers once they reach destination.
     
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  16. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    orz..... Dang lol, that was a Troll!
     
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  17. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    XD
    *Giggles*
    *Smiles brightly*
    Thank you!!
    I am glad that you liked it~!
    :blobxd::blobxd::blobxd:
    youk know~ I have a small store~
    So dealing with strangers is my daily life~


    So I rly wanted to put a bit of it in the poem~
    Like some people end up coming back~
    Some even become friends~
    Others never come back~
    And some I never even get to know their name even tho we end up talking on and on through hours~

    So strangers (coming in) again is part of my life~
    It's interesting that some people tell you a lot about these~
    Some teach things to you~
    Others learn things from you~
    Ofc there are bad people too~ (lots of them actually)
    But when I stop to think it's a interesting side of my work~

    It's funny that a good chunk of my life is spend waiting for strangers to enter through a door~ XD
    (Tho I am usually working or reading novels instead of being bored) XD
    What I love.of.the poem challanges is to see how different everyone interpret the themes~<3
     
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  18. Osamaru

    Osamaru 『Shem's Best Pal ✧ Lexi's Ani ✧ Hamster's Keeper』

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    XD But still really good.
     
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  19. Bielt

    Bielt 『Planets Eater』『The Sin of Animosity』

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    XD
    Store clerk troll~! XD
     
  20. Pyoo

    Pyoo ☀ Summer Melody ☀

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    *slow clap*
    That twist brought a smile to my face *clapclap*
     
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