Picked Up {GL} Senior Brother is actually a Disciple Sister

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  1. AsianessPride

    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    Name: 原来是师姐啊
    Raw: http://m.365mww.com/viewbook/9-1572-1.html
    NU: No
    Why It Should Get Picked Up:
    It’s a very enjoyable story of a young naive university girl who suddenly fell from the sky from another world. She is favored by the sect’s leader’s oldest disciple who is actually a women crossdressed as man. The FL is known to be very cold, but for some reason, helps out the Mc a lot. Even the FL doesn’t know why she does it. Overall, the novel is very fluffy and there are a lot of scenes with the Mc and FL basically flirting. However, I must warn that there is
    a scene where the FL lost her memories. Mc desperately tried to find her but couldn’t. But when they meet again, FL still had the desires she felt for Mc before she lost her memories and ended up raping her. After all, it seems the Mc wasn’t affected much and more happy about the fact FL still loves her deep inside. They have a lot of sex after that
    If that doesn’t trigger you, give it a shot
    P.s. don’t worry, she regains her memories a while after
    Summary:
    What is the basis for comprehension? Killing monsters, meditating, brushing experience values?
    For a nursery rhyme, it is enough to do one thing - hold the jade legs of the master.
    As a genius of Chonghua's millennium, the young talents in the field of comprehension are always the first to be rich and handsome.
    Su Yan’s jade legs are not so good... Surprisingly, the nursery rhymes are hugged! And hold the lever!
    From then on, the clouds are straight, and the hand is clouded for rain... you are too naive!
    The fact that the virginity girl uses blood and tears tells you that there is only one end to the masters who are different in the table:
    Being pressed, pressed every day, pressed every day...
    "Brother, why is your chest better and softer than mine?"
    "Oh, I am wrong! I am wrong! Don't hit your face..."
    "I went, it turned out to be a sister!"
    Therefore, it is a happy and reminiscent story of a natural 2 small sister who has crossed the face of a man who is dressed as a man.

    Not a HEA because the Mc ends sacrificing herself and dies. But in actuality, she wakes up as if everything was a dream. The Mc and FL found each other again in the modern world, and recognize each other immediately
     
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  2. AsianessPride

    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    I wasn’t planning to make a request but @Yandere Devil asked me to do so
    This one for you :blobokhand:
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    Someone translate the summary for me to make it clearer as well
     
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  3. RR Vocaloid

    RR Vocaloid RoyalRoad.com Slepragt

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    “Gender bending” tag? So the female protagonist was originally a guy? If it’s referring to the female love interest crossdressing as a man, that’s not gender bender and mistag.

    Gender bender- A character of one gender is transformed through some plot contrivance to the opposite gender.
     
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    RR Vocaloid RoyalRoad.com Slepragt

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    Also a better name for the series would be “Senior Brother turned out to be a Sister”

    Though a better translator might be able to find a translation more true to the Chinese name. I’m just localizing what you named it in English terms that would be better understood. Like big brother or elder brother would have incestual tones while “senior brother” is often more associated with sect stuff in xianxia. Current name you have for it I mistook for being some Japanese incest story until I read the thread.
     
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    0000000 I B SMILING!

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    ???? So FL raped FMC, with what, a magically cultivated dick?

    Or does non-consensual scissoring considers to be rape?
     
  6. SilvaLau

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    Crossdressing actually falls under the category as gender bender as well, it's not a mistag
     
  7. AsianessPride

    AsianessPride World’s #1 Chinese Yuri Novel MTL

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    I guess I used the tag wrong then. I’ll change it to ‘crossdressing female’

    It’s up to the translator whether they want to change the title or not. The Chinese title literally translates into that so I just used it

    The FL is 100% a women. She has an androgynous body, but she a women that disguised herself as a man. Not many people know she’s a women though

    There’s no magical penis involved, I hate to say it but women can rape women too, they have fingers
    Even a finger or 2 can be painful for an inexperienced vagina

    The reason why I say rape is because the Mc was still a virgin at the time and the FL was being a little too rough with her and even though the Mc said no, FL didn’t stop


    The reason why Mc calls FL ‘senior brother’ is because they both have the same master. FL is the 1st disciple, Mc is the 7th disciple
    Mc has been calling FL senior brother from the very beginning so it became a habit
     
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    Hmmmmm, you know yaoi is loosely link to rape and now we have yuri with rape, you think that the Chinese Govt is trying to state homo = rape?
     
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    +1 hope it get picked up
     
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  12. AsianessPride

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    Well, I can’t compare them since I don’t read Yaoi novel. That would be a waste of my time. And I don’t believe this has anything to do with the Chinese govt. They banned sex scenes but they have no control on how the authors want to write their story. It just happened to have a rape scene in this novel but it’s not a regular occurrence

    In this case, the Mc and the FL weren’t strangers.
    They were married to each other. But then FL’s father came and took her away. And then FL came back with lack of memories and her old cold personality. The reason why she raped Mc is because FL was already Possessive of her even before she lost her memories. She’s just showing those desires more openly now.
     
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    Not... totally true. The Chinese title is very shorthand so it can be translated in a lot of ways.
    原来是 = it's actually (a)
    师姐= disciple sister
    (this one is a bit hard to get the context in English because English doesn't have a concept of disciple sisters and the term Disciple for them is gender neutral.

    So the literal translation is : Actually a Disciple Sister!

    To get the entire context in, you'd have to go (Disciple Brother) is actually a Disciple Sister! since the subject (Disciple Brother) was missing even in the Chinese version and the loss of subject is a lot worse in English sentences that Chinese ones.
     
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  14. AsianessPride

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    Well, I like ‘Actually a Disciple Sister’ over what I have. I’ll use it
     
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    +1 hope it get translated
     
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    +1 interested in title.
     
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    Releasing a teaser within a week. I will fully pick up novel with regular updates once I finish one of "longer" Yuri projects
     
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    My most favorite couples first place is Leng Yan (FL's mother) x Ye Zhiqiu, next is Cong Rong x Meng Qianyao (MC's love rival).
    Thanks to these two couples I lost interest in main couple! I wish it was either of these two couples would have been the main couple! Their romance is 100 times more interesting than the main couple. But sadly, my favorite couples romance barely appear in the story :blobpensive:
     
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    Side couples are alway more interesting than the main couple for some reason.