Spoiler 反派的掉马日常[快穿] BL

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    反派的掉马日常[快穿]
    The villain's off the horse everyday [Quick wear]

    Raw: http://www.jjwxc.net/onebook.php?novelid=3619958

    Status: complete 87 chapters

    Tags: fast wear, every world ends in tragedy, happy ending over all, System, mystery.

    Summary:
    It is necessary to play both the protagonist's younger brother and the biggest villain. After the dual identity is discovered by the protagonist, he will also have a deep relationship with the protagonist and use love to prevent the protagonist from blackening-Shen Yi said: increase the number of chicken legs, double the box lunch, Thank you

    My summary:
    Mc is a transmigrater with a system. He travels in each world with a duel identity (a main identity and a hidden idenity). His goal/task changes from world to world, but his side goal/task is always to gain ml's 100% favorability.
     
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    i hate that each arc will end in tragedy, can someone spoil each arc, because i am not able to read tragedy but i want to know what happen. :aww:
     
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    P-arc

    There was an incident at a temple. Everyone was murdered.

    Ml thinks mc was the one who killed everyone at the temple so he stabbed mc. Mc tells ml that he has always been suspicious of mc. Now that mc is finally gone ml can find the real killer.

    *This is the end of the pre-arc. Mc will return later in after a thousand because there is a mishap and mc has to fix the issue*
     
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    Lol i feel the same. I generally dont like sad stories but i thought this was very good and well worth it.

    There is a reason for the tragedy. Ml pick these worlds to teach himself a lesson. If it wasnt a tragedy, i think most readers will hate ml. I wouldnt say ml deserves to suffer that much because in the real world he didnt really do anything bad. But ml wanted to teach himself a lesson. The ending is good.
     
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    There are 6 worlds altogether. Based on my limited Chinese proficiency:-
    1st world: Lord's (wangye) childhood lover
    2nd world: President's boyfriend
    3rd world: Marshal's loyal brother (not in biological sense, I think)
    4th world: Immortal's favoured male
    5th world: Mission's failure
    6th world: Saviour's hidden crush
    Lastly: extras

    Requesting MTL masters, @scriptor @Karry @maripants to spoil us, whenever there's time. Thanks in advance.
     
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    can someone spoil each arc specificly, meaning with more details
     
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    Hopefully someone can give a better summary. This arc was actually very difficult. I didnt understand it much. Hopefully some will correct the mistakes.


    Mc is falling off a cliff. He sees a bunch of ppl looking at him but no one is trying to save him.

    Mc lands on a net. He finds a change of clothes and a mask. System downloads the original host memories but its fragmented.

    System asks mc if he wants to buy the plot outline. Mc says no. The plot is too exspensive. Mc has to gain ml's full trust 100%. Task goal is to help ml rebel against the king (ml's brother). when mc is in contact with certain things it will trigger memories. Mc also can feel what the original host feels.

    Mc thinks that since these items are in front of him. It must be so he can visit ml. The memories told him, he always uses the mask when he sees ml. Mc was to figure out what his 2 identity is.

    The orginal host must have tried to pretend to kill one identity and now he's disguise as someone else.

    Mc goes to ml to find out clues. Ml is a prince. Mc is his trusted freind/confidant. Mc has a pouch which is proof of his identity so he can enter the palace.

    Mc meets ml but he makes some mistake that makes ml frown. Original host has never asked much/cared about ml's personal affairs.

    Someone tells ml that the corpse cant be found. Mc thinks they are talking about him. They talk. It seems someone wants to overthrow the king. Mc isnt shocked. When ml leaves mc tries to get any news about anything new. Maybe they can shed light to one of mc's identity that's suposed to be dead, but mc cant find any info.

    That night mc sneaks into a place and finds something hidden. Something about proof of about someone. Mc feels very familiar with it but then realized ml is near and watching mc. Mc sneaks back to his room, butnow he has to explain his actions since ml saw him sneaking around. Next day. Ml acts like nothing happened.

    Ml takes mc to a place. They kill a women and dispose of the body. Then some guy is yelling at them. The guy is pulled away.

    Mc and ml have a moment together. Ml asks if mc is hungry. They are by some water and mc fished and cooks. They talk. Mc says he would like to stay by ml's side. Ml is happy.

    That night mc wonders if the guy knows his true identity. He sneaks into the guys room. The guy is shock mc is here. He's writing something in blood. Mc reads it. Turns out the king has no royal blood.

    The queen and her son was replaced by a cocubine. (Idk if the woman earlier that was killed the real queen or the concubine) the son is now the king but he has no royal blood.

    System notifies mc that ml is outside the door. And the place is surrounded.

    Turns out mc's real identity is the king. He is ml's younger brother (no blood relation. Ml has royal blood. Mc does not)

    Ml feels really betrayed. When he was growing up, ml always felt like an outsider now he knows why. These ppl were never related to him.

    Ml finds out his most loved person is also the most he hates in this world.

    Ml drugs mc to make him weak. Mc trades points to the system. System is going to get a physical body? Find a body to go to some guy who is a leader and give him false info,but before that mc has a plan.

    Next day. Systems tells mc that ml is outside the door. Someone breaks into mc's room and wants to break him free but mc says no. Mc speaks louder so ml can hear him. Lol mc wants to stay. Mc says that he found out his real identity was fake but there was nothing he can do about it. Mc felt really guilty so he wanted to help ml though other means.

    Mc tells the guy that when its time. Everyone must follow ml when he is king.

    Ml hears all this but he walks away. Ml trust in mc is 100% now.

    Mc sleeps knowing that ml wont be back tonight. The next day ml tells mc that he will give mc te antidote to the weaking agent.

    Ml and mc return to the kingdom. Mc kicks himself when he realized that the original host didnt actually want to meet ml so soon after the fake death. Original host planned the fake death to give ml peace of mind and was planning to go into hiding. The mask and pouch were things original host always carried on himself.

    Mc tells ml that everything is fine. Mc tells ml there are a lot of dark gaurds. He tells ml to leave the city and that even if the leader guy attacks it would take him a long time to attack and enter the palace.

    Ml had questioned mc before and he didnt want to do it again so he agreed, but he quickly realized something was wrong.

    Mc sent all the guards away and told everyone to obey the new king. With the invasion, ml can fight for the thrown now. Mc kills himself.

    The invasion happened and it penetrated the palace. Ml was exspecting the leader guy to come out with mc with demands but it never happened. Ml never saw mc. Later ml was devastated that mc was dead.

    Ml is king now, but he lost the most previous person to him. Ml planted original hosts favorite plum tree in the yard and occasionally sips thier favorite tea. Thinking of the lies mc told him. That after dealing with the invasion mc and ml will talk about thier situation. They never got a chance to make up.

    All the original host that mc replaces gets a choice to also become a tasker like mc or live out thier life in the system world. (The place ml and mc live when they arent doing task)

    Mc was shocked original host (an yan i think) didnt want to live another life but choose to live in the same world as mc and ml and keep his memories.

    Mc and ml visit an yan. Outside is the plum blossom that he loves. Mc and an yan have an instant connection. An yan looks at ml and see he's very much like An ch. Mc is wondering/worried about the world outcome. An yan said it was very good much better than the original ending.

    Apparently all host mc replaces after the tast is done they will be able to see the new ending like a movie projection.

    An yan makes them his favorite tea. Mc misses this tea very much.

    Then they hear a knock on the door. The door is lightly open but no one opens it. An yan says to ignore it.

    Outside is an ch (cant remember his full name but he is the guy ml replaced) he doesn't know about the new ending. (Only the host mc replaces in the task can see the new ending) He lived out the original ending. Mc asked how did An ch let ml replace him? Ml said he offered to let An ch meet An yan again.

    An yan wont forgive an ch and doent want to see him (idk i think this is said but an yan left the door open. He could have locked it, but an ch never enters. Most likely afraid to enter. I think deep down an yan wants an ch to come in.)

    *Original world of an yan and an ch*

    An ch has kill a bunch of ppl. He Tossed dirty water on an yan. An yan faced a lot of malice from all around and An ch watched with joy. It was only till after An yan died that he realized that An yan, his most hated person was also his beloved qi (An yan's pretend to be someone else)

    An ch had unknowingly killed his beloved. The person who was beside him since youth and he was very devastated.
    *End*
     
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    I really dont think i do these summary any Justice. Its very emotional and heartfelt. You should read the original.

    Task goal: to get the lin family approval of Yi. Also to make him the soul beneficial of the lin fortune.
    Side goal: gain yi's favorablility. 100%

    Mc this wow this is pretty easy task. System keeps urging mc to buy the plot. Mc thinks it would be a waste of points.

    Mc gets his memory download. The lin family are a happy couple, but never had children. So they adopted original host.

    Original host was very happy to be adopted and very greatful. Later he learned that his adopted dad had an affair and had a son. His adopted mom gave the women a lot of money and shipped her over seas. The son was sent to an orphanage. The adopted mom only wants her adopted son to inherent the family fortune.

    At the age of 19 original host had adopted Yi and had a man take care of him. (I think original host is 7yrs older. I cant remember)

    Mc gets a notice that Yi is in trouble. Mc rushes to the scene.

    Yi is ml. Its ml's birthday. Ml is reborn. Before ml would be very nieve. He trusted his foster father. The man never talked much but he seemed like a good man. Ml remembered everything that had happened in his first life. He was at this party and he was given wine that had drugs/issues.

    His dad left with some of the youths and a med friend found him and sent him to the hospital. Later his life went down hill. He found out his foster father was just a puppet and there was a man behind the scenes. That man made his life hell. Later he got injected buy drugs got addicted and died on the streets alone.

    In this life ml wants to play along to learn who the mastermind is.

    Ml gets the same wine bottle from his foster father and drinks it ( the bad wine)

    Mc enters the room and lets everyone know that the staff found something wrong with the drinks and that he will compensate everyone and send everyone to the hospital. The foster father is shocked and that mc is here.

    Mc didn't actually lie. The ktv (i think karaoke place?) Place belongs to the lin family. But the staff doesn't know that the wine is bad and its actually only ml that is affected.

    Ml is suprised by mc. Mc wasn't around in the first life.

    While ml is at the hospital, foster father gets a call from ml's biological father. Foster dad tells him,he failed but wont fail next time.

    Mc is shocked that this easy task is actually going to be harder than he thought. Mc tells the foster father he's relieved of his duties. Mc tells the foster dad that ml is an adult now.

    Mc thinks he can gain trust/favor by staying by ml's side. Ml's foster dad was always busy and rarely came home. Ml as a youth must crave family love.

    But when ml wakes up sees mc cutting ugly fruits (mc isnt use to cutting fruits) and seeing how tired mc is. Ml isnt phased at all. No favorable points go up. Ml can no longer trust ppl after the first life.

    Mc cant figure out ml at all.

    Mc apologies again for ruining his birthday party and asks is ml needs anything. Ml declines.

    Mc leaves and ml goes home to find a bunch of business men in suite in the house. Foster dad tells ml that his real foster dad will take over from now on.

    *Time passes*
    Life has been like a dream. Everything has been different from his first life. Ml is working in mc's company. Ml goes to work earlier than normal and sees mc at his desk.

    Mc was suprised ml came to work early. He was just gonna drop off ml's gift early.

    Ml and mc hugged (they are together boyfriends) mc gave ml a plain ring. They are very happy together.

    Then mc leaves so ml can work. Behind the scenes mc is getting all the lin family inherentance and will transfer it to ml. Mc is very happy thinking of ml's face.

    Mc's adopted dad isn't happy. He knows whats going on and he wants to forget ml because ml is the proof of his mistake. (Dad loves his wife very much) mc argues with him. Ml is his biological son.

    Mc than visits his adopted mom. She says that he doesn't need to worry about anything. The lin inheritance will be his soon.

    Mc has a worried face and mom knows why. Mom says she knows mc wants to transfer everything to ml. She doesn't care about the lin fortune. All she wants is for mc to be happy as long as he doesn't regret it. Mc is very happy.

    He also finds out he only needs to get his moms approval of ml not the dad.

    Ml is having nightmare of his first life. He always wakes up at midnight. He sees mc sleeping peacefully. Mc is always sleeping so peacefully.

    Ml has hired investigation of his own background and he has a bag of evidence to get his foster father to rat out the real man behind the scenes.

    Mc knows what ml has been up to (system tells him)

    Next day ml visits his foster father. Father acts like a doting father. He ask if they are treating ml well.

    Ml shows him the bad of evidence that could distroy his foster father. His foster father pales. He cant offend mc and his family, but his life is on the line.

    Ml asks who his real foster father is. The guy is shocked. Didnt they take you in? You already met him. Hes the one you met on your birthday.

    Ml is shocked. Ml knows it was his real foster dad that wanted to hurt him because he heard them talking on the phone once. In his last life.

    Ml goes to work like nothing happened. Mc knows that ml is investigating so he goes to ml and confessed that to ml. Ml says he loves mc and knows mc only did it for ml.

    Mc is very happy. He doesnt tell ml that hes gonna transfer everything to ml. He wants to surprise ml.

    Ml thinks mc is pretending to be innocent. Ml doesnt want to wait for mc to stab him in the back. Mc is someone ml loves very dearly but also hates the most.

    Ml wants to take everything away from mc. Since mc cares so much for the lin family fortune. Ml will take it, but he still wants to be with mc.

    *Time passes*
    Mc becomes the owner of the lin fortune. Mc sees documents on the computer from ml. Mc cover up all ml's doing.

    Ml is transferring all the lin wealth to himself and pressuring his biological dad.

    Mc wakes up to find a note. Once you leave the room all the lin assets will be gone. Mc stays in the room but keeps calling ml's name.

    Ml is outside listening. He remembers what it was like when he was young and his foster father told him not to leave the room. He was so worried. Later his dad showed up with a bunch of men and injected him with drugs.

    (I think ml waited till night time to enter) mc doesn't know whats going on. He buys the plot. Finds out ml is reborn. Mc yells at the system for not telling him. System says he kept reminding mc to buy the plot.

    Ml tells mc that he has take over the family fortune. Mc isnt upset and seems to know already. Ml is surprised but he doesn't let it bother him. Ml keeps pressuring mc to fess up. Tell the truth.

    Mc says he never lied only about the foster dad thing,but ml doesn't believe him.

    He puts a tracking bracelets on mc. Mc keeps telling ml to stop doing things that will make mc hate him.

    Ml doesn't care and puts it on mc anyway. Ml sees mc has a usb attached to a lanyard aroung his neck and ask what it is. Ml snatches it and grabs a computer. He realized mc has been covering his tracks. Ml calls his foster father but he's not picking up.

    The next day ml leaves to get answers from his foster father. While ml is away. All ml's bodyguard were knocked out and mc was kidnapped.

    Mc was taken to a deserted farm. It's the adopted dad. He said his biggest regret is mc and ml. Lately the dad has been under a lot of pressure from ml. Dad doesn't want to be the only one going down. He's going to ruin mc too.

    Ml learns the truth. It was the biological dad that hurt him in the last life not mc. Ml used the tracking device to find mc. Mc isnt moving in an abandoned farm. All dirty with a foot print on his stomach and red face (slapped or punched)

    After moving mc ml sees the empty syringe. Ml knows what happens. Ml apologies and takes mc to the hospital.

    There's nothing they can do for mc. Ml knows the drug effects are horrible but the effects hasnt appeared yet.

    Ml apologise again and vows to stay with mc and take care of him for life. Ml will find a cure.

    Mc no longer smiles. Ml misses mc's happy face. He deeply regrets everything. Ml would rather have the drug injection than to see mc like this.

    Mc asks for the phone. Ml is happy mc finally asks for something. Mc calls his mom and smiles. Mc had sent mom over seas before the storm. System tells mc that mom will find true love and live a happy life.

    Mc tells mom hes with ml. Mom finally approve of ml. Task done.

    Mc tells ml that the ring mc got ml has a matching set. He was waiting for ml to be able to afford the matching ring set. Ml agrees and rushes out to buy the ring.

    Mc takes poisen and injects himself. Mc dies.

    Dad gets whats coming to him. Mom rushes back for the funeral. Before she left she tells ml. "Mc really liked you" breaking ml's heart.

    The past life and this life seem to merge together in a nightmare. Ml dreams he is a drug addicted and everyone is passes him. Then mc appears. Ml is so happy to see him.

    Mc: This is your ending.
    Ml: yes. This is my ending.
    Mc: but you live so well.

    Then ml hugs mc that has become a pile of bones.

    This is your ending
    This is your ending
    This is your ending

    Ml keeps hearing this over and over. Till he wakes.

    Ml wakes up from nightmares. He visits mc's grave everyday.

    He thinks without him. Mc would have lives a good happy rich life. Ml has everything now but he's missing the most important person next to him.

    Ml starts to be delusional. Both first and 2nd life are blending into each other. Ml checks himself into rehab but they see ml has not drug in his system.

    Ml is in the a white room. They keep injecting him with sleep meds. Ml hates that because then he cant dream of mc.

    The mc"s adpoted mom show up and ml recognizes her. He asks where mc is. She sighs and asks how has it come to this and never visits again.

    Ml hears mc is dead but cant believe it. He thinks maybe when he gets better mc will take him home, but mc never comes.
     
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    Sorry i forgot the mention all extras are from the end of the novel.

    Mc and ml broke up before the arcs started and made up after the last arc.

    I thought it would be too troublesome to write all the summary then write the extras.

    Ps. Not an mtl queen. If someone can do a better summary, please do. I know some information will be incorrect in my summary. Thanks in advance.

    In this world humans are devided into 2 groups. Group One (the empire) who believes that technology is the future and group two (the alliance) who believe the future in enhanced genes threw beasts. Humanity was able to enhance thier ability with the genes and developed the 3 genders, ABO. Omegas have high mental strenght and alpha have strong combat power. Betas are so so. Lol they got the short end of the stick again. Lol

    There was a great war (i think or was it a struggle? Idk)

    Beast were very peaceful.
    There was a research lab and test on beast. The beast went wild killed all the research teams.

    There is a space tunnel (i guess like a warp hole? That sperate the two groups of ppl for years.). The space tunnel was damaged and neither of the groups can enter or exit.

    I forgot what the task goal is (possibly help marshall to win the battle). But side task is gain ml's favorability 100%

    Marshall (ml) had two reliable right and left hand man.

    Mc (one of ml's right or left hand man) was summoned to the Marshall. There was a series of energy bursts.

    Its speculated to be beasts. Only beasts can live in space and some have teleportation skills.

    The other (left or right hand man) is a beta. Very beautiful, more beautiful than any omega. He speculates and analyze the data.

    Mc doesnt think it seems right. Also mc asks system. Since mc knows he always has 2 identity, he asks system is the system sure they are both alpha?

    Systems: yes.
    Mc: how can i attract ml? We are both alphas. Wont we just repell each other?
    System: heh heh so ready to fall in love? Dont worry everything is good.


    (I forgot the general conversation but it was so pretty funny)

    Mc downloaded the memory but its not complete. Mc only has 10yrs worth of memory. Original host was from a desolate planet and picked up by ml. Ml nurtured original host and orignal host owes his life to ml, but original host was the one that set everything up for ml to find him.

    Ml tells everyone to leave but asks mc to stay. He starts to question mc.

    Ml: what gift did i give you.
    Mc: a mecha (the only gift ml ever gave original host.)

    Mc knows what ml is doing. Spys can copy the body but they cant copy the mind.

    Ml asks for the medical team to show up and check mc to make sure mc is really mc. Everything checks out and they leave.

    Ml ask mc why didnt you knock. Original host always knocks befor entering. Mc kicks himself for ooc. He was talking to system/memory dl and forgot.

    He tells ml that he wants ml to look at him more. If he knocked then ml wouldn't turn his head, but if mc enters without knocking then ml would have to see who entered.

    Mc isnt wrong. Original host does like ml but doesnt know it. Mc is just pushing the feelings.

    Ml is suprised and looks at mc as if seeing him for the first time.

    Ml: why do you want me to look at you more?
    (I forgot the answer)

    Ml and mc go investigate the situation on the nearest planet to the energy bursts.

    But when they arrived on the planet they did nothing but eat, chill, walk, hotel. Original hosts likes pink. Its the symbol of peace. Ml gives mc a pink ball that can become a mecha.

    Mc is like... :blob_coughblood: why do i like pink? But mc can feel the original host feelings and they become his feelings too. But mc still think its tacky.

    Mc doesnt understand whats going on. It doesnt seem like the Marshall is really investigating, but ml wont tell mc his plans.

    Mc: fuck system. Give me a good protagonist for once. The first one was always suspicious of me. The 2nd one is (i forgot what he said.) Never believes me. And the 3rd one wont tell me his plans.

    Mc is complaining, but he knows that its not beasts because his goal is to help win the war so he can guess its about the empire. Mc tells ml about his concerns.

    Ml is happy. Now he knows mc isnt a spy. He contacts the beta (the left or right hand man) to come. They meet on the ship. Turns out the beta was really an omega. And he was hiding the fact that the empire is fixing the space tunnel and ready for war.

    The omega knows hes gonna die. He goes into heat so that both alpha will kill each other to mark the omega. Ml starts to loss it but he kills the omega first.

    The alliance needs ml during this time. Mc doesnt seem to be very affected by the pheromones. Mc thinks its possibly because of his 2nd hidden identify.

    Mc lets ml mark him. It hurts like hell. Mc complains to the system. The system tells him its cuz hes not an omega. Lol

    Mc can erase the mark but he never does. They go into battle. The empire's forces has been preparing for this moment for a long time and te alliance has been living in peace. They are not prepared.

    They capture one if the empire's battle ships, but once caught they just self destruct. They also find that the empires men are like brains built into mechas. They are no longer fully humans.

    Then beasts pop out of no where. They are very fierce. The alliance is losing.

    Mc starts to remember the past. Mc is a beast experiment. Mc is a very high lvl strong beast. In human form he has strong combat powers but low mental powers. In beast mode its the opposite. Mc realized he cant have both powers at the same time.

    Mc remembers the truth about the research lab. There were spys from the empire. The spys took the beasts and killed everyone else. Orignal host had strong mental powers and hid. Original host never saw his family beasts again. The only reason orignal host was alive is because of ml. Mc saw ml at a young age and told ml if mc becomes a marshall will ml congratulate him? Ml said yes.

    Then an omega dr disguised as a beta (no omegas are allowed in the military) notices mc and recognized him. They remember seeing him in the report but original host was never captured like the other beast.

    Dr asks mc to join the empire but mc refuses. Mc starts to wonder why all the omegas are loyal to the empire.

    Dr says if mc doesnt the dr will inject something into mc and cause madness not only to him but all the beast near him.

    By the time ml arrived the dr was dead. And mc became a pink beast. Ml sees the pink ball ml gave to mc and knows its him. Ml grabs mc but he seems to be suppressing something. Ml thinks mc is a spy and betrayed ml. Ml should give mc to the alliance so they can milk info from him, but ml cant do it. A voice tells him he will regret it.

    Ml outs mc in a cage in his room. Mc wakes up and ml enters. Mc is still a beast. Ml looks very worn out and tired. Ml can use the animal translator but hes afraid to hear what mc will say.

    Ml went back and forth on the subject and decided not to run away.

    Mc asks what happened. Ml says mc has been sleeping for 6 days. The battle is harsh. Ml asks for an explanation. Mc says he will never betray ml. Mc confesses that he set thing up so that ml would find him years ago, but that was the only lie.

    He asks ml if mc told ml back then would ml believe him? Ml says he has to go. Ml leaves.

    Mc comes up with a plan. He noticed the pink ball mecha was replaced by a pink bell. :blob_coughblood: mc waits for ml to return and rest but ml doesnt return to rest.

    Later ml returns and lays in bed to rest. Mc keeps calling his name. Ml ignores him. Mc yells some more. Ml gets up unlocks the cage picks up mc and puts him on the bed. Ml tells mc to stay in the room. If ml wins he will return for mc, if ml loses then mc's family will come for him.

    Mc is shocked. Ml was always so strong and confident before. Its so strange to see him like this. Ml leaves.

    Mc gets a pill from system to make him human first then mc rushes into battle.

    Everyone was been suprised that ml no longer had his trusted left and right hand men. Both were missing.

    Mc is using the pink mecha. Ml tells him to return but mc wont listen. Mc says he has a plan. Just trust him. Ml has no option but to tell others to attack mc.

    Mc turns into a beast and controls all other beast with bis mental powers. He gets all the beast to go to the tunnel and self destruct. Destroying the space tunnel. Mc dies from over exhaustion. His body scatters.

    With the tunnel gone no more ship can come in and the alliance was able to win. All spys were caughts.

    Turns out when the alliance finally created inhibitors in the labs in the past. The empire stole it and killed everyone and took the beast. This is the main reason why the omegas fought for the empire.

    With the 3 genders alpha and beta had better treatments but omega were breeding machines and they lost thier equal grounds. (This is the past)

    Ml wonders the planet he and mc use to hang out together. He stays at the hotel mc use to live. Ml was going to show his family the alpha he loves.

    Now that ml is living in peace, he thinks about what he could have done. If he believed in mc, maybe he could of help and mc wouldn't have over exerted himself.

    Before he use to think the alliance and ppl were important but now that he's alone without his precious mc. Life is so empty. He should have protected his precious one.

    System notified mc that ml is doing a special mission would mc like to join? Mc is surprised. A special mission? Mc agrees.

    Turns out there was a misshap and two worlds collided. The cultivation world and the intersteller. Mc and ml are in the previously used bodies from the pre-arc cultivation world.

    Task goal to stop the hostility of both worlds towards each other.

    In the distance mc sees a familiar mecha. Its the marshall. And hes holding a pink beasts (roga the original host). Mc is suprised. Mc and roga had an instant bond. Roga hugs mc.

    Roga must have told the Marshall about mc and ml bacause only mc's orignal host can see the ending.

    Ml is a bit sad. And mc tells him he did nothing wrong.

    Marshall tells them hes living with roga now. Marshall is a bit embarrassed. He never talked about love stuff. Roga us very happy. He says he wants to stay in this world because cultivation can prolong life.

    Happy ending
     
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    Ehh, playing 2 parts all in every world, but was the original like that or there's 2 originals and he has to play them both, sounds stressful x.x
     
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    Almost all worlds have 2 identity. worlds the original hosts had 2 identity. One is a close friend/confident and the 2nd is the enemy. Kinda like a spy has 2 identity

    I think its stressful to the original host but not to mc. Because to mc its just an exam task. They (the tasker) are all part of space and time school.

    But besides the the tasker (mc) everyone else lives it as its thier own world.

    Its pretty easy for mc because be has a system and he can trade in points for a pain mask (aka shield him from pain) plus mc goes in and out of the world pretty fast.

    Ml is different. He lives the world as a native and he doesnt have any golden finger like a system. So when ml feels pain he really feels pain. The world also affects him more because he lives it till the end.
     
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    This was a very difficult mtl. Im gonna be skipping a lot of details because i didnt really understand whats happening. It's a bit confusing.



    Arc 4 is the continuations of the pre-arc. This takes place a thousand years after mc died.

    System tells mc he has to go back to the first test world. This was mc's first world and exam. It was very easy and mc didnt need to pay for plot points. Everything was given to mc.

    System says that the world is an issues. Even though the protagonist (ml) has the 3 artifacts. Ml wont use it. Ml has to use it to suppress the villian. If he doesnt, the villian will break free. Since the task didnt complete, it was brought back to 0% complete.

    Mc has to find out why ml isnt using the 3 artifacta to suppress the villian, then help ml to supress the villian.

    Ml is a born genius. They all grew up together. Ml fell in love with a girl who was later found to be the villian that killed everyone at the temple. ( A bit confused, one part they said it was ml, then they said it was the girl so idk. My brain is fried)

    Ml, mc, the girl grew up together. They were nothing in the beginning, but then they all became very strong but ml was the strongest. Ml always was the strong silent type. He hated ppl touching him the more powerful he got the more he distanced himself from the group.

    The sword ml used contains the blood of all three. At first each person was supposed to get thier own sword but because the sword was too powerful only ml could use it, but mc and the girl can also use it for a short time.

    (Im guessing this is how it all went down) the girl wanted to get married so she killed everyone at the temple to get something/power. She also had another goal but i forgot what it was.

    At first it was said she wanted to marry ml but he was always looking at mc, but then later it is states she and ml are love rivals for mc...:blob_catflip: (are you confused? Lol i know i am)

    Mc gets the memory downloaded.

    Mc will come back as ml's male pet (little lover not an animal) mc is shocked and surprised. He never thought ml would have a male pet. Mc tries look at himself but he doesnt resembles the villian. Mc thinks ml loves the villian and wont use the 3 artifacts to suppress her because he loves her.

    Mc gets a paper cran message to meet ml on the bridge.

    Mc had grown up with ml and he can see ml is irratated. Ml seems to be playing chess. Mc laughs inside thinking about how a thousand years has passed but ml still sucks at playing chess.

    Mc plays the meek and scared little pet. Also the original host is the male pet but ml never touches the male pet. They only sit together and then ml will leave.

    Mc tells ml that he will listen to ml's worries. Ml frowns. Original host never talks before always remains silent.

    orginal host doesnt know ml, but mc does.

    Ml says what do you know. Mc says i can tell u are missing someone. Ml flashes murder intent, but then hes back to normal but he's irrated.

    Ml asks if mc knows how to play chest. Mc uses the system to play chess. Theres a look of nostalgia on ml's face.
    Then ml explodes. A chess hit mc. Pieces are on the ground. Mc asks the system what happened. System said they were playing the same move as the past.

    Mc couldnt get any info from ml and ml leaves.

    Mc noticed the worlds are different. He wants to listen to what ml us talking about but system says ml is too far away so they cant listen to what ml is saying.

    Mc remember in the past mc and ml dug a cave beind the waterfall. Theres no maps but because they both dug the cave they know the routes. Mc goes there and he's close enought to over hear ml. I forgot what was spoken but then ml found mc in the cave and asked what he was doing.

    Mc asked permission to wonder the area since mc has been here he hasnt looked around yet. Ml didnt restrict the orginal host but..... Ml said ok.

    Mc wanted to visit the old places he use to know. Mc meets someone who used mc as a diversion to attract ml's attention.

    Ml was drink and he never touchs the orginal host but today mc feels like the master/brother ml really loves. But then its all a ploy and ml runs off to the guy that used mc as a diversion.

    Mc follows ml. They are on a hill with a formation. The formation wity the 3 artifacts can make the flesh and soul come back but once the artifacts are used they cant be used to suppress the villian.

    Mc is confused. Isnt ml's lover the villian? Shes not dead. Shes just suppressed. Ml tells mc to go to the boat and wait for him.

    After some times. It seems like the 3 artifacts were not used and ml comes back to the boat. Ml asks mc. (Ml refurs to mc as master and brother in mtl) master why didnt you tell me you were back?. Mc says are you mistaken me for someone else?

    Ml said are you still angry? Mc wont admit he's the master/brother. Ml is sad.

    (I forgot what ml said) ml said something like you want to stay here? I can go your room/place?

    Mc's face cracks: You Dare....

    Mc has to admit now that hes come back.

    Ml wants to explain what really happened. Ml wants to take mc to his sea. Mc can go into ml's deep sea and see/experience what really happened. The truth of ehat happened a 1000yrs ago but mc declines because then ml would see mc's real soul.

    Ml is sad thinking mc doesnt trust him.

    Mc returns to his former home. Ml sends his crane with ml"s memory and feelings. Mc finds out what really happened.

    Ml was possessed by demons and the demon made him kill mc. After that ml killed tge demon but losted his beloved mc.

    Mc hears the villians voice and she wants him to free her. She is sealed under the bridge they both use to go to..

    Mc unseals her. Ml shows up. Doesnt care what mc does. But he wanted to use to 3 artifacts to help mc become stronger not to supress the villian.

    They both supress her. She tells mc she didnt mean to kill him, but mc ignores her.

    Later mc goes to town. Theres a festival. Mc was never able attend in the past. Ml buys mc a lotus lantern.

    Ml tells mc he's its time for him to assend. Ml doesnt want to go but he has to.

    Mc writes his name on the lantern and gives it back to ml.

    Mc: i know you work very hard to suppress your suspicion on me. But if you do something wrong. I wont forgive you. You must learn the consequences of your actions. I'll see you in the next world.

    Ml wants to give mc things for protection/cultivation but mc declines. When ml assends into heaven. Mc departs as well.

    After ml assended he worked very hard to open a space to the lower world to see mc. Ml was worried about mc. When ml could finally do it, mc's soul was no where to be seen. It wasnt in the world so ml burned hinself with the fairy fire.
     
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    World goal: help the coyotes.

    Animal world. No humans. All animals can talk.

    Mc is freaking out. Why am i an animal? This is so wierd. My heart cant handle animals talking.

    Mc gets his memories downloaded. Mc is a dear and a priest.

    Mc's system gets an update and cant respond till after update is complete.

    A wolf visits mc. He asks to be invited into mc's home. Mc remembers there has never been an attack on the priests before and original host's temperment is calm and sweet so mc invites him in.

    The wolf wants mc's support. The wolf says the land is divided and there is a lack of food. The wolf wants to over power the coyotes and take thier land and food.

    Mc says that will disrupt the natural order.

    The wolf shows its teeth and says if you arnt on my side you are worthless. Wolf eats mc and mc dies.

    Mc loses all his points for mission failure and system is still out of commission.
     
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    Mc lost all his points because of tge last mission failure.

    System is updating so mc cant download original host memories.

    A beast attact mc and mc auto magic-kills it. Tge elves see mc and take him. They drug him and put him over fire. Mc auto puts it out with magic. They are all scared of mc. Mc escape.

    Mc escapes and learns that every so often they must sacrifice a person for the demon king.

    Demon king wants something and kills ppl who cant help him achieve the goal.

    Mc is human but with great magic ability. Mc finds out his name is roy. He won a championship.

    Mc goes on a journey. Finds a cave and rest. Theres a dragon deep on the cave mc was resting in. The dragon takes mc to a river and cought somw fish. Mc thinks ml wants to fatten him up to eat.

    They head back. System update is complete and tells mc the dragon is the ml. With system help ml became a human.

    System says no memory for mc. Original host suffers from memory lost. Mc ask ml who he is.
    Ml is the son of the demon king and mc is the adopted son. They grew up together. Seems to be also lovers. Mc keep asking for question.

    Ml wanta to kill his dad the demon king because his dad had become crazy. Dad wants to resurrect the mom. Dad is killing a lot of ppl to achieve this. Dad is the one that turned ml into a dragon and erased mc's memories. They seem to have been lovers, mc and ml.

    On the way the find a tournament. They win. The price is thier fortune read. The king of the location is no longer a king but a person trapped by a curse. He is with a demon. The cousin of ml.

    The king reads ml's fortune. He will kill the two previous ppl in his life. The dad and his lover(mc).

    Mc thinks he cant get away from this storyline. Mc asks what will happen if it goes bad? System says then mc will have to come back and fix the storyline. Mc buys the plot points.

    Ml kills mc and dad. Goes crazy like dad and tries to resurrect mc. Mc figures he should change this.

    They find out the dad is on mermaid island. Dad can bring back mom for a few mins then she sleeps. He talks to her and tells her about how he loves both his son but no matter what they can never compare to her his wife. They are coming to kill me. I may die before i can see u again.

    Dad kills a lot of mermaids to help resurrect his dad wife.

    Mc is implicated in the murders/dad's servent but ml doesnt belive it. He believes mc 100% ml hears a voice tellibg him. " I know you worked hard trying to believe in me. Even though you try to suppress your suspension of me, but if you do something bad. I won't forgive you. You must live with the consequences of your action if you did something wrong. See you in the next life.

    Ml cant remember when mc said this to him. It must have been when they were young.

    Ml kills dad and mermaid controlled ml and made him kill mc. Mc doesnt want to come back and redo this task so he erases ml's memories. Ml is distraught. He can feel his memories fading. Ml wants to keep his memory.

    Ml stand blankly by the dead body of his dad and a stranger. Ml cant figure out who the stranger is but he must bury the stranger himself. He just has this feeling.

    Ml keeps mc's clothes. And wonders the land.
     
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    Mc is from another world. He died in an accident.

    Ml has been watching mc for a long time before and likes mc. He likes how the rules affected everyone but mc.

    Ml saved mc and they developed a relationship. Ml is a defender. He works for the main system. Mc says he wants to see it.

    They enter and mc asks if mc wants to be a tasker for the time and space school. Ml asks if mc wants a mini portable system to study. Mc agrees he wants a white dog system.

    Then a co-worker comes in and ml sends mc away.

    Later that co-worker visits mc. Mc can feel something wrong but he cant put his finger in it. The co-worker says that mc feels that the system should have no feelings but the co-worker things differently. He asks mc to work with him. Mc declines.

    Later ml comes angry. He asks mc if there is something mc should confess. Mc says no.

    Ml access mc's systems memory and a clip of the meeting of mc and the co-worker pops up

    But its different from how mc remembered. In it mc is colliding with the co-worker. Ml is mad and mc says its not true. Ml doesnt believe him. Then ml leaves.

    Everything has been crazy. Ml cant undo the damage thebco-worker did. He asks mc to give him the code break but mc said it wasnt him. Ml doesnt believe him. Later on ml found the truth.

    Mc was very sad that ml didnt believe him over a fake video.

    They meet up. Ml says lets break up.


    Mc wakes up and is greeted by the dog system. Theres a knock on the door its ml. Mc ignores him but says he's walking the dog. Mc pretends to be mad. Ml follows him to a cafe.

    Ml is like a sad puppy. Everything for mc was easy but ml had to live out the lives in the other world and some can be very long. Mc knows ml suffered a lot.

    Mc says do you know how i felt when you asked to break up? Ml answered , "angry"

    Ml tells mc that hes sorry. Before things were good. Ml lost all his friends and family during the unstable period. Ppl betrayed family abandoned friends. Ml became very hard and suspicious.

    Ml did the worlds in order to learn the consequences of not trusting a love one. Now that he's learned his lesson. He wants mc to get back together. They do

    Happy ending

    The end
     
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    their real world arc was surprisingly lackluster...lol BUT the other arcs seem super interesting *watch thread*
     
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    :blob_teary: sorry... Umm thats it.... Thats the whole novel. I may have left out some stuff from the real world.

    But you should definitely check out the novel. I thought it was very interesting.:blobparty:
     
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    Oh:blobpats:
    *Runs off to start mtl *
     
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