So I've been come across many replies telling me to change the title of my novel Rise of the Legendary Emperor now I'm seriously considering to change the title I've chosen some names but I can't finalize one please please help me choose a better title NU community young misses and masters which one in the below is the better one my novel is about an antihero mc who trying to build a kingdom uniting all the races to get revenge on a powerful kingdom 1.Devil's covenant 2.The Prophecy in the Night 3.Devil's Pledge 4.A Song of a Great War 5.The Creed of the Empire also if you have any better suggestions, please let me know
i quiet like the Creed of the Empire bcz the first one seems like a copy of song of ice and fire dont you think?
its catchy right? i mean i want the title to attract the readers and make an impression on them,fellow nu friends said my current title is not helping my novel in any way
I have the perfect title for you. A Novel About an Antihero MC Who is Trying to Build a Kingdom Uniting All the Races to Get Revenge on a Powerful Kingdom
Edgelord A Certain Antihero Who is Trying to Build a Kingdom by Uniting All Races to Get Revenge on a Powerful Kingdom Something is rising and it's not the Legendary Emperor Red Scarf: Our Kingdom
4 or 5...creed of a kingdom works and sight of a great war is rather poetic so depends on hours you want to frame it
Regarding "The Creed of the Empire". First off, there are too many "the"s. Use either "Creed of the Empire" or "The Empire's Creed" or maybe "The Imperial Creed". That said, your summary only mentions a single kingdom for the assembled races. An "empire" is a group of kingdoms/nations. Will your MC conquer other kingdoms to form an empire before going after the revenge-target kingdom? In addition, trashing this other kingdom would only a medium term goal. What will the MC do afterwards? Does this "creed" reflect the big(ger) picture?
A song of a Great War is definitely out, because A. The theme on liberating many races against a prick of a great nation is not there. B. It sounded like you glorifying war. Please ignore all Devil term in your name, as it sounded as though the racist kingdom is the good guy over here, even if your MC is an edgelord. The Prophecy in the Night sounds promising, though a little like the thing about Jesus, whatever. How about "Tale of the Great Liberator"? Waffle stomping the racist kingdom down the drain in order to save a bunch of races sounds liberating.
How about Emperor's Creed? Since your novel plays out like the Assassins Creed 2. Basically where you start from nothing and slowly build up the kingdom and unite all the races in order to fight something. That's what I thought when it comes to your novel.
Among those 5 i prefer The Creed of the Empire, because it reminds me of The Lord of the Rings. But for light novel, i think it's better to use simple title. And it has to be catchy and unique.
What about: Dominion’s Creed It doesn’t sound that catchy but meh tried my best, seriously tho I just realize how hard it is picking an appropriate title. No wonder some anime series and books have the name of the Main Character as the title.
You can just title your novel as Chronicles of some great war that you came up with or the Legend of said empire's name?
seriously lol!! how am i gonna fit the A Certain Antihero Who is Trying to Build a Kingdom by Uniting All Races to Get Revenge on a Powerful Kingdom or A Novel About an Antihero MC Who is Trying to Build a Kingdom Uniting All the Races to Get Revenge on a Powerful Kingdom on the cover page