Spoiler The Crown Princess Audition

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  1. Julveury

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    So I think no one still told you how to use spoiler buttons? Click the plus sign on editor then click the spoiler there. Or just copy this format.
    Code:
    [SPOILER="Title goes here"] your content  goes here [/SPOILER]
     
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    That's what I thought from the beginning I read the manhwa and also there's a crossdressing tag. I knew that Rose is the ML.
     
  3. MangaCommission

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    I was gonna ask if anyone got any idea why he's basically crashing into her house and dragging her around, but looking at your comment, i am quickly reaffirmed that he’s basically just trying to find his long term bitch he can slave around under the guise of a ‘wife’, that’s why he’s bitchy from the start/not even trying to hide his horrible personality anymore
     
  4. jeinpo

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    Thank you! and the light of knowledge arrives, thank you very much Julveury!!, here I leave another chapter

    all credits for RealYeowang Scan



    [/SPOILER

    Lady Rose Aden! please reply! Is it true that she is the illegitimate daughter of Duke Lerehr? "asks a paparazzi" Lady Porter! Tell us what you think of your childhood friend, Lady Tessville! ¨ the flashes of the photos continued, to the point that Apul feels stunned, Rose grabs Apul “walk fast, but don't run,” she whispers, the paparazzi keep asking Charlotte about The insident with the girl with the pink hair, Charlotte only answers "I'm sorry" while she manages to get into the carriage, while another asks Rose directly if it had something to do with the elimination of Lady Tessville, Apul at the question is angry and is to point of answering but Rose stops her "Listen to me, you promised me" and she responds to the paparazzi "good morning, I am Rose Aden, I come in representation of Viscount Aden, I have nothing to do with the elimination of Lady Tessville, but I can Say that she was an honorable, beautiful and respectable candidate "Apul is shocked without understanding Rose's intentions when saying that, Rose continues with her answer" It is true that I am the duke's illegitimate daughter, but he always treated me Well without discriminating me "Apul is still terrified as she thinks that was not what Rose told them previously" I hope he does not imagine strange things "Apul is surprised by Rose's acting skills while crying and ends the speech with" that is all, thank you for listening to me "Apul approaches Rose to see that it was the opportunity to leave" my lady, do not cry "and they get into the carriage, both begin to discuss what happened, Rose clarifies that what she just said was pure strategy to attract attention because the last name Aden is not widely recognized and again emphasizes the 500 nobles, Apul asks why the insistence on Lady Tessville, Rose says that it was probably a thing for the Tessville family to blame a third party - I thought that the capital would be full of people Elegant and wonderful, what a disappointment, "says Apul, reflecting. Rose does not know what to say about it. At the entrance to the palace a guard verifies the invitation, the name of the Lady who is in the carriage and the number of maids with her, the guard also asks Apul for her name, she approaches the guard and begins to apologize by whispering to him, Rose does not understand why Apul simply does not tell the guard her name since is pretty, so she intervenes to tell her name, Apul covers her mouth and tells her that she is ashamed because it sounds like a princess name and she is a maid, the guard tells them that he has finished checking things and gives Apul a box, Apul wonders about the content of the box, Rose says "now the fight begins, get ready sister"the carriage moves while someone says "welcome to the castle of ST.BELFRAUT, Excellency Rose Aden" end of the chapter
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  5. Herodanish

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    Im really curious why he chose her to be 'his' maid. And why he ordered the golden bird to keep watching the mc.
     
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    Newtoki has the RAWS here
    Rose
    https://newtoki69.com/webtoon/3703132/왕세자비-오디션

    ch10-11
    I have no Korean but there's somethings you can make out
    The box has a map and directions/rules

    Rose wastes no effort to dump on Apple (really keeps the floral theme better than Apul which sounds like a refugee from s Kipling novel) by doing a chess analogy and saying she(rose) is the king and Apple is a pawn.(I'd take that as an invitation to knock over the board)

    Apple gets a box with a maid uniform and is bullied into it by rose triggering more depression. Then she encounters a large burly made that looks like a male pro wrestler

    Burly maid works for blond candidate who looks like she is being nice to her to pump her for information

    I will just note that given the number of candidates and the complete trash nature of Rose's personality, selling her down the river to as many of the candidates as possible is by far the optimum move by game theory

    Apple meets a Redheaded b!^chy candidate who feels she didn't grovel hard enough and it looks like she is slapping apple at the end

    Seriously surprised Apple isn't on suicide watch, catatonic or a homicidal maniac at this point. Really something of a toothache novel at this point
     
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  7. jeinpo

    jeinpo Well-Known Member

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    Hello, sorry for the delay, here is the chapter!

    [
    chapter 10:
    "Whoaa" Apul exclaims surprised by the room while Rose collapses on the bed "I'm dead from exhaustion, don't allow visitors and open the box first" "yes yes lady" says Apul opening the box and finding a map and a guide "do you want me to read the instructions? "Apul asks while Rose nods
    -" All ladys during the selection period must live in the Ameil palace or in the Sasara palace, they are prohibited from walking without authorization outside the area of the palaces ... OH! We are in the Ameil palace! Breakfast is served directly in the room by the maids of the royal family, lunch and dinner will be served in the restaurant on each floor and you can choose if you want to be served in the room, when you leave They must inform 12 hours in advance and they will obtain a permit and 2 or more guards, the entrance must be before 9 pm ... it is very complicated, should I also follow these rules? "(Apul asks)
    - ¨Keep reading there must be more information¨ says rose still lying in bed
    -¨ the royal palace only offers accommodation for four people, if it is exceeded, the lady will be charged for extra person, then most of the ladys knew about this! Room cleaning will be carried out twice a day, if you do not want your room to be cleaned you can say so, the education will take place in the morning and in the afternoon, if the lady wants extra education, a surcharge will be made for pay and After the teacher, after dinner in each palace there will be a presentation between the candidates in the main room,...And that's a letter that says what's forbidden,Items that can harm the body, Which weapons like cutlery or poison, But the use of a pen is allowed ,violence and other damages that seriously harm the integrity of the candidate,They can carry armed escorts but they cannot Cause harm to other candidates, Regarding the breach of any of these rules May cause expulsion depending on the Jury and if any candidate returns the pen will be eliminate¨
    -¨You're done¨
    -¨What is that pen?¨´
    -¨A bonus, they'll probably explain it at the welcome ceremony, you don't need to know immediately¨
    -¨A welcome ceremony!¨
    -¨ they do that everytime, There will be an announcement soon, but before that, I need tell you something, in the near future, you will be my eyes, ears, hands and legs, Candidates cannot leave their room alone, My success depends on you¨¨
    -It is important to have a maid?
    - yes.This is why I need to have an exclusive maid for this game
    -You're comparing it to a chess game
    -If I am the king, then The maid must protect and if necessary can replace the king,It can be a horse, a bishop or a tower
    -What if I become queen!!?
    -You are a pawn no matter where you look
    - uggh sorry?
    -Pawn but if you work hard you can be the queen, Cheer up
    -UHGGGG ROSEE!

    Someone knocks on the door, is was a royal maid with the information about the welcome ceremony (it will be in 3 days at 11 am in the big garden Between the palaces, is compulsory attendance), said the maid delivering a box to Apul, It turned out to be Maid's uniform
    -from now on This will be a battle, be careful to call me Rose outside this room dear sister
    -y..yes

    As Apul walks around angrily, she thinks ¨If she is dissatisfied with my Maid skills, let her find someone else¨(flashback)
    my room is soundproof, I cannot allow others to know my information¨, said Rose while Apul makes diffrents Hair styles
    -I did everything I could But you say you don't like it! said angry Apul
    -¨its nice¨
    -You don't know about the fashion in the capital¨ said Apul (end of flashback)
    she took me out of the room to learn quickly! I'm glad that charlotte is in the same palace!!
    said Apul with anger humm lets see, is this way? (Apul knocks a door and someone open it)
    -Good afternoon you remind me I'm here because I have something to ask....A MAN !! Apul shouts when she notices the size of the maid who opened the door ... end of chapter


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    hey, here we see how Apul has a memory of fish and yes, the lady in red ... uhgggg:mad:

    [
    a man! exclaims Apul,
    - I am a woman
    -sorry! It's the wrong room, I'm sorry,¨said Apul while think ¨ I didn't realize it, she wear the same maid outfit as me, I want to hide in a hole ... well then ..
    Mary do we have a visitor? Apul looks at the lady while she asking "What do you need?" Apul thinks is very pretty! ah .. I've seen it before .. it's true! Cedar Lurehr!
    -Duchess of Lurehr?
    -Oh my god, are you friends with Cedar?
    -Excuse me
    ?
    - Or a fan? Apul thinks, I look like a fan? we are not friends yet ...
    -"yes .. I am a fan"
    -My God, this is fate,
    says the duchess,( why is this happening?) Apul says annoyed
    -¨Come in ¨
    -no ... this!!¨

    once inside the room (with many maids) this is not like Rose's room, the duchess has 20 maids working
    -¨ I will have to introduce myself, my name is Iris Lurehr , Cedar is my brother,¨´ Apul feels comfortable with the duchess and wonders why Rose cannot be as warm as the duchess ...
    - ¨I am Apul and I am with Rose Aden, I had the opportunity to be on the same train with him Duke of Lurehr, he helped me at the station -¨You left alone without guards, I was so worried about the train delay, when he finally arrived at the palace without his face being seen, thanks to you I could hear a funny story ,Is it enough to talk about us, what do you want to ask me?"
    - "Lady Rose only has one maid for everything, I still don't know the fashion trends in the capital and I would like to learn them" s
    ays Apul ashamed
    - "we can teach you, Mary is the best hairdresser in all Lurehr ¨
    while Mary make a hairstile in Apuls hair ¨´ in the capital, Lady must split the sides into three thin parts and turn it around, the rest must be tied, it is what is fashionable, looks good on Lady Apul¨ said Mary
    -¨is that so?¨
    ask Apul
    You are good at copying, do it again¨
    Mary is good at this, right? If you forget it you can come again and learn it again¨
    -¨yes¨ Apul responds while thinking that she already wants to stop doing hairstyles-
    - ¨Lady Apul .. , ¨´
    -"Yes, Your Highness Lurehr?
    "
    - "You can call me Iris ... you ... by any chance ... Rose is ... is this okay? We are very worried about her, she did not want to receive our help when she left for Aden (here they put something of what Rose said to the Adens "I am happy with her face, so I will sell her in a suitable place to get something¨) ´ because suddenly you care about Rose? thinks Apul ...
    - however as Cedar said, thanks for taking care of Rose ¨ responds Apul
    -it has been many days since Rose left, come see me at any time, if you tell me in advance I will prepare the best refreshments
    -
    I'll ask Lady Rose about it, says Apul .. I can't trust the Lurehr, I'm the only one with Rose!
    -"I would like you to go with Mary or you can get lost again, be careful" ughh I don't know if she is being nice or if she is going to spy, while they walk through the corridors Apul realizes that she doesn't know anything about Rose and she regrets not having asked on the train and reflects on her own family and the jealousy she had because she thought they loved Rose more, saying that there is no reason to hate Rose (girl seriously? !!! ahsgahdfsds !!!:censored:!)
    -this way Mary says
    -"what is this? you are a dog, is not it?" a woman with red hair appears, who said that? Apul mentally wonders,
    -"a pleasure to see you again, her grace Paneltia" Mary replies
    -"You will do an errand ?What are you sending? dog food? "Paneltia asks haughtily
    - I'm sorry, if you'll excuse me, "says Mary to be able to leave
    -Are you not going to greet me? Why? "Paneltia asks Apul, Apul wonders if she should greet her by name because she did not know her
    -" umm very pleased "
    -" Do you not know who I am? look at her she is funny!, who are you? I do not think you are a dog of the Lurehr, who owns you? ¨
    - ¨ is the maid of Rose Aden, Miss Canna ¨ answers a blonde maid
    Rose? Rose Aden? Who? ah !! the bastard of today's newspaper, the one who made up the story, isn't she? speaks with anger Paneltia
    Why does it say that? Apul thinks
    -"dare to talk about this" Paneltia raises her hand and a blow is heard ... end of chapter
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    yeah i'd like that too
     
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    Why did I read it in Dora's way? I think looking at Dora the explorer fan arts anime style gets to me now.
     
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    I was going to drop reading it but I decided to check reviews on the Naver blogs first. The novel seems to be very popular as the comments were mostly positive, with 4 to 5 stars, citing that it had good character development and plot.

    I’m not sure if this is completely accurate because I used mtl but it looks like the the shojo vibe is deceptive.
    The actual story has pretty dark themes and leans more into political intrigue/survival fantasy with little romance.

    1. Garden

    One reviewer said that “Garden” is a “custom of…. court battle” held by the nobles for those “around the age of 20 to elect a crown princess” while Chapter 13 of Spanish webtoon translation said that the Garden was a “diversion only meant to entertain” and chapter 10 implied that people have died before during the event. The allusion that the ML made early on to chess is literal. This is a death game.

    2. The hierarchy is established by the fact that magic is exclusive to the nobility but the truth is that this magic weakens every once in a while. A person with specific features appears every generation (the Crow) and the nobility secretly sacrifices them to split up their power between themselves. ML is the crown prince and ironically also the new crow.

    Therefore, it has been agreed to set Cedar (guy FL has a crush on) and Cedar’s sister to watch ML. ML is supposed to have a child with Cedar’s sister to allow succession. They will then kill him when he reaches 20.

    This is the reason why he is hiding. The current king/his father forces him to wear a mask when in public so that no one can get impatient and kill him before he has an heir and it’s officially time to dispose of him. The mask can be seen in one of the novel covers.


    3. Cedar and his sister betray them. There are a decent amount of plot twists and a lot of tropes are played with or subverted.


    4. FL falls in love with Rose not Killian. When ML gets closer to his execution he tells her the truth and she of course feels betrayed. He decides to erase her memory so that she doesn’t feel sad because of him. She eventually realizes something is wrong because she misses both male and female forms of ML.

    5. FL commits treason against the nobles to save ML. Many reviewers joked that the FL is like a cool hero and the ML is the heroine.

    6. It’s a happy ending. Somebody said that one of their kids is seen in the extra stories. I think this child is also implied to be the next crow. There’s a little more romance there as the main story isn’t really a romance.

    It sounds pretty interesting so I hope that the novel gets translated.

    But apparently there was some controversy some time ago about “Living as the Emperor’s Fiancee” plagiarizing it.
     
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    not sure what to make of that
     
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    Wow, I was going to drop this what with how negative the reactions on the first page of this thread was but this sounds really interesting. So it's not your typical shojou manga, it's literally a game of death! What a welcome twist, was not expecting that at all but it just made my impression of the story rocket. Hopefully, someone translates the novel.
     
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    sincerely after seeing certain chapters I was about to stop reading this story, but after seeing a review and it spoke quite well of its plot twists and development of some characters, I said hummm let's continue, I really hope that the novel is fully captured ;)
    all credits for RealYeowang Scan

    [
    ¨The fever has dropped, however it can go back up¨ Suddenly Apul gets up
    ¨ You were lying a few days ago, right? During these first three days you have not been able to attend the salons or restaurants¨ says Rose
    ¨ I'm sorry Rose, I did not know that the fever would last so long ... I will prepare quickly and I will come to prepare you! After a while,
    do you like it? Lady this is the trendy hairstyle! ¨
    Really? Well, I don't like it, do the braid from the other time ¨ says Rose
    But you would look pretty with the other hairstyle, don't you think? Apul says as she thinks, I practice very hard, why do you have to be like this?
    "I've always been pretty," says Rose
    they walk down the hall when someone greets "Lady Aden! It's Charlotte.¨ Thank you for joining me at the welcome celebration, it's an honor for me, Lady Aden,...oh Lady Aden, are you feeling better?
    Uh, thanks for your concern, this ... I'm just a maid, so tell me Apul¨
    ¨No, I couldn't! I was very happy to know that Miss Apul was the daughter of a great writer, it made me happy to hear that he was an ingenious person who helped me and another, this is very embarrassing, I can't do this! ¨ Charlotte says happily
    ¨ but there are people who don't know ... we have to keep it a secret ... when we are in the garden I will be just a maid, but then I will be Lady Aden, what do you think Charlotte? You're a long way from home, I'll be your friend "
    whispers Apul
    " ehhhh friends!? "
    " If you don't like the idea, then I ... ""
    oh that's not it! Please, I'm counting on you, friend! ¨ ¨yes Charlotte!
    ¨ ¨Lady, let's go together¨

    in the garden ¨I think it is this way, there is also a garden like this in the castle, wow it is very spacious, it is also very cool!
    Canna and Apul's eyes meet, but Apul avoids her and Canna smiles maliciously, then Rose nods to Iris, Apul thinks that Rose doesn't like Iris, Ahhh how dazzling, Rose seems not to feel uncomfortable with the environment, with everyone like that? Iris is very calm again Apul and Canna´s eyes meet ,Why did our eyes meet ??
    Lady, aren't you nervous? Asks Apul, Rose brings she a dessert
    ¨This is about to start, look ahead¨ says Rose
    Eternal prosperity and blessings for the kingdom of Knox, under the grace of his majesty, the most beautiful, wise and modest ladies are welcome, here are the 7 members who have been given the duty to conduct the exam fairly and the right to evaluate the crown princess! Cedar appears and smiles, Apul blushes and thinks he smiled at her
    ¨Cedar is so great¨
    ¨ Cedar how pathetic¨ Rose says annoyed, end of chapter
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    [

    how pathetic is Cedar says Rose
    why do you say that? ¨
    Cedar Lurehr's role is to be a flower ... it's ridiculous¨
    Sometimes Rose says complicated things thinks Apul
    ¨ Finally, the chair of the Knox committee, Duchess Ella Posatil pantheon, is entering!
    she is the Duchess of Phanteon her appearance makes her look intimidating thinks Apul
    Originally the supervision of the selection should make her the most honorable woman in the royal family, it has been a tradition, but there are no women in the royal family of Knox, therefore, the Duchess of Pantheon, sister of the deceased queen, is the most honorable close to the royal family, Duchess. Ella will be in charge of directing the selection
    ¨ I express my respect and gratitude for her participation, although it may be insufficient compared to the deceased queen, I Ella Posatil Pantheon, for the wings of the holy raven, I swear to maintain a fair exam during the selection period.
    different girls talk:
    The Duchess is scary but she is great¨
    ¨´she got the duchy despide being a woman¨
    ¨ has a lot of power even in politics¨
    ¨ I have heard that there is no way to contradict her words¨
    ¨ I am nervous¨´

    ¨ ladies gathered here, let's start with the main theme, to be chosen requires some requirements, look! Those that stand out will be given a gold wing, it is a symbol of honor and will serve as a criterion for choosing, these wings have magic that prevents them from being duplicated, in case of prohibited acts, a number of wings will have to be returned according to the Decision of the jury, the wings will be your score, proud Knox young people, whatever happens, I hope you achieve many wings, after this, after two weeks, the lady without wings, will be disqualified immediately ... you look scared, of course , luck and courage can offer a slight opportunity for example this wing, and if there were any around you? there is a flower that faces south at noon and another red that blooms at the highest point, don wings were hidden in each flower ... let's toast to the first event in the glorious garden of the crown prince, everyone have their glasses! Eternal prosperity and blessings for Knox! ¨ said Ella
    ¨ Prosperity and blessings! ¨ Does everyone say
    what are you looking at? thinks Apul observing Rose, everyone leaves and Apul mentally repeats the clues without having a conclusion ... Rose seems nervous I must be alert, as a maid I am her eyes, ears, hands and feet, the ladies will check the garden then ..
    . ¨ lady ... are you ready?
    says Apul holding Rose's hand ... We have to find them, end of chapter]
     
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    jeinpo Well-Known Member

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    Hello, I actually bring you a double chapter ... yes, these are dark:oops:
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    [
    Apul and Rose walk through the labyrinth
    ¨ this path is confusing, I don't remember where we came from¨ Apul says ¨
    sister, today you should not separate from me¨ ¨
    but you still need wings to win¨
    today I will take it easy, I am sure I will win wings throughout the two weeks, don't worry¨
    but¨
    It is important not to side with any of the groups, if you wait patiently one of the two will lose its power
    "says Rose
    " there is nothing red ... there is something I want to ask you, what will you do when you become crown princess? ¨ (finally asks something with meaning:LOL:)
    ¨ becoming a princess is the important thing, no matter what happens next? I will behave well with the Aden family, other than that I do not know what I will do¨
    really? ¨
    lets stop talking about it, enough
    ´ Rose is going at a fast pace ¨´
    ah! wait for me ¨ shouts Apul, then Apul continues remembering the clues given ¨
    what does it mean? Just as you said, if a lady doesn't like to get her hands dirty, the maids will have to do it, if I were a judge I'd put it in a place where they can't reach, think about it Rose! It's not funny that a maid finds it instead of the lady, if you want to prove that you're worthy, shouldn't you look for them yourself? ¨ says Apul with determination
    ¨So where do you think they should be? ¨ asks Rose, ¨
    I don't I know ... huh? Rose! that flower ... uhgg did not arrive, the branch comes from the other side, I will pull the branch ¨
    well, come back quickly¨ says Rose carefree
    As Apul runs, she thinks about how she will make Rose grab the flower by herself, she finds the flower and is very likely to reach to lower it, Apul is about to lower the flower but someone kidnaps her, they pour water on her to react and Apul doesn't understand the situation
    ¨ Hey, squirrel, get up ¨ is Lady Canna Paneltia!
    What is all this? ask Apul, you must enjoy hitting squirrels ¨´
    you were good at speaking without respect the last time¨ ¨ says Canna
    what will you do in this sacred garden? ¨
    what do you think I'm going to do? don't you think it's boring looking for the wings? So let's play a game with each other, isn't it fun?
    Canna says while tying Apul's hands
    "I don't want to do it" says Apul
    "You don't have to, squirrel, we will do it as an experiment."
    I don't know what you're up to, but shouldn't you ask permission? "Says Apul, noticing the giggles of superiority from the other Ladys
    "Well thought out, you're a good girl! But it won't do you good," says canna in an intimidating way.
    "Why?"
    Who asks permission from a maid? I've never heard anything like this, you've said enough, there are too many people waiting, have fun, it's time to hunt the squirrel¨
    Canna kicks Apul (what the hell! )¨ GET STARTED? ¨end of chapter
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    [

    sister? Rose asks looking for Apul
    ¨ I did not send her alone¨ she says worried,
    ¨ Leto ... Leto? ... damn! ¨
    that happens for putting too much mana in Rose's heart to get this look, this person is 14 years old, if I retire the ring now I will be risking too much, only a few, including the imperial family can use magic in this country ... "Tsk ... Canna Paneltia ... ¨ first I must find her, surely this in a crowd of people, I recognize almost all, but not here ...(bells ring) the noon bell, it's the exact moment, the flowers swinging, the hand that touches the flower, the flowers that bloom south at noon, it's not time to think about the wings, I need to find Apul but I don't know where to go
    ¨ Rose! What about your maids? ´ asks Iris
    ¨ send everyone to look for Lady Apul ¨
    you said she left¨´
    ¨ I never said that, how do you know? ¨

    ¨ because Lady canna and her little group have not been seen, I want to know What happened ¨´
    ¨´ why didn't you talk to me before? ¨
    ¨Rose, there was no time, I am also responsible for this, Lady Paneltia instead of going for me or for you, chose Apul to attack, she is trying to annoy us ¨
    I know

    Canna Paneltia uses cowardly methods, in the history of the Gardens things have always happened like this, all the candidates are noble, but they are all the same, they hurt each other to achieve their goal, then, instead of telling the truth, they blame the maid by any excuse, it is something natural, like when we do something bad as children, they beat us to teach us a lesson, Garden is a series of retaliations, only the fittest remain
    "It's scarier than I expected" says Rose ¨
    Here I want to help you, I will protect you both, I swear on the honor of Duke Lurehr¨ says Iris showing Rose a wing
    ¨ this is a wing, it must have been difficult for the maids to find it ¨ says Rose about to touch the wing, but it changes of thought ... a human is not interchangeable, it was an absurd idea, (remember moments lived with Apul) a human cannot replace another, not in this world ...
    I believe in your friendship, but no, thanks¨ says Rose rejecting the Wing
    ¨ Kylian ... ¨
    Rose takes off her ring and Kylian appears
    ¨ this is my responsibility from the beginning¨ end of the chapter
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    ready! here another update!
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    Now I am going to let the squirrel escape and you will have to catch it, you remember the rules, right? once caught her you should let her go so that the others can have fun too "says canna
    " wait a minute what are you talking about now!? "says Apul lying on the ground tied up
    nobody understands the language of squirrels " all the ladys laugh
    ¨ You need proof that you caught the squirrel, you have to take a button from her uniform, don't be bad, just take one, understood? Canna says while Apul thinks they are intimidating a person, everyone laughs, no one is going to help her, it's too much
    The lady who gets the most catches at the end of the welcoming ceremony will win whatever price she wants on behalf of the Marquis Paneltia, whether she want shares in the Paneltia businesses or exclusive rights to sell spices! Canna says encouraging the others, Apul feels miserable ... they are going to hunt me, I have not done anything wrong, they only do it for fun thinks desperate Apul
    ¨ it is time to play in the labyrinth¨ Canna covers Apul's eyes with a piece of cloth, Apul is terrified, where are you Rose? I'm afraid, no now is not the time, now I can't, I have to escape somehow, somehow
    ¨Canna! ¨ Apul shout, the Ladys present are outraged
    ¨ did you hear that? ¨
    ´ How dare that shameless maid to call my Lady by name?
    ¨ what a lack of respect
    how? how dare you call me?
    Canna asks indignantly. I have to buy time until someone comes for me, I have to propose something more interesting
    ¨I ... I want to participate too! ¨ Apul says shouting, please make it work!
    If I win, you will also give me a prize! Apul says
    ¨ then run with all your might !, ¨
    some time later...
    .where can she be hidden?
    She is blindfolded but she is very fast ¨
    is she there?
    I already have two buttons ..
    . those steps sounded very close, I hope they don't find me
    ¨ do you think about winning? If you manage to get out of the maze before the hunt is over, you will have won.says Canna before the star of the game, Finding a hiding place is difficult but the exit is even worse ...
    I found her! shouts a maid
    ¨ not get tired? stop, say Apul
    ¨ is she not afraid?
    that this a little nervous makes the hunt more fun ´
    at the beginning I was afraid
    say Apul
    what are you talking about?
    I was scared because I didn't know what was going to happen, but now what do I know, why should I be scared?
    this maid doesn't know everything!
    yells one of the ladys kicking Apul (it got very dark this)
    Rose Aden didn't educate you properly? Where can an illegitimate commoner learn to be a lady?
    no .. don't mess with Rose,
    I'm sure you're going to stay in Lurehr and eat crumbs
    ,
    she's my little sister !! stop saying stupid things! Apul explodes,
    that strange, I was prepared to feel the blows, but nothing happened, what is happening? someone else came to catch me? Who? I'm afraid
    why don't you go? Apul asks fearfully,
    please let me go, just this time..Ah!?, Kylian lifts Apul into his arms
    ¨ have you come to save me? a broad back, strong arms is ... Miss Mary?
    What happens? where have you hurt yourself? is it a place you don't want to show? Why don't you say anything ?... Miss Mary hurt herself fighting with the ladies?
    Okay, I'm not going to look, but then I'll talk to Lady Lurehr, I'm sure she can heal you
    ¨ Kylian goes down to Apul and takes her hand, and writes with his finger signs " I bless you with eternal prosperity " to what Apul feels ticklish and only half understands the message, wondering about the message, she remove the blindfold
    Miss Mary? where is it? where is miss mary? I need to find my way out ...
    what are you doing here?
    Rose
    !! end of chapter
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