Spoiler Quick Transmigration Cannon Fodder’s Record of Counterattacks

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  1. MMWO

    MMWO *pout*

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    Uh... Tai Shu died yes. Ning Shu and Tai Shu's brother survived though. They are still alive. The void is about to about to be destroyed and Ning Shu has the "Unsurpassable Martial Arts" which is like another void. So in the time that the void is destroyed, Ning Shu and company can just enter Unsurpassable Martial Arts and live there.
     
  2. Aeiru28

    Aeiru28 Unchanged Melody

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    bye...bye... Taishu:blobfearful::blobsob::blobsob:
    so it is Ning Shu and her former 'system', huuh...
    what about another characters, like the brother emperor, or the sickly husband (who later become soldier??)
     
  3. raxadian

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    They show up again, but besides the brother Emperor traveling universes and the Phoenix Guy becoming a pathetic antagonist they don't affect the narrative much.
     
  4. Rania want to QT

    Rania want to QT Love my Wi-Fi

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    Which chapter Ning Shu met her brothers?
     
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    Oh God xD I end up reading everything for like 7 hours ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ
     
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    Just Curious, the novelupdates page list the chapter as 4413 (On Going)
    But in Yunqi there is 4327 chapter and it's listed as complete.
    Is there a continuation that i don't know, or the data in novelupdates page just wrong?
     
  7. MMWO

    MMWO *pout*

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    Data in novelupdates just wrong.
     
  8. Bockris

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    Hello, I have been reading this novel MTL and I have decided to post spoilers for some of the unspoiled, yet-to-be-translated and my favourites arcs

    Setting: Sci-fi
    The Original Plot: Client was born or thrown into a dumpster planet. The people there survived by scavenging from the trash that was deposited on the planet periodically. She had a younger brother who need to be on a wheelchair, so she had to scavenge for two people, which made her life even harder. One day, some people form a very advanced planet came and decided to test the dwellers of the planet to find those with high mental power. Those which acceptable results where given the chance to left the dumpster planet and become Mecha pilots (or so they said). The client was discovered to have above average mental power and decided to follow these people, she vowed to her brother that she will become stronger and will come back for him later, she even entrusted him to some girl that seemed to have some interest on him. After she had left the planet she was taken to a secret facility and had her mental power forcefully extracted from her, crippling her. She died (or was left to die, can't remember)
    The Wish: To save his brother from the planet, have a good life and become a Mecha Pilot.
    The Counterattack: MC survive on the planet scavenging and training. Because the planet is so dirty, she can't cultivate the Peerless Martial Arts, so she tries to find things she can use as weapons. She finds some oil that burns at a very high temperature and she gathers as much as she can. She takes care of the Client's brother as good as she can. When the visitors come, she convinced the strongest warrior on that region of their planet (the planet has some sort of tribal society) to play along with her and help her to take over the ship. The client's brother begs her not to go on the ship and abandon him, she reassures him that she will take him with her, but he's not fully convinced. When she's tested and accepted, she mentions to the testers that her brother is able to move things with his mind, but he can't come to the test because he can't walk. The testers are exited about the possibility of such a strong mental power and two of them go to her shed to pay a test him on site. They're quickly trapped on a hole full with the oil MC found earlier and are set on fire. MC takes the brother and joint the tribe on taking over the ship. They lose some people because of the defences on the ships, but they're able to get to the control center. There the Twist happens: The Client's brother was a reincarnator, he was fully cappable of operating the high-tech ship and was aparently the black hand behind the tribe boss.

    He was not happy with her leaving him on the planet the first time. He still has some affection for her tough, and because of the changes MC has done to the plot, he decides to give her a Chance to explain herself on why she wanted to abandon him. MC tells her the original plot, just adding the fact that she, like him, came back in time, just at a latter point than him. He sort of forgives her and tell her his story. Turns out, he stayed on the planet waiting for her and one day he rescued an old man barely alive, he seemed to have been beaten before being thrown on the garbage and the brother helped him to recover. The man was a very intelligent and famous scientific, specialized on mecha building. He was able to call for help with some improvised devised made from some scavenged trash and took the brother with him as an apprentice (I can't recall exactly how he came back on time).

    They fend some pirates and made their way into the most advanced planet on the galaxy. They sell the ship brother helps all of them to get residence permits and buy a house. Most of the rescued people don't have skills useful to make money, so they start playing/streaming MMO games to earn some money, MC wants to join Mecha Academy, but it's expensive. One important thing here: there's this interstellar network used for information sharing and basically all civilization uses it for almost everything. MC goes to do some quest to other planet, the quest is to prune some massive plant that periodically grows at a very high speed, treatening with covering the whole planet it's growing at. While there, MC realizes that that plant is the Summoned Beast she had in a previous world (Arc 32: Summoner Queen), she convinces the plant to trust her and play dead, taking it's main body with her. MC tells the demon plant (Xiaocao) who she is and what her job entails, Xiaocao is glad to meet her master again ant tells her that, years after the events of their previous meeting, she found a weird hole and crossed trough it, ending on that planet in this interstellar plane and couldn't come back to it's original one. MC realizes that this plane's civilization and technology has becoming so advanced that they were starting to open holes on the barrier separating it from the neighbours planes. This is definitely not good news, as they may bring war to other less developed world and cause problems for the organization. The organization, of course, would not wait sitting for that to happen so they will probably nip the problem in the bud.

    After some time, the Brother rescues her master again before he's thrown on the garbage (but after he was beaten), the old man is impressed by this young boy knowledge and decides to take him as an apprentice (he's not aware of the previous live). While the two chat, MC discovers that the Old man, and probably some of his friends, is aware of the other planes and is working towards developing a way to get there, MC is obviously disturbed and upset about that ridiculous and naive thinking.

    Live goes ok for some time, MC still wants to learn how to pilot a mecha, but they still don't have the money. One day it's discovered that the ship they took and sold belonged to this superadvanced planet's government and they become wanted criminals. Turns out this planet needed mental power in order to do something and were taking it from "non-people" from abandoned planets, as no one (that mattered) would complain about it. The police arrest MC and leave the others, as they don't have Mental Power. The Brother is shielded by the Old Man, so he's safe for now. They took MC and Xiaocao on to a detention complex and while the Brother tries his best, MC doesn't have much hope on him. After some time, MC and Xiaocao are taken blindfolded to an important building, MC deduces this is the main "brain" of this civilization, and here is where they take the mental power from people. MC finds out humans have found remains of a previous super-civilization here in this planet, ans that's the reason it has developed so quickly. Before they can do anything to MC, she orders Xiaocao to cover the building and kill destroy as much as she can, she wants to kill this brain. MC goes looking for whatever they need the mental power for. Military can't do anything too dangerous to them, as the building is really important and many important scientist are still inside. MC finds the Brother's teacher carrying a suitcase. She steals it and opens it, revealing a black cube. 2333 comes back online and tells MC that the cube contains all the knowledge of a civilization, but it requires a lot of mental power to activate it. MC gives it to him for storage and runs away with Xiaocao. Meanwhile, the interstellar net has been practically destroyed and the planet is on chaos. MC reunites with the brother and leave with all of his people on a stolen ship.

    The brother lands on a very distant and uncivilized planet, full of forest and with just some human tribes on them. They start farming and decided to remain there, MC is a little mad, as she can't become a mecha pilot there, so she will get a low score on the mission. She asks 233 to send Xiaocao back to her plane, which he obliges. After some time, the escapees start to establish relationships with the natives and they seem to prosper. MC points that although is very different from the High tech planet they just left, it is still a paradise compared with the dumpster they used to live at. The mission is completed and MC leaves the world.
     
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  9. elparis

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    this arc sound a bit dull and boring for some reason but thanks for the spoilers
     
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    Yeah, it's boring, but I like the last few chapters, mostly where we reunite with Xiaocao and we get to see a little of MC's commitment to her job's mission.

    Onto the next Spoilers:

    Setting: Urban Fantasy
    Original Plot: The Client was a Vampire Hunter, vampires where creatures of the night, but the strongest ones could move during the day. Hunters operate in pairs, and the Client's partners was the Female Lead. She was not cut for the work, but she was rescued by the vampire hunter organization as a child, so she didn't have much of a career option. During one mission, she caught the eye of a vampire nobility, a handsome and powerful vampire (ML). He helped many times during mission, and even though the Client warned her about it, she reciprocated his feelings. The client was loyal to the organization and finally decided to report her partner to the organization. FL was about to be executed, but the execution was interrupted by the ML, who promptly killed all the hunters in the execution grounds, including the client.
    The wish: Punish the traitor and not to die.
    The counterattack: MC and FL go to hunt some vampires, unlike the Client, MC just don't have time to deal with FL antics, so the relationship strains a bit. They meet the ML on one of the missions and after the FL throws a tantrum, MC leaves her behind and return to the headquarters, There she makes some reports, and gets invited by another couple of hunters to join on a mission, she accepts. FL returns and complains about been left behind, she complains a little more after she's told MC was going to mission without her. On the way to the mission place (a little town with some unusual vampiric incidents) the trio is caught up by a helicopter, from where ML descends to leave FL with her friends. The couple of hunters get suspicious about him and MC tells them the truth, he's a vampire but they should not make any moves, they're just not his match. FL gets rejected by the group and leaves with ML, MC and the hunters agree to report this to the higher ranks after the mission.

    On the town they come across a few vampires, and after some detective work, they find a place where a ritual has been taken place, an ancient coffin is opening in the middle of it and they feel that something is not good and run away. Apparently, the vampires there used the blood they have been collecting to awaken a primordial vampire, one of the thirteen strongest vampires and a real threat to the organization. MC is not aware of any of this, as the Client died without knowing either. They report all of this to the higher ranks, which causes everyone to go into full alarm mode. FL gets detained and trialed, she's found guilty of treason and comdemned to execution. Meanwhile, MC tries to cultivate the Peerles Martial Arts but there's no enough aura on the plane, this when a breakthrough happens: MC realizes that she can absorb not only aura, but also other types of energies, such as sun light (or yang energy). She cultivates as much as she can and ends up with a tanning and an afro, which causes her peers to look at her with a lot of curiosity. She also sets up a yang-energy gathering formation around the headquarters. The energy in her dantian looks like magma and there's a fire dragon swimming there.

    On the day of the execution, ML comes to the rescue with some elite vampires, MC uses this chance to create some distrust between ML and FL. She makes FL unable to speak and claims in front of everyone that this was a trap to lead ML onto the execution grounds. The Chief of the Hunters, a woman with the magic ability to create sacred water, catch up to MC ruse and plays along. When the Formation is activated, the vampires get weakened and almost all of them are killed, only ML survives thanks to the intervention of the primordial vampire, who has a special ring that shot rays that disintegrate anyone they touch. The Elder claims MC's power are Eastern Magic and should not be on the West, but she ignores him. After some back and forth fight, where ML is caught on the fire, the elder leaves taking him to recover.

    After the battle, FL gets stolen from the prison, presumably by that vampire elder. The hunters continue to investigate and prepare, as they fear the coming of a second Holly War. MC and some hunters take some newbies to complete a mission, they suspect another ritual is taking place and they must stop it. With the help of some spells, MC finds the recently awoken vampire sleeping on a cemetery, MC impales him with an enchanted silver sword (she drew some spells on it.) and keeps it busy with some spells while the sword makes its work. After that, the senior hunters let the newbies deal with some vampires that came to rescue their elder, this was a training mission, after all. On the tomb MC finds some roses so pretty, fresh and fragrant, anyone would think they were just picked that morning, but MC knows they were on that coffin for centuries. She asks 2333 to store them.

    After returning to the headquarters, MC is asked to go to the chief room, where she finds her deeply hurt with an arm missing. She was ambushed by some strong vampires and need time to heal. She puts MC in charge of the headquarters and asks her to inform all other headquarters of the situation so they can make preparations in advance. The governments of many countries criticize the Hunters association inability to deal alone with the problem, but MC blatantly answers that they can scrap the Hunters Association and deal personally with the vampires if they feel that way. MC also enchants some Silver Swords and they're immediately taken away and distributed, turns out the newbies told everyone the tale of MC defeating the elder vampire and the Enchanted Silver Sword became a highly wanted item. MC spent some days and nights enchanting even more swords and now everyone has one always by their side, these swords give everyone a sense of security and they have them while sleeping, eating and even in the bathroom.

    One day, ML and FL appear on the Headquarters Grounds with some elite vampires. FL has been converted and the ML seems to be more powerful than before. MC realizes that he has taken the ring from his elder and has probably also inherited his powers. Turns out the elder also fell in love with the FL and tried to take her while she was taking care of ML. ML woke up and went mad, killing the elder and drinking his blood, which helped him recover and made him more powerful. After some words where we get to see the FL chastise MC (as many FLs do), ML starts the fight. The Enchanted Swords do their work, helping the hunters to fight on par with the vampires. ML wants to use the ring to deal with the hunters, but MC attacks him with spells while he tries to do so. ML and MC enter a stalemate and are forced to keep an eye on each other. MC suddenly recalls the strange roses from before and asks 2333 for them. This causes ML to behave even more carefully, as he knows the power of the roses. MC tries to figure out how to use the rose and is finally able to purge the blood from the previous owner from them, making the rose now hers. ML goes mad when he realizes this and shot some rays towards MC, but they're quickly neutralized. It seems the roses are able to withstand and neutralize the rays from the ring. She summons her fire dragon and kills as many vampires as possible, when ML tries to disintegrate the dragon, she uses the rose to protect it. She finally kills all the vampires but ML and FL, then forces the ML to engage on a fight with the fire dragon while order the hunters to execute the treacherous ML (the execution method involved getting cut in half by a giant saw). She can't stand the pain and asks ML to kill her to relieve her form the suffering, which he does. MC gets surprised by that level of devotion, even killing his loved one just because she asked. The ML is finally killed and the battle ends.

    2333 identifies the stone on the ring as a Time Law stone, a stone with the law of time capable of shooting a ray of compressed time, thousands of years in one instant, making the things it touch vanish. There's always one exception to everything: the roses are unaffected by time, so they can neutralize the rays. Before leaving the world, MC leaves a copy of the Peerless Martial Arts for the Client (in Chinese, of course, no secret oriental technique should be written in English). MC also tries to not overhunt the vampires, that would break the balance of the plane, is a plane with vampires and hunters and the war between them should be resolved organically.
     
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    This Next Arc is pretty interesting

    The plot: Client was a transmigrator on a world where they were so common, people native to the plane were fully aware and used them as commodities and slaves. Since transmigrators came to this world by possesing dead bodies, they were not regarded as people, as they were thieves that stole a body from a "real person". The client was sold to a noble man, he wanted to show off his cool slave to other noblemen and trained her in order to develop her abilities (most transmigrators had a special ability, even it it was just hover a little bit). After he got tired of her he gave the client to some servants as a plaything. Client died as a result of the abuse.
    The Wish: To not die and punish those who hurt her.
    The counterattack: MC wakes up in a cage after being bought. She defends herself against the servants that want to mark her with a red iron seal. The nobleman asks her about her abilities and she says she's to weak to use them. He punish her insolence by putting her in a dark room and barely feeding her. MC uses this time to cultivate the Peerless Martial Arts and get stronger, she manages to get enough aura on her dantian to form a little dragon there. After some time, she manages to free herself and almost curb stomp the nobleman and his servants, he manages to scape with a teleportation scroll, which reminds MC to be careful of powerful wizards on this plane.

    MC cultivates on a forest until she suddenly gets a visit from a few powerful member of The Organization, one of them is the Uncle. They inform her that this plane is going to be evacuated as it is too damaged to continue on his own. Apparently, the reason so many people transmigrate to this plane is because it is full of holes and souls from neighbouring planes find it easy to get in. MC doesn't want to be with them but she reluctanly agrees to help them after they tell her that since this plane is about to collapse, her mission is going to be voided. They task her to find them a transportation method, so she goes and "tames" a dragon to carry them to different places. The dragon does so out of fear for MC.

    The first place they visit is the Mermaid kingdom, one of the big shots open a portal to his world and take away all the mermaids. MC and the dragon are in awe, the dragon then offers himself to carry all of them, as he realizes they are strong and he may learn something from them. They go and take away all of the races in tshi world. The humans are split in two groups, one of them is rescued and the other is sent into reincarnation, humans are the most propense towards evil deeds, so they are picky when rescueing them. The nobleman from the task is sent into reincarnation and the same happens with the soul of the client.

    All of them, including the dragon, go out of the plane. MC remarks that the plane looks like sponge. The Uncle tries to prune the most damaged portion of the plane, but it collapses and breaks into small pieces. All of the big shots start cleaning, MC tries to help them, but she can't lift plane fragments as easy as them, as she lacks comprehension of the laws of the planes (The laws are things explained in the cool off time between tasks, but I don't like reading those chapters). The dragon is taken away by the man who took the dragon race and MC returns to her espace.

    This is the first time we see high level taskers doing stuff and trying to repair a plane, and the first time MC was able to watch them taking things into the worlds they created.
     
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    For anyone that finished this book and is looking for something similar, there's another book by the same author and there are some characters from this book in there too. Like the uncle
    But I'm not sure about the timeline tho, not sure if it takes place before or after this novel. Here's the link for anyone interested
    https://m.imiaobige.com/novel/229127.html
     
  13. Bockris

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    Nice, I was looking for something similar, just a quick question: does this have a ML that follows MC trough the different worlds or is like this one with no ML?

    Onto the next Spoilers:

    Plot: Client is an elder sister in a "CEO pampers the FL" plot. The FM is her sister, born of an affair his father had with an actress. This sister is a master whitelotus that conquered her sister's (The client's) fiance, the CEO (or something like that) of the largest company in the country. Her father wants to grow his own company by using the marriage of his daughter to cling to this CEO's leg. This father is also under the spell of the FL, and sees her as a kind and filial daughter and see his elder daughter and wife as bullies. The CEO forces the father to change the engagement and to divorce his wife, quicking both mother and sister to the streets. He and the FL lived happily ever after while the Client and her mother had to beg on the streets.
    Wish: To no let the sister climb the social ladder.
    The counterattack: This one is a little hard for MC, as she can't use violent methods and has little power (economic power). She determines that all the good things that happen to the FL come from this ML, so in order to satisfy the Client's wish, she doesn't need to destroy the FL, she need to focus on destroying her backing, this CEO.
    • She starts to cultivate the Peerless Martial Arts refining the power of the sun.
    • She warns her mother to not fall into FL's provocations and always have a secret recorder with her.
    • When her mother pushes the FL of the stairs because sonme words, she uses this time to put some sun energy on her leg.
    • The ML forces the mother to thrown herself on the stairs, and she complies, just to calm him down and buy some time.
    • She goes to the mountains to get some ingredients and starts making some skincare products, she plants to sell it to socialites following the High-End Brand path. She asks the mother to start buying actions of the father's company.
    • The sun energy flares up as MC wishes, the doctor can't fint the source of the FL's pain. The ML almost goes crazy worrying over her. After sometime, she removes most of the fire energy, leaving just enough for it to be painful on cold days.
    • She sells some photos of the father meeting the FL's mother on a date, she blurres the father's face and only tells the magazine that this is a forgotten actress playing a golddigger.
    • With the help of a girl she sent some special product (she had serious burn scars that started to fade after using MC's products), she start selling a little more of her skincare. She also sends some products to deal twith menopause symtoms to some old ladies.
    • When the scandal of the photos goes public, ML tries to make the magazine retrieve all the sold numbers... yeah... it doesn't work. But FL uses this chance to talk with him about the true love between her parents...
    • When the CEO asks the Father to divorce The Client's mother and marry the FL's, he asks MC to convince her mother. MC tells her to ask for all of the Father's company shares. After some back and forth, they settle at 30% and they divorce.
    • The father marries this actress and ML proposes to FL getting as much publicity as possible. This sort of backfires when the journalists start digging and find out FL was an illegitimate daughter and her mother was involved in a recent scandal. ML mades some control damage.
    • After the wedding of the father and the mistress, the Mother ask for a meeting of all shareholders and wants to push the Father from the position of chairman. The father asks the FL to get the ML to the meeting to help him. Just as a new Chairman as been elected, the ML arrives and claims that the Bai family has decided to buy the Ding enterprise (the Father's company), this of course means that the mother can not push Ding Yang anymore, but she and MC are happy, as the Father realizes that he has invited a wolf into his home. He wanted his company to grow, but he wanted it to be under his name, not under someone else's. The shareholders are upset. Only the FL is happy, as her hero has "rescued" her family. Because of the surprise, and the anger of the shareholders, the meeting ends and the sell of the company gets suspended, for the time.
    • The Mother buys more shares from some minor shareholders, who are scared of the company being sold and plans on taking over the company.
    • The Father asks FL to get the ML to retire the buying "offer". FL weights pros and cons and refuses to ask ML, and tells her Father he can talk to him himself, as she doesn't know exactly was wrong. The Father finally realizes that this daughter is not as filial as he tought. He vent's his anger on the Mistress, who always seems to be on a shopping spree.
    • The Mother does get the position of the Chairman, and kicks the Father out. She then stages a play, saying she will sell the company to some foreigners. The father grows scared and calls FL, only to realize she has his number blocked. He gets mad and goes home to slaps his wife, then asks her to call her good daughter and ask her for help.
    • FL asks the ML for help and he ends up buying the Mothers shares and the rest of the company. MC and the mother are happy, as they have made the Father regret rising that white-eyed wolf.
    • There is big plot of land being sold by the government, MC knows that the family of the socialite she helped before is going to buy the land, but later, some ancient ruins are dicovered and the need to give it back, losing a lot of money. She plots and convince the girl to release the maximum biding price from her family, which she relectanly does. The ML ends up winning the bidding for the land, and this girls gets in trouble with her family, but MC takes all the blame, knowing they will apologize later.
    • MC continues selling products and her brand has become popular among rich and influential women. She asks this girls she helped before to send some special batch to her sister (FL). FL uses the special bodylotion and the ML goes a little crazy with her new body fragance, licking and bitting and being more passionate in bed, so she decides to continue using it. She's also happy that the socialites are now currying favour with her, giving her gifts.
    • After ML's company starts digging the plot of land, they found a tomb. He tries to hide it, as he thought it was just one tomb, but more and more ruins were discovered and this made it impossible to hide. The archeologists got dispached and they critiziced ML heavily, as many relics were destroyed by carelessly being exposed to the elements. The company's reputation fell in one night along with their stock price.
    • ML is forced to give back the land without getting any of his money back. He gets angry easily, and only the aroma of the FL's body calms him down. He still fells humiliated and decides to increase the price of all his products in order to recover some of his loses. The people goes mad and the stock price falls more. He claims the price increase was based on some improvement on the products, but this is quickly disproved. Later he calms down and bring prices down, but the damage is done. Many small companies started using this time to get some pieces of the market, meaning the ML's company has lost a big part of his power along with the costumer's trust.
    • MC buys a lot of ML's company shares, she becomes a major shareholder. The company keeps losing money, so they start asking for a capital injection. The FL ask her father, but he refuses, saying that he will give money if they give the Family's company back to him. This does not work out.
    • After reassuring FL of his eternal love, ML starts looking for a wife with a powerful family to save his company. The ladies avoid him like the plague, so he settles down on MC. MC lents the money, under the condition that ML and FL will not be together and they will marry after the company recovers. MC knows they are just pretending and they are meeting frequently in their secret "love nest".
    • After sometime, ML realizes he has lost his confidence, having making mistake after mistake, he's filled with fear of failing. He decides to run away with the FL to live abroad. MC is like... "what about my money, you prick?". The father and the mistress divorce, as their marriage is not useful for any of them anymore.
    • Some months later FL returns alone, when MC meets her and asks her about ML, she is told he remained abroad. She hires a Private Detective and task him with finding ML. when the detective sends her the results, she finds out the ML has turned into a homeless gambling and drug addict.
    • The body lotion that MC gave FL had some especial ingredients that made people who eat it (or lick it) more agressive and paranoic, only calming down when taking it again. The ML was made addict to it and it seems he tried to replace the calming effects with other drugs but it didn't work. FL realiced he's a lost cause and decided to return to her father's home.
    • At the end MC got the client the skincare recipes so she can continue the bussines. The mother became a traveling blogger and socialite. The father wants to marry the mother back, she ignores him. FL has to go back to live with her father, who doesn't like her anymore and is not as rich as before. Because of the high publicity her engagement with ML had, no rich heir would want to have anything to do with her. She will always live with her father until she marries, and she will not marry into a higher social position. Mission complete.
     
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    uhh... i think you hit 'post' too soon...
     
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    Yeah, was almost time to bed and didn't know how to save a draft, so I just posted it. It should be complete now.
     
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    No it doesn't
     
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    The recent manga - I make scum men cry and Cannon Rodder's record of Counterattack are both based on this CN right?
     
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    yes..
    the first one is from one of the arc...
    the second one is the from the first arc.
     
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    I came to rant about the arc i'm currently reading
    Its called Stockholm syndrome
    The FL is a fucking brain dead masochist, The ML raped her and tormented her emotionally and physically and she would complain that she hates him but at the end of the day she would run back to him.
    She used second ML as emotional support and eventually got him killed, cried about it for a while and then got married to his killer the ML PS she has known the second ML for 10 fuking years
    Its like shes living in her own little world were she suffers a lot (she likes that shit) and she has a victim mentality
    I swear i don't have violent tendencies but every time this FL opens her mouth i feel like punching the screen then throwing myself off a cliff.
     
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    Yeah, I get what you mean. Sadly, she's not the FL with the worst martyr complex the MC finds during her missions, so be ready.

    Plot: Is a domestic violence plot. I can't find any novel it resembles, it is mostly an everyday story. The Client was married to this lazy and useless man that beat her up a lot. They have two daughters that were scared of their father and ashamed of their weak mother and disfunctional household. The client worked ang earn some money then the husband gambled it away. The maternal family was useless, always telling her to bear with it. I can't recall the ending, but I assume the client died because of the violence,
    Wish: To not be beaten by her husband and take care of her daughters.
    The counterattack: She starts by cultivating the sun energy of the city, is a modern world, so the aura is almost non-existent. She fights violence with violence (my personal favourite method). She's laid off of her work because of her husband. When the husband comes home, she sends her daughters to their room and proceed to beat the heck out of him. She puts some sun energy near his heart, so when he gets violent, he starts having heart attack symptoms.
    She goes to search for him at the gambling house and he feels safe in front of his buddies, so she tries to attack MC, the sun energy explodes and he needs to be taken to the hospital. MC proceeds to alienate him from his friends by asking them for money to pay his hospital fees. She goes daily to the gambling house until she's banned.
    Meanwhile, everytime he gets cocky, MC beats him. She makes sure the daughters don't see or hear a thing, she needs to be a good mother in their eyes.
    In order to get money, she starts selling food (pancakes, I think) outside of the school the girls attend to. The husband distrust her, thinking she's going to cheat on him, but she shuts him up quickly. The bussines does well, and, because she urges the girls to share their lunches with their classmates, the girls start making new friends and are happier.
    The husband tries to tell his neighbours that MC beats him, but they don't believe him, and MC ask for their help to bring him inside the house, since he's clearly still sick. Then he beats him up.
    The client's family urges MC to divorce the useless husband (heart problems, MC did not take the sun flame away) and marry another man they found. He's a widow with a son that needs a mother to rise him, MC says he's selfish and cheap since he refused to take his late wife to the hospital because he didn't want to pay. MC refuses and the family said that the man has already paid the bride price to the family. MC goes to the police and report that the family is selling people, they are investigated and disown the client. MC doesn't care.
    At the end, the mission is complete. The client only wanted a peaceful life with no violence. MC looks back at the world after she lefts and see the couple working together selling food. The client seems at peace.
     
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