Reviews for my novel from fellow authors

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  1. Mae Rogel 82

    Mae Rogel 82 Call me Mae _ [Red step-siblings(Eldest)]

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    hi! I'm reading your novel. I'm only on the first chapter, so can't give a review yet. Will be back when I've read more (ෆ˙ᵕ˙ෆ)♡
     
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  3. ListlessCat

    ListlessCat ࿈༼The Anarchic Witch༽࿈ ⦑⤉notsoGoody Good Shoes⤈⦒

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    I got intrested by the name of the book. I was a former writer so I should be still qualified right? Anways imma check and read your book✨:blobmelt:
     
  4. Xian Piete

    Xian Piete Author of many mediocre stories

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    You need an editor for basic grammar... Without having read much of anything I can see from Chapter 3's title for instance: "I don't wanna you to get married"
     
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    Isaac20 Dark Lord | RS

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