Help a fellow author

I write a novel with 12 chapters. Can you get me a review but please read the 12 chapters before doing a review

The novel like: http://wbnv.in/a/6bg4i2N

 

Honestly you should profread it yourself first. I assume english isn't your first lenguage because I had simmiliar problem when i tryed writing something myself and read it again and it was all wonky. It seams like you wrote it but didn't read it yourself so I would sugest doing that.

 

Thanks I will do that