The only changes I'd make are the killing women..... They never fucking kill females no matter how much they F**k up mc and his life, never! The worst is they are sent away, the best is ofcourse add on to harem...like why not?! She only just killed his sister, mother and father, not like she killed the rest of his family right?...... Right?! Right?! Ahhh f*ck it, old troubles.... Let it be in past.
Got to milk them udder Yeehaw! I would surely give a special thick gallon of milk to that blonde in the middle sensually gazing at me.... Mooooo yeah.... Ps: *cough* just acting >.>