Comments on Profile Post by Bielt

Countless ships traveling through the sea,
Countless dreams, countless nightmares.
No one knows what is to come,
The encounters this trip will bring.
We don't know where this trip will end,
Nor what our destination is.
All we know is that we sail,
To beyond the horizon.

Aspirations and emotions which turn into dreams,
Thoughts and worries which becomes nightmares.
Ripples that forever echo,
As waves through this endless sea.
Soft waves bringing peace,
Rough waves of uncertain.
Joys and sorrows which come and go,
As we sail in this sea of dreams.

how poetic~ you have a way with words @Bielt -san..

Thank you Pacifist~san~ ^^

*Smile*

good job biel~
rather then sea, I feel the poem is more about life itself in a deeper meaning~

Thank you Sio~<3

Hehe~
In fact it is~ =3

I used sea as a analogy~ (｡>﹏<｡)

what a surprise~
I didn't expect one with an analogy~

Haha~
So how did you interpret it?
I mean~
What you think that each part means? ^^

Part 1
I think, it means. Then we know of something like hidden treasure, we will dream all kind of good in it. Derived by expecting and curiosity, people will go out to seek it.
Part 2
Through, many people go the same path, in both good or bad times, they all end up to be uneasy, in an unknown place or future, yet they can only continue on their goal.

Part 3
They later know theirs wish is just a far away dream, and despair at the reality? Still, the time still goes. With both peaceful or uncertain times. They still walk theirs path of that dream

hmm not sure what I even trying to say...

*giggles*
It's a good view ^^
What I like more of poems is how each person can see different thing on it~

And well it's normal to not know how to say how you view them XD

It was a nice to see yours~ >u<)

good you like it~

but then it's like a useless comment?

see yours? or see you~

The thought I based it on was

That the sea of dreams is all the dreams of humanity, it make our eyes glitter and stir our desires to continue.

The ship in which we sail is ourselves and the trip is our lives.
No one knows where life will take us, nor what we will meet.

And our dreams and worried create ripples that may affect other people, and the sea itself becoming the waves of happiness or unhappiness that we met through our lives~

No~
It isn't a useless comment~
Cause it's wonderful to see things as the others see~

Come to understand a different facet of something that you had never even imagined before~

>u<)

*clap clap clap*
we now got a philosopher! (I think?)

glad you are happy~

Hahaha~
Not a philosopher tho XD

But thank you~
I am always happy to hear your opinions in the poems~
*Smile*

roger that!
*roll*

and give me a theme too~
later on~

Ayee~
*Yawn*
I will~ ^^

Aww~ How touching~

Thank you~ ^^

you two are like dear sisters~ (´• ω •`) ♡

I not even so close with my own real sister lol

Lol~
*Giggles*
Haha~

You will make me embarrassed this way Sio~ >w<)

In this beautiful day,
The sun shine gently.
We are softly rocked by the sea,
As peaceful waves come and go.
I close my eyes enjoying sound of the wind,
Which sings as it blows on our sails.

My theme for you is [The song of the Wind]

oh sound romantic~

Don't it? ^^

jep!

Somehow this theme about wind seems lonely to me >.<

Ara~
Why?

Calling out to the one that they seek.
Hoping the message reaches their ears.
Anticipating their reunion.
Waiting day by day.
As the storm rages on.
Keeping them at bay.

Eh maybe I am just tired >.< finished updating the poem pool \o/