Comments on Profile Post by BlancFrost

>_< thanks. Its more like a muscle I've not used in a long time. Kinda stiff and awkward at first, but it feels good to work out those knots.

I look forward to more poems then~ ah do you want to be added to the calling list? It's pretty much for alerting people when a new theme is up. Otherwise you're welcome to just drop by ^-^

Doing more is usually the key to being more comfortable with something we have done before.

\o/

Sure, always fun to take up a challenge every now and again. ^_^ looking forward to seeing what's next.

*clap clap clap*

the last stanza is a little choppy, but I'm tired lol.
Well, It's been fun for tonight. I need sleep.
forgot how much I liked doing quick poems like that though.

I think it turned out beautifully~

Sleep well o/

Lol doing poems is a good outlet \o/

Astray, off-track, disoriented(?)

^perhaps those for a better title. Just suggestions though. I think you ended the poem well. Sometimes we can just keep going with poems. But you won't know when to stop when that happens. Cutting it off cleanly might be best if you want to stop at a certain point. Otherwise you can always do a part 2 for continuation ^-^

I thought of Astray as well, but the feeling I was trying to go for was more along the lines of ;
"Sometimes, we miss what we are looking for, not because we are not looking, but because we are so focused on what we think we want, we don't see what we need"
Hummmmm. I have something on the tip of my tongue, but I just can't seem to form it.

Tunnel Vision XD

Hopefully that word comes to mind then~