you should be alert if you're with someone else *smile* Don't you ever panic If I'm getting ready to punch you
Hmmm... A bit strange to me, gives the yandere feeling I guess. It's nice, but at the same time quite possessive... It's a strange thought to me.
Wow~ Haha~ I actually found nice~ There are all types of emotions~ And in this case it shows the wish to monopoly~ It kinda feels half a monologue too XD If I were to say, it's just that last part which was a bit not matching the end Maybe the wording? Tho the one before it was great~
idk I'm used to making 3 stanza poems but those 3 seems unfinished or something can't find any good words English vocabulary suffers a lot due to mtls
nvm it I will give a "Do anything you like for a day to @Lovely" ticket to someone who could get the title
D= *Hug Lovely* I know right? I am also used to do a certain patern so it's hard to make something with more stanzas~ I think that changing the "even if they are famous" will already improve it ^^
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