I mean, for one its got its facts horribly wrong. Felicia hardy/black cat is in college when Spiderman's in high school and jean greys a fucking teacher by then.
Two, it feels so fucking forced. I mean whatee the chances that jean grey happened to have awakened her powers on the flat right above where parker lives???
Like wtf? Don't question my intelligence by feeding me the cloptrop
Oh a pet peeve, well I don't read comics so I didn't even know about Felicia, hence the AU is not bothering me. As for Jean, I remember author having a note that there is a reason for her being there(which he didn't uncover yet). My pet peeve is the grammar, dude doesn't know your/you're and when to add s for plurals or 's for properties. I reviewed and said I could proofread, perhaps he didn't see it...
Shame, it's one of the best fics out there but if certain parts annoy you, I get it. I mean I dropped Doulou Dalu coz it has cooldowns and power percentages in a non game elements world, and brackets. If I find some gems I'll let you know, do the same for me bruh.
I think it's a she, the Tell it to The Marines author, honestly I thought it was dropped. But I won't be reading her other works since they have a lot less words and are dropped for real(I only read 100k+ and completed or ongoing fics). Got any other? Fire away.
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