.......the first draft of your novel was really terrible, as tenses were all over the place. Seriously I hope it's gotten better.
Thanks for following me, even though I have no idea why. I hope to be enlightened. Novels are awesome.
..... I searched for ur novel on rrl and found it... Why does it only have a description?? Atleast upload a prologue....
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When I was young, I swallowed a Spider because it was cute and tiny, and now: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/270995712353763329/420214898765725696/Crawling_Spider.gif
Don't triple post on threads. Don't recommend links related to porn. (Names of a doujin are fine) Don't be a dick to anyone....at least not too much.
I actually found your story on RRL, and I immediately found a mistake. 'The strongest' -> 'The Strongest' Not only that, within the first chapter while in fullscreen, it obviously feels like you typed it on your phone. The sentences are very choppy. I, I just can't come up with anything nice to say about it.