Comments on Profile Post by Blitz

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I have no Idea how to write a poem so that's the first try. Tell me if I'm wrong

*Clap clap clap*
I think is great as long you have fun with it~
But if you want to know how it could be better... hmm

well the was about your avatar so you can take 's' away from the 'birds' because you only have one bird, but if you mean more then one it's fine to keep it

'To a place warmth' sound a bit weird for me.
If you want, you could change the wording a bit, like:
"To a warming place" or "To a place with warmth"

for otherwise, I think it's great!
(mine poems is free style anyway XD)

I like your poem I think you just need, to a place *of* warmth

Yeah that was fun. I actually meant of warmth like @Emmyy said but somehow I accidentally dropped the of

I do the same thing too~
just in conversion instead orz....

(p.s. try to read your dare again)

Oh are these dares? Your insect mafia made me laugh sooo hard

Oh wait it was supposed to be on my profile. Oops