*is thinking I should have stealthily read them*
Second to the last one was too short imo. And cliffhangery. I think the context will be more explained when one knows the main story.
The last one, I liked the pacing. Not too fast, not too slow. But the fight scene wasn't satisfying. I'm not fond of one-hit kills through a simple punch so it's prolly a matter of preference.
Fufufu~
Each of those short stories connect to one another, so the answers will be revealed sooner or later.
Thank you for the feed back. It really helps with the writing process.
All the other characters struggle and pushed the brink in desperate battles of life and death. Sometimes they win, sometimes they need back up. The amount of emotion they put into what they do really makes you cheer for them though~
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