Also, I took a quick peek at your series, in B1C5, you say that ,
'There are 5 Elders and 1 Head Elders.'
Which could be rephrased into,
'There are 5 Elders and a single Head Elder.',
since there is only a single 'Head Elder', there is no need to add an 's' to the word 'Elder'.
Another nitpick by me, and again, don't take these to heart as I may be completely wrong in the matter.
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