He's too old. He's 11 years old now. His legs are giving out, he has trouble breathing... he's suffering.
I'm sorry, Alex, but Rexy needs to be put down. We'll get a new dog, I promise.
Cheer up sport. Such is life.
Oh no, don't cry. You know what? Tomorrow, why don't we go buy that toy you wanted? Mhm. I knew you wanted that. Now, let's wipe those tears away. That's my boy.
Okay, first: you used the word "your" in place of you, for instance, it should be, "I would strangle *you* from your screen!" In this case, the asterisks are used to highlight your mistakes, plus you should use "monitor" instead of "screen".
This makes the sentence all-around sound smoother.
Yes, I admit I typed "you" incorrectly, as for the usage of the word "screen," I think it's more suitable in regards to the context where I am ignorant and unaware of what device you're using, what if you're using your phone?
Also, you must not use the word "plus" if you start with "first" in listing. In listing, if one starts with first(ly), it must closely follow with second(ly), third(ly), etc.
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