... That's really weird, y'know? What are the actual chances that he checks the urgent news alert just in time for the game to begin, when he was pretty slow to acknowledge it?
I suppose it doesn't really matter, though. It just gives the sense that the game's beginning centered around him, instead of the wider world.
"It was at the moment he was thrown into a nearby wall with a solid thud, that his prison had expanded by at least double while be battled with the acid."
Whazzit mean? Like, that's when he 'noticed' it had expanded while he was preoccupied with leveling up his skills via slowly dissolving? If so, might wanna stick that word in there somewhere.
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