Comments on Profile Post by Slayerwolfx2

https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/gzqtct/wp_everyone_lost_their_sight_years_ago_in_the/ftkd8ct/?context=3

I know that nobody will see that story, so whatever.

The thread was 17 hours ago and there are over 110 comments on it, sigh

It was interesting, but it felt lacking in some areas. I didn't feel any sense of tragedy or attachment to any of the characters. If there were any names, they felt forgettable. Some minor misuse of words. I did enjoy the beginning third.

To be honest, I was a bit tired after a while so I was looking for a clean way out

Thank you for the feedback~

@AMissingLinguist I think it is because I made the main motivation of the father very faint in the story.

The daughter barely had a presence aside from, she was there as a reason for the father to fight.

I don't know if I will edit the story to fix that problem, probably if I'm bored enough...

*says the guy that spent an hour spamming dots*

Spam is the best for alleviating hunger or boredom.