He slowly become a side-character, though.
That sucks, but I imagine writing a good story about an overpowered character is hard.
He keeps his personality - plus some good development - though
No spoilers, please. I want to see how the story ends up.
I remember that one, it was alright.
Final verdict for this story is 3/5. Story lacks focus.
Interestingly enough, that could change
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