Comments on Profile Post by Naraina

I read it, but where is the scary part?

Not everything needs to be scarrryyyy ....what are your thoughts on that story ?
Mr Pass didn't helped much .

I thought you'll give good reviews ....

Hmm. The details are good for a short story like this. Only problem is that the sequence of questions doesn't allow the story to build any sort of atmosphere or suspense since in this case it is supposed to be horror and those two elements matter greatly.
Good details.
Lacks flow
Overall decent for its length but fails to leave a mark.

Yes yes. Give the review

Oh , thanks .

Oh. Good nice laog (u r beter than pass)

Nobody is better than pass. Pass is best girl

What was good in "Hiss Hiss" review ( he posted this T-T) ?

Idk. But it was probably optimal

LAOG X PASS ship!!??

Lol , where did that come from Hasty ?

From my mind

.......
Right.

It was due to him calling pass best girl

The only 1478 I'm aiming for is lass