the serpent's wing become ragged and it grows legs. it's feet stomp on the shallow lake as it goes closer to calem
Sighing with relief, he realizes he is safe. Getting up, he looks around, sees an opening, and continues into the cave
there is no light, everything is black, but he finds it comforting after being chases for who knows how long
he follows it and finds an exit. He leaves a cave and finds himself staring at a starry night. The air is warm and the sky clear
"he has no idea where he is" - Calem is at his home, finally getting good enough to beat the tutorial of Goldfish Online
But that aside, this is quite good. Reminded me of ancient times, dinosaurs (back to the past?), wilderness, calem = aqua human
Its pretty neat, but I think you could've put more sentences in each post, reducing the number you had to create.
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