Comments on Profile Post by Gandire Alea

  1. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    as he scrambles for the shore, the snake/dragon/ghost bursts out behind him
    Nov 15, 2021
  2. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    the serpent's wing become ragged and it grows legs. it's feet stomp on the shallow lake as it goes closer to calem
    Nov 15, 2021
  3. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    Calem continues to back away and finds himself hitting a wall
    Nov 15, 2021
  4. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    the beast then stops at the edge of the water and roars
    Nov 15, 2021
  5. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    creatures outside of the cave hear that resounding war and fly away
    Nov 15, 2021
  6. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    Calem watches as the creature only continues to roar, but doesn't do anything else
    Nov 15, 2021
  7. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    Sighing with relief, he realizes he is safe. Getting up, he looks around, sees an opening, and continues into the cave
    Nov 15, 2021
  8. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    there is no light, everything is black, but he finds it comforting after being chases for who knows how long
    Nov 15, 2021
  9. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    after walking around for who knows, he eventually feels a fresh breeze.
    Nov 15, 2021
  10. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    he follows it and finds an exit. He leaves a cave and finds himself staring at a starry night. The air is warm and the sky clear
    Nov 15, 2021
  11. Gandire Alea
    Gandire Alea
    he has no idea where he is
    Nov 15, 2021
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  13. One Perfect Veteran
    One Perfect Veteran
    "he has no idea where he is" - Calem is at his home, finally getting good enough to beat the tutorial of Goldfish Online
    Nov 15, 2021
  14. One Perfect Veteran
    One Perfect Veteran
    But that aside, this is quite good. Reminded me of ancient times, dinosaurs (back to the past?), wilderness, calem = aqua human
    Nov 15, 2021
  15. SquadCammander354
    SquadCammander354
    Its pretty neat, but I think you could've put more sentences in each post, reducing the number you had to create.
    Nov 16, 2021
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  17. Lissi
    Lissi
    At first I thought Calem was a typo for "calm" but then realized that didn't make sense XD
    Nov 16, 2021
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