Comments on Profile Post by Readingaddict36

My dear lady @Butterfly ,
It happens so all kinds ,
what my time takes .
Had I given you prefer !
Sweet hour , we would have laughed .
But I just can not manage .
And so I sit here sinnier ,
about what never was .

A bit too literal and sinnieren is the act of thinking deeply about something

*whistle*

Go addy!!

Dear lady @Butterfly
It happens so, I can't get by
my time is taken by all kind.
Rather given you, I'd have.
Sweet hours, we'd have laughed.
But I didn't manage
and so I sit and ponder
about things never been.

Can't really make it sound in english.

Hm.
Dearest lady @Butterfly
It happened, i could not do
My time consumed by others
Rather to speak with you i must have
Sweet minute, we shared
But i could not done
So i sit and play with my mind
about things that could have been

How about this @Readingaddict36

words dont fit that neatly I think. actually writing it in english from the start would be easier, translation rarely works for poems.

True

Ooo PRETTY!!~