i hear you. everything you asked were further plot points that would be addressed in the story. also just to clear up your last paragraph without...
flesh it out more. got it. thanks alot for the feedback
hey thanks , any criticism for me right now is good criticism. i will take what you have said in mind and attempt to rectify and adjust in a...
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TItle- Paragons Summary- Science, magic and isekai walked into a bar... Note: i am only posting this bit because i wish to know if the time skips...
lolol that was alot I am honored that you took the time to read my first piece and your questions will be answered in the future. because I'm new...
thanks alot for your opinion this is my first ever attempt at a novel so all the comments are greatly appreciated <3
Synopsis I WILL JUDGE THE WORLD!!! New Beginning. ‘What where am I. Did I die, was I reincarnated?’ as these thoughts went through Deus’s...
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