Chapter 22: The Adversary This savage and wild creature hid in the darkness near the duo, however it seemed like Turul had noticed his presence...
Chapter 21: Melancholy Road Walking away from the arachnid with a huge history, Mike couldn't help but think about all of the things The...
You know I also really do enjoy those types of things! Especially an OP school arc.
That sounds like something i'd love to read. It's right up my alley for a good book. If you do decide to write something like that please link it...
True, it's hard to get past our perspective because we have almost no clue on what 'future technology' is because we don't know what it is, nor...
Lol almost everyone loves fluff
I've never done that before, I generally accept it. Maybe I should learn from that and look into the feasibility of such things.
I'm not one for romance novels myself, however I do love those moments where it does mean something to you when they finally both realize.
The torture moments? :LOL:
Lol I tried reading that novel but I dropped it near the beginning only because I had so many other things I was reading at the time and i've been...
I do enjoy scenes like that very much, I had read through all of I shall Seal the Heavens and I do have an inkling of the pill master name so I'd...
What part of a novel really makes you excited or happy? If needed please give a specific novel in which you found a part of something happening in...
Reading it over at Webnovel I have found some problems that I think should be addressed. First off please try to space out the paragraphs/lines...
I had read both chapters of your book so far. Although it has an amazing premise and a good start I did notice some slight grammatical issues, but...
I just one day made this username up like over 3 years ago and ever since it's been my main staple besides my nickname of Hera (Which is the one I...
Chapter 20: Peaceful Days These eggs slowly crawled and moved about, signifying that they were close to hatching after their mother's death. As...
Chapter 19: Below the Depths The taste and smell of salt was too strong even by Mike's modern standards. It was like licking a giant pile of salt...
Chapter 18: A Change in Scenery With the high wind speeds that rocketed the area in a screeching metal sound, Mike no longer had to worry about...
Chapter 17: The Chasing Sun Looking at the information on this Queen, Mike wasn't that surprised by it. Any creature with a colony this large and...
Chapter 16: Lightning Monarchs The trek forward never got easier with only more lightning falling as they moved toward hopefully somewhere to...
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