Spoiler 《BL》A Guide for Raising a Natural Enemy

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  1. Iamfeiii

    Iamfeiii Well-Known Member

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    So I’ve successfully finished the entire novel. So it’s cute overall, no heavy subjects, easy to digest.

    He used to live in the real world, Earth, in a forested area as a wild hamster. Until one day he happen to eat a red orb and gained memory and knowledge. Hence he decided to become a spiritual being in order to become a human (so that he could earn money and eat whatever he like). Because of his oddness, he was outcast by his own kind hence he seek out into the city (either pet shop or someone’s house). He would also pretend to die once he stayed for about a year n half so that the owners would dispose him off.

    Then one day, while he was wandering around after he got ‘disposed’ he saw the thunder clouds that he was waiting for (something about only after he endure the thunder calamity, then will he evolve into a human. But after the last of the 9 strikes, he got transferred into the forested area in another dimension/ world. And he realised that he did not completely transform into a human but attained a human body with hamster ears and tail.

    Then in the forest, while trying to survive, he met the snake ML who was injured after he self exploded himself in a battle in another planet. Losing his beast core, he have become a fallen beast, who is known to lose his conscious after some time and start attacking his own people.

    Our snake lead, Edgar (Yes that’s the translated name), saw our hamster lead, Shushu, and wanted to protect him because he had the looks of a beta orc (that planet consist of orc aka beast that can turned into human or beast completely, and beta orc (human beasts that cannot fully transform into neither beast nor human, usually remain in the form as a human with some beast features like animal ears and tails).

    It was instilled in all orcs that beta orcs must be protected and pampered as they are precious in numbers. So he was puzzled why shushu was out in the forest and not in the city.

    Then after a whole series of helping one another, shushu decided to help Edgar gain attainment and ‘become a human again’, so that he need not interact with a snake. Soon, they was approached by a group of orc army that eventually transported them to their city on that planet. There, Edgar met his beta-Father’s (female/birth father) friend and so he revealed to him that he had met an accident blah blah and end up as a fallen beast. So he agreed to help him inform Edgar’s parents (the king n queen in the biggest planet which was a distance away from that current planet they are on). One day, the thunder calamity came for Edgar, thinking that it’s going to hurt shushu, he grabbed shushu with his tail n ran away onto a deserted area but the thunder continued to follow them. Soon the thunder can raining down on both of them (Edgar received most of it though), and he finally became a human (orc) again with a beast core within him.

    That’s all for now because it’s hard to type on the phone. I’ll update by arcs when I get to my laptop. ;)

    P.s. about the two *ehem*, there’s one part where shushu turned into a hamster while he slept/faint(?) and edgar placed him on his chest while he napped. Then when shushu woke up, he was like wtf and decided to run south... and... bump into the erected... xD nothing happened after that unfortunately, YET. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
     
  2. Shizun

    Shizun 《Jack of all trades》《Artist/Author》《Dao of BLedia》

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    For a moment i misread snu snu :blobastonished:
     
  3. Ease

    Ease 『Lone butterfly』『Freeloader』

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    Please continue with the spoilers, God/dess (シ_ _)シ
     
  4. Iamfeiii

    Iamfeiii Well-Known Member

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    Okay, my bad, I completely forgotten about updating this.

    Back as an Orc:
    - While Edgar gained his beast core once again, the commotion was found out by the planet's mayor(?), Justin. He was mad at Jinx who used the cannons to dispel the clouds previously, but when he found out that it was "to help the Prince in his training", he immediately became supportive of it (because if the Prince succeeds, it would make more people notice his planet).
    - Edgar then brought Shushu back to the apartment to rest while mayor Justin (who conveniently recorded the whole "training" decided to post the video on the net. It was at this point that the mayor found out (because the planets were very far apart that news would take 3 days to reach them) that in the main planet that the royals lived, there's rumors that the Prince had turned into a fallen beast and had raped a beta orc.
    - the mayor then approach the Prince once again to inform him. Edgar then asked to use the military line to contact his family.

    Rumors dispelled:
    - the royal family kept their silence on those rumors but was eventually forced by the citizens to make a statement
    - just when the public statement started, the guards informed that a military video call was made
    - the video call went through and was broadcast to the public who was watching
    - in that call, Edgar explained that he had been on (let's call it planet J) all these while and it's impossible for him to have harm anyone nor did he become a fallen beast (< he lied about this part because fallen beasts are considered evil and unrecoverable)
    - he also promised that he would be back on the main planet to give a proper explanation to the public.

    Flying back to main planet:
    - and so both Edgar, Shushu and the selected group of army (to protect their safety) began their journey to the main planet in a run-down container spaceship
    - Shushu then randomly mentioned that he thought spaceships had windows and that he would be able to see the galaxy etc
    - being the obedient, wifey-is-everything ML, he agreed with Shushu's opinion
    - just then, a pirate spaceship decided to rob them
    - Edgar decided to use his newly attained powers on them to see how it works
    - Edgar successfully took over the "new" spaceship and ordered the crew to scrub the interior clean before he brought Shushu onboard.
    - just then, another group of pirates spaceship (this one is a more well-known group of pirates) decided to rob them
    - and thus Edgar got a spaceship upgrade again (this time with big windows and everything)
    - and few days later, the main planet's military spaceship found Edgar's gang and escorted them back
     
  5. Iamfeiii

    Iamfeiii Well-Known Member

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    Back at main planet:
    - with all the rumors dispelled, life is back to normal
    - Edgar had to work for the military
    - after discussion with Shushu, the hamster agreed to attend classes at the royal school (but he did not know that the classes he would be attending was a bridal class aka only beta orc who plan on getting married would attend)
    - the class basically involves life science (how to appease an orc), cooking (what food does orcs prefer) etc
    - when shushu finally realized what those classes are for, he got pissed and confronted Edgar.
    - and, Edgar used that opportunity to confess to Shushu
    - Shushu was shock and explained to Edgar that he is not a beta-orc, that he could also transform into a beast (although it's a hamster)
    - Edgar insist that he would still love shushu despite that (he didn't really believe it)
    - shushu then decided that it's best if he broke his power's limit so that he could full transform into a beast or a human (at this point, he was in a human with hamster ears form aka beta orc form)
    - finally, with the help of a virtual reality device and a program to help overcome his fear for snakes, shushu finally broke his power limits
    - shushu then showed Edgar that he was indeed an orc and even transformed into a hamster in front of him
    - although Edgar was shock, but he was more surprised that when shushu turned back into his human form, he got hard over shushu (because shushu's clothes were taken off when he transformed earlier)
    - Edgar felt conflicted but after sorting out his mind, he was sure that he was still in love with shushu no matter what
    - what scared Edgar most was that he couldn't believe he just sent shushu, an orc, to a bridal class that is filled with beta-orcs
    - then, the royal family decided to hold a dinner party to formally introduce shushu as the distant relative's child of the queen (ML's beta-mama/mom)

    okay, i'll end here first. enjoy~
     
  6. HesheFell

    HesheFell [Out of Retirement] [Looking for Recs Everywhere]

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    Thank you! I've been watching this thread for the longest time in hopes someone would continue spoiling.
     
  7. Iamfeiii

    Iamfeiii Well-Known Member

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    I'll do the updates this way to make the scrolling easier.
    - so as they prepared for the party, Edgar decided to bring shushu to shop for some proper attire
    - Edgar became extremely jealous when the sales person approached shushu, so he ended up having a resentful expression and purposely chose a plain-looking suit for shushu (simply because he didn't want shushu to appear too attractive in front of others)
    - the sales staffs were like "Prince Edgar must be forced to get along with shushu, look at how reluctant he is" and Edgar's beta mama, Ian, reprimanded Edgar because of how "cold-hearted" he was towards shushu xD
    - in the meantime, it was discovered that the best buddy of the King (Chris) was the culprit who damaged Edgar's mechanical space suit (?) back then and indirectly caused Edgar to become a fallen beast. That buddy however, ended up committing suicide without explaining why he did it, and so, their own lead to the real culprit was gone.
    - after that topic was over, Edgar decided to tell his parents that his beast pearl was gone

    All orcs and beta-orcs have only one in their lifetime. (It's easier to understand if u think it as the orc's pearl contains sperm, beta orc's pearl contains the egg) When an orc and beta orc exchanges the pearl with one another, the orc's pearl would then allow a beta-orc to become pregnant with his children, which also means that the beta orc can't get pregnant to other orc's child no matter what. Hence the pearl is considered to be very sacred and not to be exchanged unless they are married to one another. In the case where two same-gender orcs/beta-orcs exchange the pearls, the pearl would automatically be destroyed within 2-3 days within their bodies.
    > To summarize, an orc without his pearl is considered to be impotent.

    - Ian and Chris was pissed (at the culprit) and sad to know that their son had lost his beast pearl. Ian asked Edgar what he was planning to do about Shushu now that he cant give shushu a complete life, and he's like "I'll respect shushu's decision no matter what."
    - then the conversation ended with Ian and Chris thinking about how they should deal with the fact that the royal family would not have any descendants anymore.
    - the truth is, Edgar lied, he still have his beast pearl.
    - Edgar went to find Shushu, and gave Shushu his beast pearl as he knew in his heart that he would not want anyone else to have it
    - Shushu agreed to keepsake for Edgar in his cheek pouch because "Edgar doesn't seem to have a safe place to keep the pearl".

    [Info about Shushu's cheek pouch: it works like a 4th dimension where he can keep literally anything inside it. Of course, Shushu mainly uses it to keep food.]

    - on that night, when shushu went to bed, he thought of the pearl that Edgar gave him, so he took it out and played with it for awhile, and then swirled it around his mouth, and suddenly, it vanished.
    - shushu tried to use his powers to scan for that pearl inside his body but there was no trace of it.
    - so shushu decided to use the traditional method - eat and poop - to get it out.
    - after finishing all his "rations" inside his cheek pouch, he decided to order supper
    - Edgar found out about it and asked shushu if he want to increase his meal portion for every meal from now on, lol.
    - shushu feeling guilty said no and went to do his "business"
    - there was still nothing in sight, but this time, shushu scanned his stomach and realized a grey pouch-like thingy inside him.
    - shushu didn't really know what to do about it, so he decided to wait and see if anything happens next.

    P.S: No one picking up this novel yet???? It's such a nice novel... ˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚
     
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  8. Shizun

    Shizun 《Jack of all trades》《Artist/Author》《Dao of BLedia》

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    luckily i finished eating my food....
     
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    Are you considering picking it up? After reborn hamster maybe?? ~~ :blobwoah::blobwoah:
     
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    I hope we all know what that grey pouch thing inside Shushu’s stomach is xD
     
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    :3 what a cute novel
     
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    Iamfeiii Well-Known Member

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    There’s still a long way to go for reborn hamster, and spmw would probably take me another 4-7 months to complete(?). So I’m not planning on translating another novel anytime soon as much as I want. :(

    Maybe someone could make a pickup post for this novel?? I’ll post it tonight if anyone hasn’t done that. Hopefully a poor soul falls into the BL black hole.
     
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    He's finally pregnant?! :blobsmilehappyeyes:
     
  14. Ease

    Ease 『Lone butterfly』『Freeloader』

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    Could the pouch inside his stomach is actually a womb?:blobsmirk:
    Do MC has a beast pearl for exchange tho?
     
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    The *ehem* only happened after the wedding. Be patient... xD
    Bingo! But nope, our shushu doesn’t have a beast pearl as he’s from the Earth not the ML’s universe. Even his beast core is considered a different type from an orc’s beast core: Main difference - shushu’s core can be regenerated, a normal orc’s core can’t. The core that Edgar “regained” was actually the same as shushu’s.
     
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    Ease 『Lone butterfly』『Freeloader』

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    What does regenerate entails? It can form anew after loss? When Edgar gave his to ShuShu, did he get another one?
    And how does pregnancy works? ShuShu need to place Edgar's pearl inside his womb-pouch? ⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄ When the pearl disappeared, did it actually goes into the pouch?
     
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    Regenerate = even if it explodes and was destroyed (like what happened to Edgar), with the cultivation method that shushu taught, orcs are able to generate another “core” just like edgar and shushu.
    The downside would be that it’s only easier for orcs with higher capabilities (I.e Edgar), for normal orcs, they may end up cultivating for years before they can get another “core” like Edgar.

    In every orc, there’s a core and a pearl.
    Core = power , pearl = ability for childbirth
    Core cannot be removed, it can only be destroyed. However, a pearl can be removed from its owner’s body only for a short period or time, otherwise it will self-destruct itself if it’s not in the owner’s or absorb another opposite gender’s body.
    (I hope I make sense, I’m like high on coffee now. Lol)

    Shushu’s pouch is like a dimension, not his actual mouth. So when shushu swirled Edgar’s pearl in his own mouth, it got absorbed into his body and turned into a womb aka grey pouch.
     
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    alexfilia Bromance & Fluff <3

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    what are the reactions from ShuShu's pregnancy?